MANAN FF-HATE TO HATE YOU[part 5pg 8]

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Posted: 9 years ago
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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">hii guys...i am a new member of this forum...i am a big manan fan...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">guys as u all know that parth has left the show nd we all r getting crappy episodes so i want to start a new ff so that i can again relive those blissful and pure manan moments...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">guys this ff will have some dark shades nd also manik's character will be a bit dark...bt dnt wrry nandini hai na...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3"> <font color="#0000cc"> </font></font><font color="#0000cc">PROLOGUE</font>
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">MANIK: iss commoner ke liye aap mujhe chor ker chali gayi thi na..??bht pyaar karti ho na iss larki se..??iss aanath larki ke liye aap apne pati r bete ko chor ke chali gayi..ek baar bhi apne mere bare main nhi socha ki apke bina main kase rtahunga...</font>
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">NYONIKA:beta tum galat samaj rahe ho..tumhe kuch nhi pata...tumhare dad ne tumhe hamesa jhut bola h beta...tum galat...</font>
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">MANIK:JUST SHUT UP...dnt u dare speak against my dad...galat samajna ...apne galtiyo ko chupana band kijiye...</font>
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">NANDINI:manik listen to me...meethi ma sach kah rhi h...unki majboori thi ...tm mujhe trust krte ho na ..??u love me na...ekbar meri taraf dekho ...ek baar sunn lo meri baat ...</font>
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">MANIK:pyaar ..love ..r tumhare liye..??my foot...i just hate u nandini...i just hate u...tumhari wajeh se maine apna pura bachpan maa ke bina bitaya h...pura childhood i have carved for love...maine tumse koi pyaar vyaar nhi kia...yeh shaadi ..yeh sirf sirf badla lene ke liye kia tha main...sirf revenge...</font>
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">NANDINI:manik dkho mujhe pata h ki tum sb gusse main bol rahe ho...i know that u love me...tum mere bina nhi rah sakte...i m ur shining star..hai na manik..maink meri taraf dekho ..just look into my eyes..manik listen to me..</font>
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">NYONIKA:manik tm asa nhi kr skte...tm mera gussa kisi aur pe nhi nikal sakte...tum mujhse badla lene ke liye kisi aur ki life nhi barbad kr skte ..hai na manik..??</font>
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">MANIK:seriously nyonika tumhe abhi tk samaj nhi aya...mujhe bht acche se pta h ki tumhari jaan is larki main basti h..i knw u cant see her in pain ..right..??now i ll make sure ki i make her life hell...welcome to hell nandini...yaha tumhe sb kch milega sivaye care ar love ke...</font>
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">NANDINI:manik u cant be serious na manik..??..stop joking manik...tm asa nhi kr sakte...nhi kr skte tm asa[holding his collar]...tm mere saat asa kse kar skte ho...i blindly trusted u ...</font>
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">MANIK:[jerks her away] ...u knw wat u deserve all this...tumne jo mere saat kia uske baadle yeh to bht choti keemat h...just wait nd wait...tumhe to abhi bht bara price pay krna h...so get ready miss uff sry sry sry...MRS NANDINI MANIK MALHOTRA..</font>
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">wit this he walks away leaving behind a broken nandini nd neonika..</font>
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i know guys its a bit boring bt plz atlst give me a chance to prove myself...plz ignore the mistakes...nd plz give ur views on this...if u guys dnt like this also plz share ur inputs...i would surely take ur inputs and try to make this better...i dnt knw anyone in this forum..plz buddy me guys...nd ya plz suggest me a name for my ff na...its bit boring..
thank u..
lots of love...
moitrisha...


INDEX

PART-1 - page 2
PART-2 - page 3
PART-3 - page 5
PART-4 - page 6

PART-5 - page 8
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Posted: 9 years ago
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guys i know some of u r bit confused with my storyline so i hope this can help u guys..
CHARACTER SKETCH

MANIK MALHOTRA:the hotty...he is a greek god..girls can do anything to be with him..he is a big cassinova...short-tempered...he is one of the richest businessman of mumbai...he was a stone hearted person until he meet nandini...he was madly in love with her until he met her meethi ma or his own mom...he considers nandini the reason her mom left him...now he hates nandini and married her because he wanted to take revenge from her and his mother nyonika.

NANDINI:she is an orphan but a fun loving,bubbly girl...beauty with brains...she used to work in manik's company nd fell in love with him...but things took 360 degree turn when she got to know that her meethi ma is manik's mom and manik just loved and married her because he wanted to take revenge...she unconditionally loves her meethi ma or nyonika..


NYONIKA MALHOTRA:she is a women for whom love is everything...she doesnt care about money of fave..her self-respect and dignity is most important for her...she left malhotra mansion because she got to know a bitter truth about her life...she left her son not because she dont love him but because she knew that manik cant face the hardship of life nd he can get a comfortable life in malhotra mansion only...she went to stay with her best friend but she passed away within 2 months due to cancer leaving a 2 year old nandini with her...nandini was only the reason of nyonika's survival.

FAB 5 ND NAVYA are same as that of the show...actually i want to show manan love story so i want to focus on them only but ya i would cabini nd manbir bond because i really miss them in the show..nd cabir is not gay in this story and he is a mutual friend of manan...
thats all ..
loads of love ..
moitrisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome prologue👍🏼
wow noyonika is a positive character
That's interesting😆
So Manik had a dark past🥺
and thinks Nandini is responsible 😲
Koi na nandini will heal him 🥳
As they say "Nafrat ko Nafrat nahi sirf Pyaar Mita sakta hai"
Will be waiting
come soon 🤗
and THANKs for keeping alive manan through ur ff😳
as for the timing we have can't see ❤️manan❤️ in the show but
thaks alot it means alot to me😃 and many of us
love
Ritika

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Posted: 9 years ago
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looks interesting...plz cont soon
pm me also

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wishing you all the best for ur ff ...
Plot looks very interesting Nd promising ...
Looking forward to read this one :)))
Let me know when you update :)))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept .I waiting for next part.continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing concept...
sounds interesting...
looking forward to the story to progress...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey moitrisha. ... yur name sounds so bengali. r u?
by the way welcome to the manan family.
keep it up.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey
welcome to the forum
your story seems interesting
continue soon
wishing u all the best for ur story
---SIMRA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ur story seems very intresting... Don't be nervous and write the way ur heart directs u ... The prolong is really nice ... U portraited every character very well ... The love nyonika's character.. I think manik dad is related with the bitter truth ... Hope manik gets to know everything... Am damn sure as he loves nandu he can't hurt her for long... Sweetheart awesome starting ... Pm if possible I have sent u buddy request ... May Allah bless u...with lots of love and hugs and ya welcome to the family
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