MANAN FF-HATE TO HATE YOU[part 5pg 8] - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Nice but pls nandu KO weak mat dikhana pls use bold dikhana manik use overpower nhi Karna chahiye nandu ka bhi koi close friend hona chahiye jisse manik jealous ho. Manik KO nandu me accha sabak sikhana chahiye.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Interesting concept
Update the part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
guys this part is completely manik's pov..hope u guys like it...
PART-1

Naina lageeyaan baarishan te sukhe sukhe sapne vi pijj gaye...
naina laageyan baarishan rove palkein de hone vich neend meri...
naina laageyan baarishan hangi digne chot lage dil te..
naina laageyaan baarishan ruth birha de badla di chaa gayi...

MANIK was sitting in the bar..he was completely drunk...most of the bottles were emptied and they were either broken or shattered...blood was oozing out from his hands...his eyes were blood red and swoolen ...tears were continuously flowing from his eyes...
the night which could be the most beautiful and magical night of his life turned out to be the most dreadful nightmare for which he himself was responsible...

kaali kaali khaali raaton se..
hone lagi hai dosti..
khoya khoya in raho mein..
ab mera kuch bhi nahi..

NANDINI'S words were constanly echoing in his ears...
''I LOVE YOU MANIK''...''i will..i will...I WILL ALWAYS SHINE FOR U''...''I WILL BE ALWAYS THERE FOR U TO LIGHT UP UR DARKNESS''..

har pal har lamha..
main kase sahta rahta hun..
har pal har lamha..main khudh se yeh kehta rahta hunn..

manik was not able to handle all this...he started shouting..''i hate u ...i just hate u...nandini..i hate...i hate to...I HATE TO LOVE U...I LOVE U ...nan...nandini...''...and with that he dozed off to sleep...

guys i know this part is a bit boring as no manan scene but for sure next part will be full of manan...till then keep liking and commenting...thanku for showing show much love to my ff...u guys r really very sweet..

loads of love
moitrisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
awesome update...
loving this side of the story...
neyonika is positive...
is meethi ma biological mom of manik and neyonika nandu's...
please clear it up a bit for me...
can't wait to read more and know about manan's life...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
PART-2
Nandini was sitting inside a dark room..she was looking into a photo of hers and manik..she was sitting on the floor expressionlessly...she was not getting anything what was happening in her life..some hours before she was the happiest person of this world but now all her dreams,hopes ,love everything is shattered..

ek khoya khoya chand tha jo tha khafa khafa..
ek toota toota khawab tha jo tujhse tha jura..
ek aadhi aadhi aas thi jo puri ho gyi...
tum mil gaye to jane kiu ye doori ho gyi...

nandini was not able to believe that the person who could not see a single tear in her eyes is the reason behind her broken heart...

piya lage na...jiya laage na..
tere bina ...tere bina...


FLASHBACK

knock..knock...

MANIK: COME IN..
GIRL:your coffee..
MANIK:keep it..
the girl keeps the coffee on the table and starts to leave when suddenly manik cathes her hand and pulls her and she lands up on manik's lap..
MANIK;how can u just leave like that..??u know na i like sweet coffee..[ tucking her hair strands behind her ears]
GIRL:but u r not allowed to have sugar..
MANIK:when did i tell i need sugar..??..i m having my own brand of sweetner who is just sitting in my lap...
saying this he approached towards her lips..he was constantly having his signature smirk in his face..she was getting weak..he was well aware of the effect he has on her..their lips were just about to touch when the girl puched him and got up to leave..
MANIK:NANDINI...
mistakenly he hit the table and the coffee fell on nandini's hand...he was panicked as if the burn is in his hand...it was a very minor burn so nandini was trying to say that she is fine...but manik was paying no heed towards her talk..his main focus was that his love is in pain...
MANIK:u just sit here ..i will just get the first aid box..
NANDINI:[catches his hand and stops him]i m fine..bilkul dard nhi ho raha h...i dnt want medicine..
MANIK;u just shut up and sit down...itna zada burn h...main bus abhi oilment laga deta hun...nd painkiller le lena dard sb chala jaega..
NANDINI;MANIK U KNOW NA MUJHE SIRF EK MEDICINE HI THIK KR SKTA H...
MANIK;r wo kya h..??
nandini gets up from her chair and move towards manik with a seductive smile...she gently slid her hands on manik's neck and started to tress his lips with her fingers...manik just closed his eyes in anticipation...their lips were just inches apart...but just when nandini was about to kiss..she backed off..her face was completely flushed..
MANIK:tumse na ho paega...
NANDINI:ho ga na ...
MANIK:ohh..okk then...
nandini again started to move her lips towards him but she just pecked his cheeks and ran away..leaving a smirk on manik's face...

PRESENT


nandini's train of thoughts were broken by nyonika's continuous banging on the door..
NYONIKA:ABETA FOR GOD SAKE OPEN THE DOOR...TUM THIK HO NA BETA ..PLZ OPEN THE DOOR...
NANDINI:please mujhe akela chor dijiye...

guys it was a lamba wala update ...so bht sare comments r likes toh banta h...
NOTE; nyonika is only nandini's meethi ma...she is manik's biological mother...
loads of love..
moitrisha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
nice update...update next part soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Read your story in one go...
Nyc concept...
Waiting for next chaptet eagerly...
Update soon...
And make it bold...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
nyc update
love it
love the past track hw manik to take care of simple thing of nandu
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
now what next i went to see agr ek dusre seh itnah love toh yeh doori kuh

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