MaNan FF ||Our Chance To Love:COMPLETED|| - Page 8

Originally posted by: fan145

Damn !!!!! How did i miss this brilliant work ...its just awesome ..like seriously ..i loved how u had described their journey frm the beging and trust me the written elegance is much much more beautiful than wat they had showed and coming to manik and his *run away* ...this guy is cray for surw ..gadha shud really suffer (a little) for this act and nandini is love man ..such head strong girl ..i am seriously waiting for the day when she punch his face once more ...

Updat faster ..imma waiting man ,,,,u stopped at cliff hanger...not at all fair kay ..so update faster

You missed it because you just did not have time reading my work🥱
MaNan is my favourite couple and I love them..I just love everything about them so how can I just wirte a FF without giving glimpse to their journey...And trust me how much you enjoyed reading them I love it even more while writing...😳😳😳
It gave me hell lot of feels...
And MAnik is a gadha...he ran away but I am sure you will enjoy him coming back...Because what I have planned for them is that shade of Manik we all enjoy😆😆
I always want women to be strong headed...Like I girl crush them even more...So just wait and watchh...
Dude I am writing a FF and I need people to be intrigued with it...Ofcourse I will stop and cliffhanger and make you all curious...DUh
I wish I could just write this whole day but then exams...But I promise updates will be faster atleast now...My promise is somewhat like of Manik okay🤣

Originally posted by: Calina7

Oh!!! Helll!!!!

I read it in one go! And could not control my emotions, both joy and cry!

This was just simply sooo damn amazing and emotional and interesting!!!

Every bit of the story has been written so well by you that I can certainly visualise it!!!

Loved every single thing you wrote❤️

To tell the fact I can't get specific words to tell how beautiful your writing is!!!

Please update soon!!

And pm me also!!

Loved it!!

Loved every bit of what I read!

OH my my..SO much taaarif...*Hugs you tightly*
I know right...Even I was crying , laughing while writing it..
And hey did you just say you could visualise it...#MissionAccomplished😃😃😃
FInd the words please...I need to know how my wiritng is😆😆
Pm well about that I just told the promblem but trust me after some days I will pm..HUmesha😳
And so much of Thankoos...Like the last time I got so much of compliment was long long time back...🥱🥱

Originally posted by: NushIsh

You really know how to keep the intrigue alive.

So the more I read I kind of feel that Ansh is not the Manan baby. Actually feel like something happened to Navya because if Ansh was Harshad's and he wasn't taking care of the baby Mukti wouldn't be marrying him. I think too much.

Anyways I really like this bond between Cabir and Nandini.

And Manik has been in India and not come to Nandini. He better have a better excuse and something more to say than sorry.

Love it S I can't wait to read more.

Duh..I am a writer ..I will have to increase the curiousity or you people might just get bored...
Ansh...you still have to figure our who is the father...It's a long mystery😆
Yes indeed you think a lot...But then a saggitarius you be so I take that...
I know right such an ass...And guess where he was all the while...Pune🤣
Hope you get the irony😆😆
And I quite like the new name you have christened me Mommaa
Also Thankyousss..
Managing you to comment on my work is a great accomplishment in itself...and such long comments...HAyee

Originally posted by: apps33

Mahhn... I just read the two parts and I juat couldnt help my tears from flowing...

It was absolutely incredible...

Brilliant work dear... Hatts off...

I really loved it...

I still cant believe how manik could do that...

Pior nandu...

I really m feeling bad for her

And now after this shocking news... MANIK on the hospital bed... And nandu to operate him

I really dnt know how and what to react...

All I can say is... I will be so damn eagerly waiting for you to cont

Please update soonish

And if possible please please pm me...

LOVE

Apurva

HI Apurva
Thank you so much for liking it and taking time to comment...Really means a lot and encourages me a lot...

Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

wondering what aliya is planing for mukti's weeding...

manik got into an accident...worried...hope nandu treats him and gets better soon...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Thank you and stay tuned/...Loads of mystery...emotiona...fun and love planned up

Originally posted by: sunset17

Read both the parts together.. It's so awesome..

Loved it...update soon

Thanks

Originally posted by: nymphadoratonks

I can't wait to read the next chapter!! Please update as quick as light! _/\_

Thank you...Will try my best

Originally posted by: soothu

I am mad at him. Yes, I love him, but that does not change the fact that I hate him for taking me for granted. And I hate him even more for making me realize that he is out there, somewhere safe and sound, but does not have the guts to come back to me. I hate him for making me so helpless and hopeless at the same time. I hate him."

u nailed it...👏👏👏

nandus mind ,,u described it well..the pain..her hatred ..love😳😳😳

but manik..how could he 😡😡

wow,,he remembers nandu,,,once in a month...der is a mail

like seriously...i hate u manik for making us(nandu andme) cry

Awww...I love it so much...When people fangirl over my writing...😳
Don't hate my MAnik please...You might regret it later...And Nandini will set him straight later for leaving her...Trust me on that

Originally posted by: readerforever

heyyy

just came across ur ff..

superb it is...

nandinis diary in the begining was so damn good...

its very intresting

nandinis emotions are so beatifully penned and waiting to read maniks side of the story...

manik is back after five years

but one quest ...what about navya ???

anshh is her kid right or manans???

anyways do continue real soon ...

excited for next part..😳

Thank you so much...So many questions...Good job...Let me pat myself...
Kepp intrigued and I will update as soon as possible...😳

Originally posted by: thamannamanan

very nice update

mukti getting married to harshad ?????????????????????????????????

manik accident??????????????????????????????

Aliya n kabeer still close to nandini ?????????????????????????????????

OMFGGG...
So many questions...😆
Thanks

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0

coz my Baccha is back.

I find it difficult to read it coz somewhere I'm still wishing for Manik to com back and take her away...for hamesha this time.

sorry I got carried away. This Manik needs to be slapped foremost. And then hugged.

Yes...I wish I could shout like this for reall tooo...But anyways Thanks

Originally posted by: mehek.kwatra97

Nyc update...

Finally next chapter me manik aur nandini ka face off...

Waiting for next chaptet eagerly...

Update soon...

Thanks

Originally posted by: kitkat5756

Baiby awesome story line...seriously loved ur story ... Just red ur two chapters ...wow... It's reflected through ur stories that u love to write...looking really forward for ur updates...lots of twists and turns are coming that's for sure... Don't make nandu easily forgive manik he should be punished for what he did... Hmmm love cabir-nandini duo and ansh that's still a mystery if he is navya's child or nandini's... If possible can u include me in ur pm list

Awww thank you so much...BUt I don't love wirintg...ONly when I am overwhlemed with emotions and feelings...I just cant stop😳
There is some problem with pms but I will figure that out soon...
Ansh is a real mystery😆

Originally posted by: LIKEDMG

Shreya..thanks for PM...it is beautiful...i m smiling n crying both...waiting..

could u please add index in front page...😃

Thank you...I guess we have an index...The second post it is...JUst check

Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa

I asked somebody to put up the index. Guess they didn't do it. 🥱
Also, since you're posting, ask that somebody to send the material to you😆

We do have an index dude...What are you saying...
Just that I don't know how to hyperlink...
By the way you mind to send the material to me...
Somebody has college abhi toh😆

Wait you're a newbie you can't hyperlink LOL
OH! Yes, wait up.

Here goes the third update...
Give me reviews, updates and tell me how you feel about it
Criticisms are more than welcome...
Also tell me your wishes, demands too


Flood in the likes and comments...
Motivate me and my feels😆

I loveee this story S! Great update!
Are you studying btw? All the best re :*

That was too good

Happiness is knowing that your wish came true! I guess I should beg you daily for the updates, eh? Anyway Meghna is a bitch and Nandini is as always forced and ansh is a sweetheart! You gave us 2 cabirs and I couldn't have asked for more!
. I would maintain my professionalism and just do what I was supposed to do.----- my favourite line from the beautiful chapter but only because it has the word professionalism. You see professionalism and Manan have a very long history 😆
I am a very emotional being and would definitely rant once again for demanding Nandini's happiness but this one line made me crack up do hard I forgot about my complains. 😃
I love you and your work! Continue soon!

oh ..god ...
this is beyond words ...
this is the best ...yeah one of the best story I Hv ever read !!
I read so many novels ...
bt u just took my heart away with this piece of work ...
india forums par mein bhut kam stories padti hn ...
bt thank god I came across this ...
u know how fab you write ...
I seriously don't have words ...
emotions of nandini ...beautiful ...
u know I have my maths exam tommorow ...and I was just checking my phone and I came across your story ...
and I can't help it .. to read it in one go ...
I know these two hours were like very important for me to study ...
bt I can't help ...
and I didn't even regret it ...
coz its worth it ...

u are such an amazing writer ..
the way you pen down things ...its so complete and awesome ...
and you know what ...
this is the first work I hv read in which ...
I was crying and at the same time I was smiling ...

and one more thing ...
I hv never read ...itna amazing prologue ...
mtlb prologue to was totally lyk damn ...
I mean it was KILLER ...

LYK THE BEST EVER PROLOGUE ...

story is going great ...
if possible then do pm me for further updates ...
otherwise I hv to stalk you ;)

now bye
continue soon
tc
lots of love
akanksha!!