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Damn !!!!! How did i miss this brilliant work ...its just awesome ..like seriously ..i loved how u had described their journey frm the beging and trust me the written elegance is much much more beautiful than wat they had showed and coming to manik and his *run away* ...this guy is cray for surw ..gadha shud really suffer (a little) for this act and nandini is love man ..such head strong girl ..i am seriously waiting for the day when she punch his face once more ...

Hellloo
I am an ass and I know it...

I have managed to send pms to some people and IF is a bigger ass than me because it only allowed me send 10 pms because I have less than 25 posts...

So the ones whom I sent enjoy it and the ones who did not get it so sorry about it ...
Also I will update chapter 3 today...Was supposed to do it yesterday only but then some errors and things just did not work out...

Sorry again and Thank you everyone for being so patient with me

Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz

it's really interesting and an awesome try...will love to read more and more..update soon and yeah pm me :)

Thank you so much...I will love to write more..Also about the pms I am still trying to work things out..But exams just dont help

Originally posted by: uma88

U just made us recall all the beautiful memories of manan. Loved it. Continue soon.

Ofcourse the journey has been one worth remembering and when I was writing it..OH god so much of feels and tears too..I miss them so bad..Thank you...I will try my best

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0

Tha diary entry is so beautiful. I freaking loved it. The blushes, stares, butterflies..everything expressed so well and like a girl in love.

Looking forward. Update soon dear!

IKR
Initally I did not have any plan of the diary but then I thought why not show the journey first and then take you all in my world of imagination...How cool am I😆
I am in love and you might know it well by now😳
And thank you...Managing to keep you intrigued is an accomplishment in itself

Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa

Well, well, well, a very interesting story I see!
Please post the prologue soon!
The diary entry was beautiful. I am proud of you. ;

Yes indeed.😆
I make you proud😲...I am happy that I do
But a big hug and thanks to you for making my work readable..Especailly after all the mood swings and tantrums I throw you😳
I am even more proud of you for changing my work into such beautfiul piece😳

Originally posted by: CooChi

Woah !
The prologue killed me! ❤️

Res.

🤣
Who else but you to give such a lame comment🤔

Originally posted by: Dhariya_

Damn...!!

I freaking loved it...

cont soon...!!

Originally posted by: Humzy

interesting cont soon

Thanks

Shreya..thanks for PM...it is beautiful...i m smiling n crying both...waiting..

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

That prologue was Ahmazing! Manik isn't dead atleast and I really don't want him to be dead! Nandini seems to have been cheated and I kind of agree to that cause he made love to her and just left the next day?! Anyway make them meet soon! Loved it !

Awww...Thank you..
You seriously think I will make Manik dead😆
Ofcourse its not chated what she feels...She is just angry to be deserted that way and loneliness is a terrible feeling😭

Originally posted by: -Obnoxious-

GOD! I so wish that something like this could happen in the show too. 😔

The show needs writer like you, man!

This prologue was amazing! Stole my heart right away! ☺️

You need to be more regular with the updates :p I want more of it! 🤣

You write so beautifully, mujhe bhi kuch sikhao? 😭

I too wished for something like that...
Okay just send my resume there I am ready to write😃 That too For free free free 😆
Be regular with your comments and analysis and I am ever ready...🤣🤣
Chalo tution lene aajao...Aapse paise na lungi😳

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

😭..Its so emotional...manik left her ...awww my nandu ...manikk did wrong to herb...hope he will back soon ..plzz update soon and pm me

Thank you so much...Don't worry only some updates are emotionall...Because I hate tears😆

Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

loved their solace in each other...

can't wait to see how nandu copes after this...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

Thank you..Manik did wrong but you will know it all later...I will update ASAP...
He will come back soon..😳

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Left speechless

You nailed it!!

Originally posted by: myruh

Update asap...eagerly waiting to knw wat will happen next..

Originally posted by: soothu

Manik left nandu... But y...plz update asap

Originally posted by: san_ika

Awesome yaaar...killer prologue...waiting for u to take it ahead I hv send u buddy req plz accept it n plz do send mi pm whenever u will update nxt prt plzz

Thanks
I will update as soon as I can...About pms I will figure out a solution soon too

Originally posted by: shanuqureshi

Hii dear

Ur story ...awesome... superb ...

U penned down very beautifully...

While reading am crying at the same time smiling...

You really did a good job...

I can't have words dear to describe ur thoughts...

Am also a crazy fan of manan...

Thank you so much dear...

God bless u..

plz continue soon...

Im waiting for ur update 😊

LOL

Thank you so much..
Even I was criying and smiling...You know I was experiecing a myriad of emotions😆
My thoughts...Dont try it...I get too wild at times😳
I will continue as fast as I can...And thanks again

Originally posted by: crazygirl4RD

Amazing start .. u left me speechless.. i feel so emotional reading that it actually made me shed few tears.. specially these lines

You are scared of dark; I like the glowing of fireflies

I hate the stars; you make me your shining star

I write the lyrics; you make a song for me

I cry to you; and you cry with me too

and then from urs Truly Monster Manik to yours Manik (Just Manik)..

their moments are so special,each moment brought them more closer and the one changing it all was their First Hug, that scene still gives me goosebumps.

update soon! its gng to be worth writing it and ofcourse reading it..

Did you just fangril over my writing😲
I LOVE YOU...Bas

Originally posted by: Fatema-Cutlery

Awsome continue soon

Thanks

Originally posted by: bans8597

Heartwrenching update. It was really emotional to see nandini like this

Dont worry...Everything will be fine soon..I promise

Originally posted by: thamannamanan

awesome

u r too good with ur writing skills

loved the whole diary part

where nandini remembered all those moments with manik

golden moments sweetest emotions

first kiss disgusting to his naughty plans for getting her kisses

icecream cleaning to licking her finger

puches to kisses

spot to shining star

superb yaar loved it

You make me blush...That was so much of taarif...😳

Originally posted by: nymphadoratonks

This is an awesome story!! Oh Nandini T_T
Continue soon 😃

Thanks...Will do

Originally posted by: mehek.kwatra97

Very nice concept...

Written very beautifully...

Expressive...

Waiting for next part eagerly...

Plz update soon...

Thank you so much...I am also waiting to post it eagerly...

Originally posted by: Hudah18

Its awesome but who is ansh here? And do pm frm next

Thanks...To find about Ansh...Read the updates 😆

Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa

Another great chapter! Keep it up! :)

Yup...NO doubt on the quality of the work though😳

I asked somebody to put up the index. Guess they didn't do it. 🥱
Also, since you're posting, ask that somebody to send the material to you😆

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Ansh is Navya's kid if I am not wrong...But what happened to her if he lives with Nandini and Cabir? And what the hell is Manik even doing away from her? 5 years? Wow... 😲

An amazing start, can't wait to read the next chapters to find out if that was Manik who called her at the end of chapter...Hope you update soon...!!! 😳

OHk...So much of questions and anxiousness...I like it😆
I cant wait to read your comments on my story TBH

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0

coz this seems so real and it shook me to the core and I don't know what's coming in show @ present but if Manik ever has left just simply left I might go mad too.

This had so much of a resemblance with the present sceanrio I'm tearing up kinda.

I love u kay?! Also get myBaccha back...in real and here too.

Is it?😲
I am tearing up too..But then I wrote another update and that made me content...
Yes get him back...And even pray for me to come back soon...I am bored with you already🥱

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

What are you? I am speechless *_*
This is definitely one of the best things I've read.
I so wanna go and hug Nandini.
About leaving Manik to rot without her, well I don't know my feelings about that but it will save her self respect.
Manik seriously go and rot in hell for hurting my Nandu😭

I am a human😆
OHk lame joke😳
Thank you though

Originally posted by: iamash

Awesome update soon

Thanks

Originally posted by: sanviM

It was an amazing update dear

The way u portrayed nandini's feelings was so beautiful

Each n every word explains what nandini is going through right now

This is just the first chapter but still I feel so connected

I m so excited for nandini's outburst when manik will come back

Can't wait anymore

Pls tell when will u update next part

Something is right if I am able to make you connected after the first update itself...Something is defintely strking correctly😆
The outburst ...OMG...I am already so much excited to type it😆😆😆
Thankooos😳😳

Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa

Liked it a lot! Good work! :D
Please write and update faster😆

Thanks😳

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

I am seriously begging you update soon please! This is amazing!👏

LOl...Thank you so much

Originally posted by: shar1988

Very nice. Please update soon, awaiting Manik's return😃

Me too...Even in the show 😆
Thankyou but

Originally posted by: DIVYA0601

hiii

your story is amazing and i loved it plz update soon😊

Thank you so much

Baiby awesome story line...seriously loved ur story ... Just red ur two chapters ...wow... It's reflected through ur stories that u love to write...looking really forward for ur updates...lots of twists and turns are coming that's for sure... Don't make nandu easily forgive manik he should be punished for what he did... Hmmm love cabir-nandini duo and ansh that's still a mystery if he is navya's child or nandini's... If possible can u include me in ur pm list

Originally posted by: NushIsh

So the first time Cooch sent me this link I had no idea who was behind this but thought to myself "Gosh this is so good.' and I don't comment on ff's when I don't know the writer personally, just read it. But now that I know that this is yours S I will write a long comment because it's always being give and take with you. 😆

First the diary...Especially loved the lines in the diary.

I have had all my firsts with you...

I wish I have all my lasts too...Just with you

The prologue... wow you really have a vivid imagination 😆during exams but it was so beautiful. You touched on so many aspects that I wanted to see in the show when MaNan did the deed. The talk before, the way he asks if she is sure, the way she wants to also make him see that she wants it too, initiate as much as him as well. Love it all S... (do you want to remain anonymous?)

Anyways coming to the end of the prologue, I do not like this Manik 😆 if he knew he was going to go away why did he make love with her. He could have stopped himself. I mean yes he intends to come back but he's been gone for five freaking years. And what kind of a lousy reason is that he had enough of his friends. Hello just take Nandini away with him and leave the rest of fab5 to fend for themselves.

Anyways so is Ansh the MaNan baby because I couldn't help but notice that they didn't use protection 🤣 and Nandini is the Navya in your story? Although unlike Navya Nandini doesn't fall for Cabir. Or is he just Navya's kid and you're just trying to make us confused. Smart move though good to keep the intrigue alive.

So will you really be updating every week, I know where to find you so I'll make sure you do 😆

So don't get too senti that I said I don't like your Manik it's just that the Manik I know would never leave Nandini after elegance and say it was because he had enough of his friends. Also you said to be honest so that is what I did. But writing wise it was awesome.

Waiting for more updates and get Manik's lame ass back to Nandini 😆

Love

Nush

WOah...That was one long comment...
And Coochi did tell me that nUSh loves the diary entry...I myself told her to make me annonymous...
And now that you gave long comments make sure you do that everytime...
And did you really love my work so much...HAyeee...
Gives you big chummmaaa
And dare you call my MAnik an ass...He be my love forever

Originally posted by: -Chandramukhi..

Nice it is😳

Please spare time for your readers and give them updates jaldi jaldi, please don't get bored and latkaofy us in majhdhaar😃

Manik needs to be taught a lesson btw😉😆

Thank you so much..But for the procastinator I am...Welll my love for MAnan is more so I will update whenever I can..Just that my net sucks

Originally posted by: shar1988

Oyieee...Is Ansh Manan's kid??

For that read the updates😆

Originally posted by: CooChi

Res.

Will you ever UNRES

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good..

Thanks

Originally posted by: soothu

manik...dont do anything to him..plz

i will never ever forgive him 😭😭😭

Don't worry I love Manik way too much😳
OKay I am confused...You won't forgive MAnik or me?😲