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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: Daz4488
That was hilarious!!! Manik is sooo bad!! First he ruined Smurfy's date!! Now look!! Awesome update though!!

u r the only one jisne manik ko bura bola other wise everyone is annoyed from my little hero well ab he is going off air schi i m gonna miss him so much but its k me uski yaado ke sth manage kr lungi 😉

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: jesse93
Ok iss Smurfy ka kuch karo, seriously again!
Pata ni how will he react?
Continue soon dear.

no no ab smurfy kuc nh krega he is going back to murthy house so dont worry about this

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#343

Originally posted by: sri_valli

it was awesome,hilarious,amazing update dear...manik-smurfy comparision ha ha ha...verry funny...nandini call manik for dogs date and manik act like a child wow...very hilariois...i personaly loves this funny side of ur writing...keep writing these type of updates...thanks for the pm dear...

it treat to watch manik as a child trust me i was laughing like a fool while writting this god its ridiculous dog date mann bechara manik schi mann if parth came to know about all this thn i m seriously dead he will kill me i dont wont to die so early so i wont write this kind of things again in my whole life opps kidding dont be serious mera koi bharosa nh h 😉

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mishti5

@mishti5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#344

Nice update😛

i loved it😉😉 It was nt at all crap...it ws just awesome

Though U gave imprtnc to smurfy nd his love story more,

but I liked the small cute manan moments...

plzzz give some more of manan moments😳😳

Nxt part asap plzzz😊

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Dhariya

@Dhariya_

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#345

History repeat ho gayi 🤣

manik ne bekaar mein hi pants le liya

Nice update

Cont soon

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#346

cute and funny update...love how 5they are getting closer..looking forward to seeing how the relationship develops...

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apy1608

@apy1608

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Posted: 10 years ago

#347

Hhehehehehehe 🤣 .. IMG manik's bum... Hawww ab kya hoga...:P

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parthadmirer

@parthadmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#348

Originally posted by: parthadmirer
Res...
Will comnent tomorrow. ..

Unres...

aashna u said its a crapiest update...

like seriously...

it was awesome mind blowing...

m laughing like maniac reading it...

i must say the best new comer jodi award goes to manik and smurfy..😆 dont kill saying this please...😆😆

so morning scene... nandu shocked to see both of them together...and uff our manik ever so naughty..

making her shy... ufff... his smirk attitude.. and nandu ayiappa.. all full fun..😆

so now come our ever so great manik malhotra and smurfy...😆

ufff manik like seriously u think smurfy is gay... ufff manik u are so obssessed for him...😆

then giving explaination that you not gay...😆

nandini wants a friendship between smurfy and manik...😊

so asked him to touch him... asked like seriously.. she actually challenged him...

and our so attitude full manik has to accept the challenge...

uff what are you saying.. i dont bel my ears.. no no i dont bel my eyes m i reading correctly...

seriously like seriously seriously manik comparing himself with smurfy...😆

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

that scoreboard...

manik won on height

but lost on big nails

then again lost on teeth...

and on shouting and glare they were tie...

what was this... the manik malhotra comparing himself with smurfy...😆😆 bechara manik scered of his past...😆

so lastly smurfy won and manik ran away...😆

but again he manik malhotra.. so he actually spoiled the date of smurfy...😆 be ready for the consequences.. mr...

u will have hard time now...😆

lo bola aur ho gaya hard time...

he was romancing with his so called wifey... and now how could smurfy see this...

and

and and

the wildest dream the craziest dream the never wanted dream the most awful dream for manik came true...

HISTORY WON'T REPEAT ITSELF

HISTORY REPEAT ITSELF

SMURFY WONT BITE YOUR BUM

SMURFY BITE ON HIS BUM

BADLA PURA...!!!!

smurfy bit manik on his bump...

uff bechra manik...

and what did nandu said he will never bit him...

uff manik and smufry..

maza agaya update read karke...

i hope you also get a smile with my comment...

so with this note singing off from this comment and will come later to comment on other update...🤗

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filled wit manan

@happiegal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#349

Haha haha...history repeats itself..Hilarious update

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Ammu

@Entwined_Fates

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#350

Yaar aashu pagal banaake rak diya 😡
Neend mein kabbadi like I'm roffling smurfy licking his toes and he pulled smurfy by his leg it's hilarious, phirse kaise band bajaadiya unke romance ka.. Bichaara smurfy ka bhi date spoil kar daala jelu malhotra ne baap bete k beech smoochie phase gayi 😲 phirse bum par war kya idea nikhaala smurfy ne 😆 😆

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