2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1 - Page 37

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Thank you so much aashna...

m so happy that i could bring a smile to your face...

and m priyanka...

and to aashna right??

waise u on twitter?? would love to follow you...🤗

nd yess very very excited for your updates...😊

ya use my real name in my account or i was on twitter but i find it kinda bore to uninstall kar dia but my ac is still there but ab muje apne ac ka nam id kuc b yd nh such a big bhulakad i m lol its funny
but what else u cn expect frm devils writer 😉 and fr the update its gonna b fun wid all new things and scenes

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Yaar aashu pagal banaake rak diya 😡
Neend mein kabbadi like I'm roffling smurfy licking his toes and he pulled smurfy by his leg it's hilarious, phirse kaise band bajaadiya unke romance ka.. Bichaara smurfy ka bhi date spoil kar daala jelu malhotra ne baap bete k beech smoochie phase gayi 😲 phirse bum par war kya idea nikhaala smurfy ne 😆 😆

hahaha lol what else u cn expect from me thts the best thing i cn give you from my gutter mind comedy dog date lol god what got into me i wrote this kind of stuff cnt believe my self well smurfy is going bit him bye or i promise next me b fun hoga or romance b for sure stay tune wid me

Originally posted by: shoana

it wasn't any crap dear...it was just hilarious🤣
i bet manik n smurfy can't be friends for nxt 7 births...
"Nind me pillows se kabbddi khel rha tha kya" this was awesome🤣
and khoon ka badla khoon
romance ka badla romance👏
how could smurfy see him romancing when he spoiled his romance🤣🤣
continue soon ...waiting for nxt update

ya i will continue soon coz i m very exicted for next upcoming three parts i just wanted to write thm very soon i m glad u like tht smurfy part thnk u fr this comment

r u going to update today like right now

awesome update... smurfy and smoochi's love story🤣🤣 and smurfy's revenge 🤣🤣 poor Manik 🥺

Originally posted by: sheetalky2

It's becoming hilarious n funny story rather than grey story!
I think you should focus on their developing n changing relation than this funny encounters like smurfy love n al I didn't like it! My pov! Continue soon

well i cn understand what you want to say and u r pov is quite reasonable i m mean this kind of luv story god schi me b kya kya krti hu me wese past its not dark or grey present its dark and grey wid a diff sheds u know that my story is a roller coaster ride frst enjoy this ride phr dar b lgega ab itna hasaya hai to thoda pay back to lena hi pdega

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

ya use my real name in my account or i was on twitter but i find it kinda bore to uninstall kar dia but my ac is still there but ab muje apne ac ka nam id kuc b yd nh such a big bhulakad i m lol its funny
but what else u cn expect frm devils writer 😉 and fr the update its gonna b fun wid all new things and scenes

Originally posted by: BriNi

r u going to update today like right now

no no not today i cnt i havent write anything i just said i m exicted for thm but my part are quite long so i need tym for thm atleast three four days

i can't stop laughing

Dog Romance
Manik Badla N den Smurfy Badla
Bechari Nandini Abkya hoga uska
🤣

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

its k dear best of luck for your exms and yes about the show i too miss manan very much in.show so i will keep them alive in my ff thank u fr your cmnt and no need for this sorry whenever you got time reply me other wise its ok

Thanks for understand,, I m just thinking that u may b angry coz I m commenting this much as u want!! But kya Kare yaar,, thora study stress n all,, just release stress I read ur ff,, and u know it's work!! But I read it offline so I can b able to comment,, whenever I get time bookmark ur ff,, and when I get time I read it.. Thank you for this ff,, u r just a fabulous writer,, keep writing..
Love, Aisha