2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1 - Page 36

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

hehe overreaction ki bat nh hai who the hell in their sane state ek luv story me dog date likhta hai ye sirf devils me ho skta hai or it was my last update in this humour genre next update will be full of manan no smurfy at all and yes your comment was pretty long but i luv u r cmnt to the core thank u fr this

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Unres...

aashna u said its a crapiest update...

like seriously...

it was awesome mind blowing...

m laughing like maniac reading it...

i must say the best new comer jodi award goes to manik and smurfy..😆dont kill saying this please...😆😆

so morning scene... nandu shocked to see both of them together...and uff our manik ever so naughty..

making her shy... ufff... his smirk attitude.. and nandu ayiappa.. all full fun..😆

so now come our ever so great manik malhotra and smurfy...😆

ufff manik like seriously u think smurfy is gay... ufff manik u are so obssessed for him...😆

then giving explaination that you not gay...😆

nandini wants a friendship between smurfy and manik...😊

so asked him to touch him... asked like seriously.. she actually challenged him...

and our so attitude full manik has to accept the challenge...

uff what are you saying.. i dont bel my ears.. no no i dont bel my eyes m i reading correctly...

seriously like seriously seriously manik comparing himself with smurfy...😆

🤣

that scoreboard...

manik won on height

but lost on big nails

then again lost on teeth...

and on shouting and glare they were tie...

what was this... the manik malhotra comparing himself with smurfy...😆😆bechara manik scered of his past...😆

so lastly smurfy won and manik ran away...😆

but again he manik malhotra.. so he actually spoiled the date of smurfy...😆be ready for the consequences.. mr...

u will have hard time now...😆

lo bola aur ho gaya hard time...

he was romancing with his so called wifey... and now how could smurfy see this...

and

and

and and

the wildest dream the craziest dream the never wanted dream the most awful dream for manik came true...

HISTORY WON'T REPEAT ITSELF

TO

HISTORY REPEAT ITSELF

SMURFY WONT BITE YOUR BUM

TO

SMURFY BITE ON HIS BUM

BADLA PURA...!!!!

smurfy bit manik on his bump...

uff bechra manik...

and what did nandu said he will never bit him...

uff manik and smufry..

maza agaya update read karke...

i hope you also get a smile with my comment...

so with this note singing off from this comment and will come later to comment on other update...🤗

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

yes as always u r comment bring a huge smile on my face the way you describe my scene its just awesom i really love it
well i wanted to ask u what is your real name
or abt the update i m really exicted for next three updates it will be blast fr u i promise thnk u fr this cmnt

Originally posted by: aadhya_cute

lovestory mein u should write differently like u wrote dogs date,bum bite,score board b/w manik nd dog nd many more u think out of box nd that makes this story very special to all of us escpecially me😊nd yaa one request from me - show some friendship b/w manik nd smurfy i would love to watch manik setting lovestory of smurfy😆..it will be soo cute...nd yaa as u declared romance is on de way i'was more than happy😉...nd u r a gem yaar maan lo what ever u write it will be interesting😊

Originally posted by: angel_110

hi dear.. i jus loved dis story.. its soo different..n damn hilarious..

i jus started reading it few days before..coming to the update..it was damn funny.. u r amazingg😊..

dis is first time m commenting..u knw m soo trying to comment long...i gues one day i l succeed..uff like seriously..m nt gud at it...ok enough of me...pakka promise i l comment on all ur updates dat too lamba lamba.. plz do continue soon..waiting for manan romance.. soo curious to knw how manik wil react after knowing his romance with his wifey was ruined by none other dan smurfy..