2# Devil's bride manan ff prt30 on 143 #3link on 1 - Page 34

Hahahaha it was hilarious... Awesom

Awesome
Superb
Amazing
Fatabulous update
Last part was funny
Both the pov's was amazing
Ekk aur love story smurfy n smoochie hahahaha very funny...manik ka badla romance mein aag lgana wahi smurfy ne kiya tit for tat hahahaha
Lovd it
Continue soon

Hahahahha...end was hilarious...
And Manik and nandini's score board was like...hahgaha...seriously...

And that dog date...i loved it...


Come on...it was not crap in amy sense...
Hehhehe
Loved it...
Continue soon

Ok iss Smurfy ka kuch karo, seriously again!
Pata ni how will he react?
Continue soon dear.

Man i loved it mainly that reveng part both of manik and smurfy i just loved it it was awesome man and that tickilsh part and when their lips were gonna met dafuq it was just wonderful

it was awesome,hilarious,amazing update dear...manik-smurfy comparision ha ha ha...verry funny...nandini call manik for dogs date and manik act like a child wow...very hilariois...i personaly loves this funny side of ur writing...keep writing these type of updates...thanks for the pm dear...

Wow... hilarious update...

Originally posted by: aadhya_cute

AASHNAA U R TOO MUCH YAAR ITNA ACHI LIKTI HUIN UPAR SE OVERACTION KYUN KARTI HO😆...KK GIVE ALL UR MONEY😆...THIS UPDATE WAS AWESOME

manik was sleeping

peacefully, his head between the crock of

nandu's neck WOW SUCH A BLISSFUL SITE FOR A PLEASENT MORNING😊

"Nind me pillows se kabbddi khel rha tha kya" THIS LINE WAS AWESOME😆😆

OMG manik for de first time teasing nandu...yaa changes

nd nandu's effect on manik closeness u described pretty well

"Just showing my wife the

consequences of disturbing

her husband's sleep" - haha nandu should be careful from next time😉

aiyaapa why all of a sudden He is

behaving so romantic, Has

some vampire bite her

husband."-even i was wondering about that

"Leave me, you were the who

was sleeping hugging me like

am your teddy bear, I need to

go leave me"-haha nandu was soo cute nd her cute lines...i just like this line very much dont ask me y😆

manik thought nandu was tickling him...kaash ye sach hotha(aashu dii a vampire bite😆for nandu)

MR.malhotra not in his senses after that bum bite- GAY DOG like really-ROFL😆👏

"Gay manik you know about smoochie right or about you how would i know you are a gay or straight " nandu u r a ROCKSTAR u proved it by this statement haha

nd de funny dreams of manik...aashu kaise karleti ho this was epic👏

Score board updated

Manik-1

Smurfy-2 ...ROFL

WOW smurfy date nd manik was de guest😆

these lines below were just awesome(show stealing)...aashana...u r a star⭐️⭐️

Love at first bark...!!!😆😆

Ah, complicated love !

"Dono sath me kitne ache lg rh hai na manik mr and mrs junior malhotra "

KHOON KA BADLA KHOON

Same as

ROMANCE KA BADLA ROMANCE

HISTORY WON'T REPEAT ITSELF

TO

HISTORY REPEAT ITSELF

SMURFY WONT BITE YOUR BUM

TO

SMURFY BITE ON HIS BUM

BADLA PURA...!!!!

COMMENT PURA...i guess its pretty long enough for ur beautiful surprise

love u...😊😊😊

hehe overreaction ki bat nh hai who the hell in their sane state ek luv story me dog date likhta hai ye sirf devils me ho skta hai or it was my last update in this humour genre next update will be full of manan no smurfy at all and yes your comment was pretty long but i luv u r cmnt to the core thank u fr this