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mona

@cmamona

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

well if your ready for the roller coaster ride to seat belt bandh lo i m gonna show romance wid some touch of true love so more things are on the way wait for it or i m glad u like my story so much thnk u for this

Ready
Seat belt b tightly tie kar li...
Ready set go... :)

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mona

@cmamona

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

so many suprises are waiting for you in next updates and i m glad you like it i jusg want to dedicate this to my little hero bcz of him so many times you get throat out laugh so its my way to thank my little hero now he is going and i m gonna miss him but romance for sure in next update

Dat was a very sweet gesture to say bbye to ur lovey dovey smurfy
Angel of there love story
And ya me too gonna miss him and smochie... :)

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DIVYA0601

@DIVYA0601

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#323

OH GOD IT WAS HILARIOUS, DAM FUNNY 😆 SMURFY KA BADLA😆 AND THE MORAL OF THE STORY IS HISTORY REPEAT ITSELF🤣

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sparklingqueen

@sparklingqueen

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#324

Plzzz update soon plzzz can't wait

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S.h.e.e.t.a.l

@S.h.e.e.t.a.l

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Posted: 10 years ago

#325

It's becoming hilarious n funny story rather than grey story!
I think you should focus on their developing n changing relation than this funny encounters like smurfy love n al I didn't like it! My pov! Continue soon

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51083alishashah

@51083alishashah

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#326

Thanks for surprise update...what i like most in yr story is their cute cute romance n cute fights also n what the hell history repeats itself 😆 manik's bum has got bitten again awww i feel pity for manik but ab nandini ka kya hoga...what will manik do with nandini...plzzz post next part soon n thanks for pm

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rimsha01

@rimsha01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#327

Yaar plz ab khatam kro smurfy ka topic. I know u love to write funny updates. But its high time now. Plz give us ROMANCE. Get manik nd nandini closer. I expect u'll come up with a Romantic update next time. :)

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anum85228601

@anum85228601

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Posted: 10 years ago

#328

Oh God OMG kaise kaise likhti hu tum itna Funny updates seriously mai paglo ki terha hans rhi hu read krte mai.. Wooow little bit morning romance n smurfy kitna tang krta hai manik ko. Hahaha mai gay nhi hu wahhh manik oh God smurfy ka romance kharab kra manik ne such a monster he,s. Ufff end was superb smurfy ka badla bechara manik or uska bum.. Bad move smurfy...
Thanks for such a wonderful update. Loved It

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aadhya_cute

@aadhya_cute

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Posted: 10 years ago

#329

AASHNAA U R TOO MUCH YAAR ITNA ACHI LIKTI HUIN UPAR SE OVERACTION KYUN KARTI HO😆...KK GIVE ALL UR MONEY😆...THIS UPDATE WAS AWESOME

manik was sleeping

peacefully, his head between the crock of

nandu's neck WOW SUCH A BLISSFUL SITE FOR A PLEASENT MORNING😊

"Nind me pillows se kabbddi khel rha tha kya" THIS LINE WAS AWESOME😆😆

OMG manik for de first time teasing nandu...yaa changes

nd nandu's effect on manik closeness u described pretty well

"Just showing my wife the

consequences of disturbing

her husband's sleep" - haha nandu should be careful from next time😉

aiyaapa why all of a sudden He is

behaving so romantic, Has

some vampire bite her

husband."-even i was wondering about that

"Leave me, you were the who

was sleeping hugging me like

am your teddy bear, I need to

go leave me"-haha nandu was soo cute nd her cute lines...i just like this line very much dont ask me y😆

manik thought nandu was tickling him...kaash ye sach hotha(aashu dii a vampire bite😆 for nandu)

MR.malhotra not in his senses after that bum bite- GAY DOG like really-ROFL😆👏

"Gay manik you know about smoochie right or about you how would i know you are a gay or straight " nandu u r a ROCKSTAR u proved it by this statement haha

nd de funny dreams of manik...aashu kaise karleti ho this was epic👏

Score board updated

Manik-1

Smurfy-2 ...ROFL

WOW smurfy date nd manik was de guest😆

these lines below were just awesome(show stealing)...aashana...u r a star⭐️⭐️

Love at first bark...!!!😆😆

Ah, complicated love !

"Dono sath me kitne ache lg rh hai na manik mr and mrs junior malhotra "

KHOON KA BADLA KHOON

Same as

ROMANCE KA BADLA ROMANCE