Manik & Nandini Stars & Fireflies part 85 page 143 thread 2

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ridzs1991

@ridzs1991

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Nice one yar jealous manik is awesome continue soon

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

beautiful like always.
Loved it.
Cont soon.
Love...mini

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samiksha singh

@samiksha_2593

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Wowww

Mtlb kya
Aap ho kya

Kaise kr lete ho ye sb
Back to back update

Amazing
N i love this track
Manik jealoysy
Hahahahahaaa

N thanx for pm

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Ananya

@horizontwilight

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

awww!!!abhi is so awesome!!!specially the last lines he spoke!!! it made me smile!!manik is damn jealous!! gosh!! he is so possessive!! but he should know that he doesn't have a right on nandini now!! he lost it way before!!loved the update!! continue soon!!will be waiting!! thanks for the pm!!keep writing like this!! update soon!😊

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AsthaVerma92

@AsthaVerma92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Hahahahhaa bichara manik tie tie phus hogyi

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manan_0711

@manan_0711

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Ty for d pm...

finally Mr monster has got some brains...hehe...

wow d update was awesome...

abhi n nandu as Oliver n Jenny...n oh god manik is so jealous...haha Jst loving it more nw...

Wen dhruv came to manik said dat...n d reply manik gave I was laughing lyk anything...haha...

haha d canteen scene super awesome...

Mukti n manik both d jealous faces r awesome...lol...

waiting for d rehearsal part nw...more jealousy on d way I guess...

plz continue soon...

'll b waiting for d update...

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Diksha Anand

@DikshaAnand

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Omg ...dis was d real fun both mukti & manik is jealous...
Abhi is a Rockstar...
Cabir jst don't miss a chance to pull dere legs 😛
continue soon

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

amazing...
beautifully written...

abhi n nandu as Oliver n Jenny...awesome
... manik is so jealous...loving it

canteen scene super awesome...

Mukti n manik both r jealous ... awesome..

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Amazing...
Manik is beginning to understand his feelings...
DJ - manik scene was hilarious ...
And the canteen part...lol... He's finding reasons to be with her...
Superb update...
Thnkz 4 the pm