MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE INDEX ON PG 1 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
nice update yar
chruv n cabir teseing section was simple super
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Guys I have already posted so many parts of this ff in fb and due to my friends requests am posting it here too. Please let me know whether you are liking it or not.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Great!
Par yaar ab yeh bahot stretch ho raha hai... The fight
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Nice update dear
yes I am liking your story
good storyline
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Keep writing ...am loving it ..bt jst finish a day atleast ...like ek he din me itna sb ho rha h...bt update soon ...its going on nice
Lots of love ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Update soon dear... I m jst lovin ur story
Plz plzzz update
Waitin waitin...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Please edit your title when you update next. That is, mention in the title that you have updated
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#38
PART 21 :

MANIK : goddd ye main ne kyaa kiya main aise kaise kar saktha hoon wo mere baare main kya sochri hogi kyu kyu kyuuu baar baar main na chahthe hue bi usse hurt kar detha hoon kyu hamesha uske saamne aathe hi aisi baath bol detha hoon jo main bolna chahtha hi nahi hoon ufff patha nahi wo kya karri hogi wo teek bi hogi yaa nahi and leaves to class. nandini goes to the class and sits silently in the corner of the bench seeing out through the window. manik comes into the class and goes near nandini to sit beside her but mean while nandini calls dhruv and asks him to sit beside her. manik having no choice goes and sits with mukthi and alia and nandini sits with kabir and dhruv. The class starts and goes continously for two hours. manik goes on turning behind making some or the other excuses just to have a glance of nandini. As soon as the class gets finished all feel happy and leave for their houses. Manik turns behind and looks at nandini and waits for her to look him so that he can talk but nandini doesnt look at him nor anyone else and simply starts packing her bag. she stands to leave

KABIR : kya hua madam itni kya kaam hai itni jaldi kyu hai gar jaane ki???

NANDINI : kuch nahi kabir bas jaana hai please hato na mujhe der hori hain

KABIR : arrey kayi tumhe barthan varthan tho nahi doni hai na agar aisa hai

NANDINI : kabir please mujhe sir bahuth dard dera hai isliye gar jaana hai

KABIR : ( looking manik ) dekh mere paas na teri dard ka dawa hai tho tuje

NANDINI : tumhare iss dawa ka ab koyi asar nahi hone vala hai kabir thoo

KABIR : ( in mind ) zaroor kuch gadbad hai mujhe hi kuch karna padega. haan nandini mujhe tumse kuch baath karni hai tho chelo and no questions kabir goes out with nandini and manik and dhruv also follow them silently. mukthi& alia sit there itself looking angry as if they dont care about anything

KABIR : nandini kya hua tum teek tho ho na kayi manik ne phirse kuch kiya

NANDINI : nahi kabir manik ne kuch nahi kiya tum please tension math lo

KABIR : agar manik ne kuch nahi kiya tho kayi harshad ne tho phirse kuch

NANDINI : shhh kabir kisine bi kuch nahi kiya maine kaha tha na ki mujhe thodi si sur dard hai bas aur kuch nahi tho please tum ye sab math socho. manik and dhruv reach there and as soon as she sees them she waves them a bye and leaves from there saying not to follow her. manik just stares at her for few minutes and goes behind her silently hiding from her. kabir and dhruv get confused seeing manik but doesnt say anything they try to follow him but manik signals them not to follow him. manik follows her for sometime and suddenly alia comes and starts talking to him due to which he looses view of nandini from his sight. He gets worried and starts running seaching for nandini. He runs and runs but doesnt find her. He goes and even confirms from watchman that she havent left from the school. He goes into school again and meets kabir and dhruv and says them to search for nandini without asking any questions. all the three seach and were not able to find nandini. Manik searches each and every corner of the school but doesnt find nandini. Here nandini goes to terrace and sits silently crying.

KABIR : manik thu kyu itna pareshan hora hai wo gar cheli gayi hogi tho

MANIK : nahi kabir i conformed from watchman wo yahi school main hi hai

DHRUV : haan tho buddy agar school main hogi tho mil jayegi please thu

MANIK : kaise buddy pura school dundliya hamne i just hope ki wo teek ho

nandini here crying ''ayyappaa bas haan aaj ke liye bas main aur kuch bi nahi seh sakthi mujme aur himmath nahi hai'' and cries loudly. she suddenly hears a voice saying ''nandini nandini nandini tumhe aur bahuth kuch sehana hai aur agar tum abi thak jaaogi tho mera kya hoga'' & listening this nandini turns to look who it is & gets shocked seeing person standing behind her & in a totally afraid voice says slowly HARSHAD...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
PART 22 :

MANIK : kaha ho tum nandini I just hope ki tum jaha bi ho teek hooo aur agar

KABIR : relax manik usse kuch nahi hoga wo teek hogi you just calm down

MANIK : nahi kabir nahi i strongly feel ki kuch teek nahi hai aisa lagra hai jaise wo mujhe uske paas chahthi hai patha nahi kya hai par am am justtt worried ki

DHRUV : buddy bas aisa bi ho saktha hai ki thu galath sochra ho hain na???

MANIK : I really wish ki mera soch sach main galath ho buddy aur thu sahi main ek baar phir corridors main check karke aatha hu and leaves running

KABIR : maine manik ko kabhi aise nahi dekha hai yar kitna pareshan lagra hai and i seriously wish ki nandini jaha kahi par bi ho na bas teek ho aur

DHRUV : aur hame jaldi miljaye. kya kabir abi thodi der pehle thu hi tho samjara tha buddy ko ki sab teek ho jaayega tho thu kyu phikar kara hai haan dekhna nandini hame jaldi miljayegi aur vo bi bilkul teek taak ab chel

Nandini couldnt believe her eyes for few min seeing harshad & stands still

HARSHAD : nandini kya hua tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahi tum teek tho ho na Nandini comes into reality listening his words but doesnt say anything

HARSHAD : kya nandini mujhe tho laga tum bahuth kush ho jayogi mujhe yaha dekh kar par tum tum tho kuch bol hi nahi rahi bolo na tum kush ho na

NANDINI : main main wo tum tum yaha par kyu please chele jao yaha see

HARSHAD : nandini kya tumhe sach main dar lagra hain and smiles. wo kya hai na subha jab tum ne mujhe punch maratha tho mujhe laga ki tum bahuth brave ho aur kisise shayad darthi bi nahi ho aur vaise bi tumhe dar kyu lagra hai main tho wohi hu na jisse tum ne punch mara tha tho tumhe mujhse darne ki zaroorath hi nahi vaise u punch really good ha sach main

NANDINI : dekho harshad maine mara tha tumhe kyuki tumne galthi ki thi aur wo baath vahi par katham ho chuki hai tho ab please tum ab jao please

HARSHAD : haan nandini bilkul sahi kaha tumne wo baath tho wahi par katham ho chuki hai aur main yaha tumhe kuch bi karne nahi aaya hoon.
Nandini takes her bag and starts to leave but harshad holds her hand and

HARSHAD : arreyy nandini itni bi jaldi kya hai thodi der baath tho karlo hm

NANDINI : harshad leave me mujhe jaane do chodo just leave my hand

HARSHAD : itni aasani se nahi nandini kya tumhe main pagal dikhtha hoo

NANDINI : harshad chodo please you cant do this chodo mujhe harshadd

HARSHAD : nahi nandini main tumhe kuch nahi karunga tum daro math main tho bas tumhe ek thoufa dene aaya hu kyuki tum pehli ladki ho jisne mujhe sabke samne punch kiya & trust me i dont have any harsh feelings towards you and pulls her close. puchogi nahi ki kya thoufa hai acha teek hai chelo main hi batha detha hu tumara thoufa hai ek pyaari si chummaaa Nandini gets socked listening this and tears start rolling from her eyes.

HARSHAD : tum tension math lena nandini tumhe koyi problem nahi hoga trust me bas apne ankhe bandh kar lena aur baki sab kuch main dekhlunga nandini gets irritated and tries to free herself but he doesnt let her go and he leans towards her. she gets totally afraid and only one word comes out from her mouth that is ''MANIK''. listening this harshad laughs and says ''kaash ki wo yaha par aakar tumhe bachatha par aisa nahi ho saktha nandini'' and he leans more closer to her and nandini closes her eyes and harshad was about to kiss her but suddenly feels a strong hand holding his neck and before he could turn around and see he was pushed back with great force pressing his neck tightly. He turns and sees that the hand was none other than the famous MANIK MALHOTRA. Nandini slowly opens her eyes and gets relieved seeing manik. Harshad gives an angry look to manik but again goes near to nandini and tries to hold her. Manik gets angry and just holds harshads head and drags him to nearest wall. He continuously hits his head to the wall. He totally becomes red and no one dares to stop him. Nandini realises that harshad would get hurt badly and slowly walks towards him and holds his hand. Manik stops hitting harshad and looks at nandini. she nods her head saying no and he simply leaves harshad. Harshad was bleeding heavily and couldnt say anything. He was about to leave but manik holds him once again and says '' Dont you dare to even think about harming her again not even in your dreams because next time you wont be able to imagine what could i do for that '' and leaves him. Harshad leaves where as kabir and dhruv still stay in shock seeing the way manik reacted. nandini also just looks at manik and doesnt say anything.

KABIR : nandini tum teek tho ho na wo tumhare saath kuch aisa vaisa tho

NANDINI : nahi kabir ussne kuch nahi kiya. main thodi der pehle teek nahi thi par ab teek hoon and all thanks to you sach main agar tum log nahi hothe tho patha nahi aaj mera kya hotha and i really thank you for that

DHRUV : nahi nandini ye thanks ham nahi buddy deserve kartha hain

KABIR : haan kyunki wo hi tha jo hamare baar baar kehne par bi ki tum shayad gar cheli gayi hogi jo nahi maana aur pagalo ki tarah pura school tumhe dondra tha tho tum ye thanks direction change karke usse bol dena nandini stays silent and looks at manik. He was still looking red due to his anger and before she could anything manik just starts walking outside saying ''we need to leave''. All of them leave from there and soon reach gate. nandinis driver was already waiting so she simply waves a bye and leaves looking manik. she goes and sits in the car still looking manik. He feels relaxed seeing her safely sitting in car and stands there itself untill her car totally dissappears. soon he too starts leaving along with kabir and dhruv...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Amazing update..I jst love it
Plz continue soon ..cant wait for next part..!!!

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