MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE INDEX ON PG 1 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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jst loved it...plz continue...👏
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KABIR IS A GREAT FRIEND...👏

LOVELY BND B/W NANDU ND HER MOTHER👏
WAITING FR NXT PART...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi
read your story in one go
love it
simple and beautiful
and waiting for next part
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Wow...it was aweosome lik always...
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Thnx alot for your lovely response guys. I know this would have been better if it had college back drop but since i mentioned few incidents of mine own school life i mentioned FAB 5 as students.
PART 26 :

ALIA : guys hum log bi yahi par hain jab se ye madam aayi hain hamari life main tum logon ko tho hamari tharaf dekhne ke liye bi vakth nahi hain infact mujhe tho lagta hain ki tum log bhool bi gaye hain ki ham FAB 5 hain aur

KABIR : alia ye thu kaisi baathe karri hain hum kisi ko nahi boole hain aur na hi kabhi bolenge.hum FAB 5 hamesha saath honge chahe kuch bi ho jaaye aur koyi bi hame alag nahi kar saktha hain tho thu ye nandini ko blame karna bandh kar aur ye bacho vaali harkathe bi bandh karde please

ALIA : like seriously kabir bachon vali harkathe haan tho ab tum mujhe batao kal hamara school ka pehla din kaise beetha kya hum ne wohi kiya jo har saal karthe the kya hum log saara din saath main the jaise hamesha hothe the acha chelo bas ye batao ki hamne kitni der bait kar baathe ki hain

KABIR : haan alia main jaantha hu ki kal ka din aisa nahi tha jaise har saal hotha hain aur hum ne zyada baath bi nahi kiya hain remember zyada nahi par hum ne baath ki hain bas situations hi aisi ho gaye ki hame zyada baath karne ka mauka nahi mila hain aur ek din kam baath karne jaise reason se FAB 5 nahi toot saktha hain & changes do occur in life yar samjo is bath ko

MUKTHI : kabir i dont want to hurt anyone par sach yehi hain ki humare beech distance bad rahi hain and i dont want to mention any particular reason behind it (looking manik) chahe jo bu ho par we need to solve it soon

DHRUV : dekho mukthi main bas tum logon se ye puchna chahtha hoon ki kya hamari dosthi itni week hain ki ek din zyada baath nahi karne jaise reason se hamare bech jagda ho jaye aur chahe uska reason jo kuch bi ho

MUKTHI : nahi dhruv aisa bilkul nahi hain aur hamari dosthi aisi bilkul nahi ho sakthi hain infact main indirectly bolri thi parrr am sry manik main tujhe hi bolna chahthi hu ki tu kuch na kuch bahana karke class se bahar jara hain aur kal kal tho i guess hardly hum ne tujhse doon ya theen baar bath ki hogi

MANIK : listen guys am sry am really sry and i promise ki aaj ke baad aisa bilkul nahi hoga aur hum saath main zyada time bi spend karenge so plzzz

ALIA : vaise manik dikra hain ki tum kiske sath zyada vakth spend karoge

MANIK : alia aisa kuch bi nahi hain its just that ki main apne work main itna

ALIA : work manik sach main aisa konsa work hain jo tum class main nahii

DHRUV : alia please hum sab dosth hain main ye baath ache se jaantha hoon lekin hamari sab ki apni alag personal life bi hain jisme am sure koyi bi interfere kare tho hame acha nahi lagta hain tho please iss bath ko samjo

MUKTHI : alia main dhruv se sehmath hu hame har kisiko apna personal space dena chahiye aur vaise manik ne sry kaha na so lets just stop it and before alia could speak anything physics mam enters and starts the class.

Nandini who was just listening the entire conversation feels bad & remains silent.

Manik goes on disturbing her by putting his lengthy legs on her side and wantedly falling on her for every few minutes. Finally the class gets over and nandini goes out making an excuse. Manik goes behind her and pulls her into one of the room. He holds her and makes her lean to the wall.

NANDINI : manik leave har baar tumhari zid nahi chelegi and tries to leave

MANIK : you just listen to me once and i promise i will leave you after that

NANDINI : ab baath karne ke liye kuch bacha hi kya hain manik just leavee

MANIK : listen I dont want to waste any time mujhe tumhe kuch dikhana hai

NANDINI : mujhe kuch nahi dekhna hain aur na hi sunna hain tho please and manik closes her eyes without saying anything and turns on the light. He slowly makes her to stand in centre of the room and removes his hands Nandini slowly opens her eyes & a basket full of rose petals were showered on her. she looks down and slowly looks around the entire room and gets surprised to see rose petals spreaded all over the ground around her. she looks on the walls which were filled with uncountable number of sorry letters,cards and notes. she turns back to look manik but she doesnt find him and suddenly she feels someone pulling her dress so she looks down. A small cute baby gives her a red rose and a letter. Nandini takes it and baby after kissing her goes a little far and stand seeing nandu. Nandini opens the card and ofcourse it was a sorry card. she looks at the baby and before she could say anything another cute boy enters and gives her another rose along with a card. He too kisses her when she takes it and stands little far to her. she opens the card and it said sorry with a smiley. similarly three more babies come and give her rose along with a card. she sees all the cards which said sorry with different messages. she looks at the babies standing in front of her and before she could say anything each one holds a board having letters 'S' 'O' 'R' 'R' 'Y' on each one. They hold their ears saying sorry and show manik pointing their fingers. she looks at manik and even he holds his ears saying sorry. she doesnt say anything and goes and kisses the babies. she waves them a bye and they all leave. she looks at manik and simply starts walking out of the room. He holds her and says sorry once again.

NANDINI : Manik jo kuch hua main uske baare main sochna nahi chahthi tum ne hi tho kaha na ki tum mere aas paas bi nahi rehna chahthe tho phir ye sab kyu aur vaise bi tumhe mere liye ye sab karne ki zaroorath nahi hai.

MANIK : Nandini please main jaantha hoon mujhse galthi huyi hain lekin and nandini was about to say something but he stops her. meri baath puri nahi huyi aur tum mujhe beechme tokna bandh karo kyuki isi vajah se mere muh se hamesha aisa kuch nikal jatha hain jisse tum bahuth hurt hothi hoo

NANDINI : Tho tumhe sach main lagtha hain ki tum mujhe hurt karre hoo??

MANIK : haan and listen nandini am really sorry aur ye jo kuch main ne kiya

NANDINI : tho tum iss tharah sab ladkiyon ko manathe hoo not bad haa manik nahi seriously ab samji ki sab ladkiyan tum pe itna kyu marthi hain

MANIK : nandini please i know ki tum bahuth hurt ho aur sahi bi hain kyuki

NANDINI : nahi manik nahi tumhe nahi patha hain jab koyi insaan ek ladki ke samne uske hi character ko bura kehtha hain tho uss ladki par kya gusartha hain wo koyi nahi samaj saktha patha hain main agar koyi aur wo baath kehtha tho shayad sunthi bi nahi par wo tum the manik tum and tears started rolling from her eyes. she falls on ground crying and manik sits on his knees infront of her. At the same time kabir and dhruv come near the room searching for both of them and stand outside itself seeing them both.

MANIK : Nandini main wo kehna nahi chahtha tha aur mera matlab aisa bilkul nahi tha jaise tum samaj rahi ho. main jaantha hoon tum alag ho aur

NANDINI : aur tumhari baathon main sabki tarah nahi aungi. tumhe kya lagtha hain manik tum kabi bi kuch bi bolke jaoge tho main bas chup chap tumhe dekthi rahungi nahi MR MANIK MALHOTRA nahi. agar tumh lagtha hain ki tum mujhe aise keench kar ek bandh kamre main lakar sorry bologe tho sab kuch teek ho jaayega tho let me tell you that you are highly mistaken. main baaki ladkiyon ki tharah nahi hu manik and saying this leaves from their running crying. kabir and dhruv get shocked to see this and could only understand that nandini was badly hurt. They both come to manik and take him to class. No class was going on since their science sir was absent. Manik silently sits on the bench closing his eyes & remebering all the words said by nandini. He suddenly opens his eyes and sees nandini entering into class. He gets up and closes the door of class room. Nandini almost reaches her bench to sit but manik calls her and stops her. She turns back and manik comes near to her. He takes her near board holding her hands tightly not letting her go. All were surprised seeing what he was actually doing. Nandini was about to say something but manik signals her to stop

MANIK : guys i request everyone to stop their works for few minutes

NANDINI : ye tum kya karre ho phir se koyi thamasha nahi chahiye mujhe

MANIK : so guys main aapko ye bathana chahtha hoon ki main MANIK MALHOTRA bahuth dumb hoon bahuth idiot hoon aur bina kuch soche samje bol detha hoon so i want to say sorry to each and everyone if ever i have hurted you with my actions or my words.

He turns towards nandu and holding her hands "tum ne bilkul sahi kaha tha main hamesha apni marzi ka nahi kar saktha. Nandini main jab gusse main hotha hoon tho kuch bi bol detha hoon aur bolne se pehle ek baar bi nahi sochtha hoon. main tumhe hurt karna nahi chahtha par tum hamesha mujhe apni baatho se aise confuse kardethe ho ki mere muh se kuch na kuch ulta nikal hi jatha hain. kal bi aisa hi hua main bolna kuch aur chahtha tha lekin bola kuch aur and stops for some time. main kabhi bi ladkiyon se zyada baath nahi ki aur shayad kyunki sab ladkiyan mere aage piche gumthe rehthe hain main ne apne aapko bahuth smart samaj li aur tum se bi isi liye utni attitude se baath ki lekin tum sahi thi nandini tum sab ladkiyon ki tharah nahi hoo aur main galath tha jo tumhe sab ladkiyon ki tharah maan liya and am really sorry for that. main jaantha hoon ki meri galthi bahuth badi hain aur uske liye sorry word bi bahuth kam hain lekin main sorry bolne ke alava aur kuch nahi kar saktha. He falls on his knees and nandini main jab galthi kartha hoon tho usse sab ke saamne accept bi kartha hoon haan mujhse bahuth badi galthi hui hain jiske liye tumse aise sab ke saamne maafi mangna bi bahuth kam hain. main pagal hoon duffer hoon aur galthiyo pe galthiya kartha rehtha hoon par nandini main apni galthiyo ke liye dil se maafi bi mangtha hoon aur aaj bi main apni galthi ko chupana nahi chahtha hu isliye sabke saamne bolra hoon am sry,am sry and am sry and he closes his eyes."

Nandini had tears and was speechless.

she too sits on her kness and just looks him. she slowly bends towards him and says in his ears ''LADKE ROTHE VAKTH ACHE NAHI LAGTHE'' .

He slowly opens his eyes and gets surprised to see tears falling down from his eyes. she slowly wipes his tears. Kabir and dhruv start clapping. Manik looks around and smiles. Nandini makes manik stand while dhruv and kabir come and hug manik. Nandini sees them and goes out without saying anything...
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PART 27 :

KABIR : kyaa baath hain mere sher mere cheetah mere sab kuch aaj jo thu ne kiya na am really really proud of you man sachi kasam se and hugs him

MANIK : bas bas bahuth ho gaya tumhe nahi lagtha kuch zyada hora hain

DHRUV : nahi buddy aaj hum tera kitna bi tharif kare wo kam hi hoga kyun ki aaj jo thu ne kiya na wo koyi aur bilkul nahi kar saktha & hugs him tightly

KABIR : vaise manik main jaantha hoon ki tu hamesha kuch bi karne ke baad hi uske bare main sochtha hain lekin aaj thu ne pehli baar bina soche samje aise sab ke saamne nandini se maafi mangkar bahuth acha kiya aur infact i suggest you ki tu hamesha aise kaam kartha raha kar u know nandu

MANIK : itna kuch ek saath bolega tho saanse ruk jaayengi tho ab bas haa

DHRUV : kabir tu jaantha hain na buddy ke paas itna vakth bilkul nahi hain

KABIR : haan dhruv sahi bolra hain ab ye hamari baathe kyu sunegi nannn

MANIK : guys bas haan seriously aur buddy thu bi kya iske saath milkal ye sab bolra hain haan vaise give me 2 min i will be back wo kya hain actually

kabir and dhruv say simultaneously ''kuch zaroori kaam hain'' hain naaa

manik smiles and then hiding his smile "haan wo mera matlab hain ki wooo"

KABIR : haan wo main ye sab chod aur jaa tera kaam wait karri hogi vaha mera matlab hain ki tu agar jayega nahi tho wo kaam kon sabalega hain na

DHRUV : haan buddy thu jaa aise kaamo main der nahi karthe and smiles

MANIK : (smiling) tum log bi na kuch bi matlab chodo yar i will see u soon he leaves from their and kabir and dhruv smile loudly having a high five.

Nandini goes to the same room where all sorry cards were placed and collects each and every card from the wall. she hides all those cards carefully in her bag so that no one sees them. she sits in the centre of class and "Ayyappaa dekha na aapne wo wo wo bahuth acha hain jis tharah usne sab ke samne mujhse sorry kaha naa main main kya bolu aapse mere paas kuch hain hi nahi bolne ke liye. aap janthe the na ayyappa ki wo bahuth acha hain tho phir ye sab kyu karvaya mujhse haan main tho patha nahi gusse main kya kuch nahi bola usse aur wo bichara tho mujhe kuch bi nahi bola aur tho aur sab ke samne ussne apni galthi maani aur mujhse maafi bi mangi. main ne tho socha tha ki wo kuch bi karle main usse maaf nahi karungi lekin abi jis tharah se usne sab kuch kaha mujhse main kaise kaise usse maaf na karu aur agar ab wo yaha par ayega tho main usse kya bolu nahi sab kuch aap hi bolenge ayyappa kyu ki ye sab aapki galthi hain aur ''kabi to chain se jene doon tumhare ayyapa ko kyu itna pareshan karthi ho'' saying this manik enters and nandini clearly understood whose voice it is without turning back. she closes her eyes tightly having a smile on her face. manik comes and sits beside her. she doesnt see him and remains silent.

MANIK : vaise tume to class main hona chahiye to phir yaha par kya kari ho

NANDINI : aur agar main vahi que tumse puchu to tumhara jawab kya hoga

MANIK : (smiles) tum kabi bi ek simple que ka simple answer nahi de sakthi

NANDINI : ''copy paste enter'' and raises her eyebrows smiling wickedly

MANIK : wo actually main yahaaa ek min why should i even answer you??

NANDINI : exactly why i should i even answer to your question hmmm??

MANIK : sahi hain so why am i even wasting my time here & tries to gets up

NANDINI : (holding hands) arrey listen tum aise kaise jaa sakthe hooo???

MANIK : aise kaise matlab kyu kya hua tum tho mere sawalon ke jawab vaise bi nahi dene vaale ho tho main yaha bait kar kya karunga saying this he gets up. Nandini holds him and continuously pulls him to sit he suddenly looses his grip and falls on her. Nandini is on ground and manik is on top of her. ( KAISE BATAAOON TUJHE KI DIL MERA KYA KEH RAHA BG TUNE ) .

Nandini slowly says ''sorry''. Manik says in husky voice ''sorry iske liye'' and smiles with a smirk. Nandini blushes and turns her head. Manik slowly turns her head towards him & she looks into his eyes. They share a beautiful eyelock and suddenly nandini throws rose petals on manik and starts smiling. manik also smiles and starts throwing rose petals on nandini.They both play for sometime and accidently nandini hits maniks eyes. His eyes get burned and nandini blowes air in his eyes saying ''sorry sorry sorry''.

Manik slowly opens his eyes while nandini was still blowing air. He looks at her and smiles. she asks him ''ab teek hain na''. Manik says innocently ''nahi ab bi jalra hain''. Nandini gets worried and asks him ''kaha manik''. Manik smiles and leans towards to her. He says ''yaha par'' and shows his lips. Nandini blushes and pushes him away smiling. They both sit and look each other for some time.

MANIK : hmmm vaise ye sare mere sorry cards kaha gaye ek bi nahi hain

NANDINI : mujhe kyaa patha vaise bi ye school hain nikal diya hoga koyi

MANIK : school hain tho kya hua yaha par mere alawa koyi nahi aatha hain

NANDINI : haan aur main bhooth hu tumhare samne to tume darna chahiye

MANIK : tum asal main hi bhooth se zyada darawni ho tho agar tum sach main bhooth hogi na tho bi main nahi darne vaala samji and looks her

NANDINI : hoo ye joke tha mr manik malhotra very funny you know & pouts

MANIK : acha ye batao ki jab tum yaha par aayi tho cards the ya phir tumm

NANDINI : main main kyu wo sab lungi main ne nahi liya hain kuch bi aurrr

MANIK : main ne kab bola ki tumne li hain pehle puri bath tho sunlo madam main bas puchra tha ki kya tumhare aane ke baad kisine akar tho nahi liya

NANDINI : ooo wo jab main aayi thab bi nahi the shayad pehle hi kisine leli manik understands that nandini was lying and smiles looking at her

MANIK : oo tho tumhare ane se pehli hi godd ye chor na bilkul pagal hain mujhse agar kuch aur pucha hotha na tho bi main wo de dethi par ye cards

NANDINI : kyaaa chor tum chor kyu kehre hoo just because tumhare cards lelii

MANIK : wait wo saare main ne banaye the wo bi bahuth mehanath se aur agar koyi bina permission ke koyi bi cheez le tho use chor hi kehathe hain

NANDINI : haan teek hain wo tumne banaye the lekin yaha par aise sab kuch chod kar jane ki galti bi tumhari hai to tum kisi aur ko blame math karo

MANIK : tum kyu itna react hori main chor ko bolra hu tume nahi & smiles

NANDINI : haan jooo bi hoo lekin tum usse chor nahi bol sakthe bas

MANIK : acha teek hain vaise yahi par sara din baitne ka plan hain ya class

NANDINI : manik thodi der aur yahi par bait the hai na please bas thodi der

MANIK : acha teek hain phir tunhe muhje mere sawal ka jawab dena hoga

NANDINI : main tumhare sawal ka jawab acha teek hain kya hain sawal??

MANIK : tum sach main nahi janthi main kya puchna chahta hu & looks her

NANDINI : hmmm manik wo wo actually am am sorry am really really sorry

MANIK : looo tum tho sach main buddu nikli chelo main hi puchtha hu

NANDINI : shhh manik please ab bolne ki baari meri hain. main sach bolri hoon manik main tumhe bilkul hurt nahi karna chahthi thi aur jab main ne kaha ki 'bandh kamre main tum sorry bolege tho kuch nahi hoga' tho mera matlab ye nahi tha ki tumhe sabke samne sorry bolni hogi and am really sorry manik ki tumhe sab ke samne meri vajah se ye sab kehna pada aur main ne kabi socha bi nahi tha ki tum tum aisa kuch karoge jiske vajah se

MANIK : jiske vajah se tumhe main pasandh ane lagu aur mere saath time spend karna chaho aur infact apne ayyappa pe sara blame dalkar unhe hi sab teek karne ke liye kaho hain na and winks smiling.

Nandini smiles and i dont know what you are talking about aur vaise main ne tumhare sorry ko accept karli hain kyu ki tumne pehli baar galthi ki hain aur next time kuchh

MANIK : madam main ne jo kuch bi kaha hain sirf uske liye sorry bola hain and leans towards her lekin jo kuch bi main ne kiya hain uske liye nahi and winks. tho let me make it clear to you tum ye math samajna ki ab tumhe koyi problem nahi hogi kyuki main kuch badalne vala nahi hoon and saying this he pulls her close to him. He brushes her cheeks softly and says ''you need to tolerate me and my torture'' and smirks with a smile. Nandu pushes him blusing and they both stand. Nandini was about to leave but manik holds her and slowly says in her ears ''agar wo chor mile tho batha dena ki usse chori karna bandh kar deni chahiye kyunki uske chehre par sab kuch saaf saaf dikhayi detha hain'' nandini pushes him and runs away smiling...
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PART 28 :

kabir and dhruv go out for some time and come back to class. They both go and try to sit beside alia but she stands up and takes them out of the class holding their hands.

Mukthi also follows them and they reach there regular spot where they generally sit and share all their feelings. kabir tries to say something but alia stops and tells them to stay quite. she was totally angry

ALIA : guys kya hora hain koyi hame bathayega bi ya nahi abi thodi der pehle jo classroom main hua wo sab kya tha manik i mean THE MANIK MALHOTRA sab ke saamne wo bi nandini jaisi ladki ke liye sur jukake maafi maanga how is that even possible manik ne aisa kya kiya ki usse apne gutano main jakar sab ke saamne maafi mangni padi aur haan dont even try to say any lie kyu ki am sure tum logon ko tho sab kuch patha hoga hi hain na I wanted to confront manik itself par uske paas vakth hi kaha hain aur infact uske paas hi kyu lagtha hain ab tum logon ke paas bi vakth nahi hain tho aap please jaldi se bathake chele jayiye i wont stop you

DHRUV : alia ye kaisi baaten karri ho tum hamare paas vakth kyu nahi hoga wo bi ham sabke liye pehle tum aisa sochna bandh kardo please aur manik ki baath kare tho hame bi exactly nahi patha hain ki usne kya kiya hain lekin aaj jis tharah usne maafi mangi hai tho hum dono bi pehle shock hue the lekin baad main realise kiya ki shayad wo zaroor nandini ko bahuth hurt kiya hoga jiski vajah se usne sab ke saamne maafi mangi aur infact hum bahuth kush bi hain kyunki usne jo bi kiya hain usse accept kiya hain

KABIR : exactly aur jis tharah se usne maafi mangi hain na am sure koyi mahan sa insan bi ye karne se pehle das baar sochega aur alia tum kyu aise react hori ho hame tho proud feel karna chahiye ki manik jaisa dosth hamari zindagi main hain aur iss baath ke liye bahuth kush bi hona chahiye

ALIA : meri problem vahi hain guys tum logo ko dikh nahi raha hain ki wo nandini humse manik ko cheenna chahthi hain haan tum log sahi kehre ho hame kush hona chahiye ki manik jaisa dosth hamari life main hain lekin nandini ki wajah se wo bahuth jald hamse door ho jayega aur main aisa bilkul nahi chahthi isi liye main aapko baar baar samjari hoon guys justtt

DHRUV : alia please tumhe aise kyu lagra hain ki manik hamse door chela jayega aaj subha hi usne hamse kaha na ki wo hamare saath hi rahega aur

MUKTHI : tho phir wo kaha hain dhruv kya wo ab iss vakth hamare saath hain nahi na and am sure wo uss nandini ke saath hi hoga. I personally dont have any problem with nandini aur abi jo kuch hua hain mujhe nahi patha ki uske peche reason kya tha but yes am happy ki manik main itni himmath hain ki wo apni galthi maan sake lekin guys at the same time main iss baath ko bi ignore nahi kar sakthi ki wo ham par bilkul dyaan nahi dera hain aur as you said usne kaha to tha ki wo hamare sath time spend karega lekin mujhe wo aisa karthe hue nazar nahi aara tho main aur kya bolu haan

KABIR : guys manik ne maafi tho mangli thi par usne kuch kaha nahi nandu se tho shayad isliye wo usse baath karne gaya hoga aur just imagine ki agar nandini ki jagah koyi aur bi hotha aur manik se galthi huyi hothi tho shayad wo thab bi vahi kartha jo aaj usne kiya aur i guess manik aur hamari baath jo hue suba usse beethe hue sirf 1 ganta hua hain aur hamara saara din abi baki hain tho i request you ki tum log please itni jaldi kuch bi decide math karna & am sure wo vapas ake sab se pehle humse hi bath karega

DHRUV : haan guys aur agar hum use nahi samjenge tho aur kon samjega and please usse gussa math hona aur nandini se bi kuch math kehnaaa

ALIA : I dont believe this ki wo ladki ne ek hi din main sab ko pagal kardi hain par its ok manik ke liye main kuch bi kar sakthi hoon aur haan guys main sirf aaj ek din dekhungi aur agar manik main koyi change nahi ayi tho

MUKTHI : tho we will surely think to handle it in our own way & am serious

KABIR : teek hain aur thab hum bi kuch nahi bolenge so now just relaxxx alia was about to say something but kabir interrupts her & they all go to canteen.

Manik here comes to class and sees that no one was peresnt in the class neither nandini nor FAB 5. He again goes to search them.

MANIK : ye sab kaha gaye aur nandini wo tho mujhse pehli hi nikal gayi thi tho ab thak class kyun nahi pahunchi and sees here and there. He was going downstairs but stops listening nandinis voice. He turns and peeps from door.

NANDINI : ( collecting rose petals ) ayyappaaa ye manik bi na bilkul pagal hain patha nahi main jo bi karu usse kaise patha chel jatha lekin haan main chor nahi hoon kyunki usne jo bi banaya hain na wo mere liye hi banaya hain tho wo saare cards mere hi huye aur agar koyi apni cheez le tho wo chori kaise ho sakthi hain tho isliye main chor nahi hoon aur agar ab wo dekhega na ki main ye petals bi leri hoon tho pakka mujhe nahi chodega isliye mujhe jaldi jaldi karna hoga ye sab and she collects all the rose petals and puts some of them in her bag. she holds remaining rose petals in her hands and "lekin patha hain ayyappa usne jo kuch bi kiya na bahuth sweet tha matlab sach main itne saare sorry cards aur roses aur aur wo chotu babies ke through sorry bolna it was just sooo beautiful and am really really happyyy so thank you" saying this gets up humming ''MERA MAN KEHNE LAGA''

Manik was standing exactly behind her and as soon as she turned she sees him standing very close to her. she suddenly shouts and looses her balance due to which all the rose petals go up in air. Manik holds her and all the rose petals fall on them. She tries to free herself but manik pulls her close and starts singing ''PAAS AAKE NA TU DOOR JAA''.

she starts blusing and looks down.

Manik smiles and smirking Haan tho aage ka bi gaau. Nandini pushes him and stands straight.

She totally become red & he just stares at her.

MANIK : hmmm tho madam ye jo abhi abhi thodi der pehle hora tha wo kya

NANDINI : kyaa kyaa nothing was happening na so what should i say haa

MANIK : (comes closer) acha kuch nahi hora tha like seriously haan sochlo

NANDINI : (moves far) haan kuch nahi hora tha lekin tum yaha kyu aaye??

MANIK : kyu tum akeli hi yaha aa sakthi hoo main nahi aur ek minute what were u doing here tumhe tho class main hona chahiye na & just smiles

NANDINI : haan wo main actually its none of your business so just leave

MANIK : what ye tumhara answer hain seriously??? vaise ye rose petalsss

NANDINI : dont even think to ask that question am not gonna answer you

MANIK : vaise tumhe kuch bolne ki zaroorath bi nahi hain kyunki main sab jaantha hoon aur ek baath batao jab main tumhare saamne hotha hoon tho kuch acha tho nahi kehthi hoo lekin apne ayyappa se tho sirf mere achayi ke baare main hi baath karthi rehthi hoo haan aisa kyun tum chaho thooo

NANDINI : tum na kuch zyada hi imagine karre ho aur aisa kuch nahi hain and trys to leave but manik once again stops her and collects all rose petals

MANIK : ye lo ( placing in her hands ) phir mujhe hi blame karogi ki meri vajah se hi sab choot gaya hai

She remains silent while he continues acha suno main na kisiko kuch nahi bataunga i promise and smiles. Nandini takes rose petals and smiles. They both leave together to attend the class...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing update...
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continue soon...😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Awshum awshum awshum !!heheh
seriusly it was awsome !! Continue soon!! Luvin it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Awesome updates
Loved it
Update the next part

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