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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 15 :
MANIK : ( keeping his hand on his cheek ) "so miss nandini moorthy doesn't loose anything not even a game". He becomes totally red blushing and smiles and only smiles. He then starts going to the canteen realising that it was already too late. Nandini reaches canteen before manik and sits with FAB 5. All start talking about her seeing her sitting with FAB 5 and she didn't knew y?

NANDINI : guys kuch problem hai kya main teek tho lagri hoon na patha nahi ye sab mujhe aise kyu gurre hai

ALIA : you don't look like normal human being na isliye nandini feels sad listening this and she just looks down

KABIR : exactly nandini you are not at all looking like a human being because you are an angel na so haan an angel who is cute, sweet and beautiful tho bas isliye everyone is staring at you and admiring you thats it.

NANDINI : ( looking him with huge smile ) aww so sweet

ALIA : ( In mind ) my foot!!! Ye kabir ko ho kya gaya hai this girl is smartly making everyone her side but nahi I can't let that happen I have to do something soon.

DHRUV : nandini ye buddy kkaha par hai wo tho thumhare saath hi tha na tho ab thak aaya kyu nahi hai

NANDINI : ( remembering her kiss ) wooo I don't know

KABIR : yaar thu tension math le wo vaise bi zyada door nahi reh saktha tho jaldi aajayega and winks nandini.

MUKTHI : wo kise door nahi rehsaktha aur tu ye kyuuu

KABIR : bas meri maa bas mera matlab tha ki wo humse door nahi reh saktha hum FAB 5 you know tu bi naaa..

ALIA : (luking nandu) haan vaise wo baath tho sahi hai chahe koyi bi aajaye par FAB 5 will always be together

MUKTHI : haan par aaj manik kuch alag lag raha hain

DHRUV : haan tho badlav achayi ke liye hi tho hotha hai

KABIR : wah dhruv wah thu phir se cha gaya aur ab main phir se kehna chahthu hu ki thu zaroor hamari wo vali bath ke baare main zaroor sochna ek baar haan plzzz

NANDINI : tumne abhi abhi ise kya kaha dhruv haaa???

KABIR : Kyaa nahi pagal hogayi kya main kyu isse dhruv bolunga main ne tho d d dosth kaha tha haan tum bi na

NANDINI : lekin mujhe dhruv sunayi diya tha bas isliye

KABIR : haan haan tumhe tho bas dhruv hi sunayi dega nandini blushes thinking about manik and he enters at the same time in the canteen. He sees nandini and blushes more than her and kabir notice both of them.

KABIR : "laal ishq ye malal ishq" sings the song smiling

MANIK : ( sitting opposite to nandini ) what kyaaa????

KABIR : exactly its my question ki what kya hai ye sab

MANIK : what does that mean kya hua hai sida sida bol

KABIR : your face just look at it tujhe kuch feel nahi hora manik realises that he was luking damn red blushing

ALIA : manik you totally became red kya hua are u ok???

KABIR : haan manik you are soo red kya hua and smirks

MANIK : ho just shut up what nonsence are you talking

KABIR : arrey ham pe yakin nahi hai na tho nandini ab tum hi isse batao ki ye kaise lag raha am sure tumhe tho patha hoga hi na ki ye itna laal kyu dikh raha hain and they both tried hard not to blush but was of no use

KABIR : arey bas bas main tho isliye kehra tha kyuki tere chehre par na kuch laga hai aur ye tere samne hai tho

MANIK : ( rubbing hands on his cheek ) haan tho ab???

DHRUV : chod na buddy ab wo itni asani se nahi jayega

KABIR : haan bai sach main itni asani se tho nahi jayega

MANIK : what aisa kya hai Jo itni asani se nahi jayega

KABIR : ab uski wajah tho bilkul tere samne hi tho hain Manik understands that they were pulling his leg and looks down simply smiling and doesn't say anything.

KABIR : sach main ye kidki ki wajah se dhul pura manik ke paas hi jara hai hain na manik and laughs loudly.

MUKTHI : guys whats wrong with you tum log ye kya baath kar rahe ho mujhe tho kuch samaj hi nahi aara hai

KABIR : samajne ki koshish bi math karna je nahi payegi and before you say anything we are getting late tho hum chelthe hai aur ye dono lunch karke hame join karenge

ALIA : nahi guys I will stay here with manik and I don't want to listen anything now so its final am staying here. K,D try to take A with them but she doesn't listen and K,M,D go to cass leaving three of them in the canteen. Manik and nandini start eating having glances on each other. Alia suddenly holds maniks hands and makes him eat with her hands. Nandini feels sad seeing this and was not able to sit there anymore so she leaves without saying a word. She enters into the class and sits silently on the bench. Mukthi comes to her and says to sit some where else since it was A and hers place.

KABIR : yaar mukthi teek hai na vaise bi tum log dono hi tho ho tho kuch nahi hoga let her sit na you can adjust

MUKTHI : par alia won't allow her to sit here u know na

DHRUV : haan lekin main usse bol unga wo manegi manik and alia enter the classroom at the same time and alia looks at nandini and starts shouting at her

ALIA : how dare you haan how dare u sit in our place

KABIR : listen alia tum log tho dono hi ho na so just lettt

ALIA : hum chahe dono ho ya ek it doesn't matter she cannot sit here aur ab koyi bi mujhse kuch nahi bolega nandini gets up silently and looks around. She couldn't see a single bench empty so was looking for a place. Harshad enter into classroom at the same time nd says "oo soo sad tho thumhe baitne ke liye place bi nahi hai"

NANDINI : its none of your business so just get lost.

HARSHAD : of course its my business baby u know na we are classmates right so I can say anything to you. By saying this he was trying to hold nandini shoulders but manik pulls her back and stands in her position. So now harshads hands were placed on maniks shoulders.

MANIK : haan so tell me harshad thu yehi bolna chahtha hai na ki my shoulders are very strong I know aur let me tell you that my hands are even more stronger and can do anything at anytime so you na what am I talking???

HARSHAD : (removing his hands) just stay away frm me

MANIk : ooo am so scared and starts laughing

HARSHAD : ho just shut up or else mere hath pitegaa

MANIK : haan sab janthe hai ki kaun pita tha aaj subha. Harshad leaves angrily and manik turns to nandini and see her. She doesn't see him while he was waiting for her to see him. Nandini was about to leave but then.

KABIR : haan tho nandini where will u sit yar kya karre.

NANDINI : woo am not interested in class so I'll go out

MANIK : nahi tumhe kahi jaane ki zaroorath nahi hai.

KABIR : haan nandini u don't need to go anywhere so just stand here and give us 2 min we will think sumthg. Manik gets an idea so he winks dhruv and even dhruv understands it so he simply goes and sit between alia and mukthi. Manik pulls nandini and sits on the bench leaning to the wall and nandini was lying on them. Finally she looked into his eyes and when he was about to ask what happened kabir coughs and they sit straight

KABIR : haan tho nandini ji aap yaha baitiye and smiles

NANDINI : nahi main ne kaha tha na I'll go out and she was going out but then manik signals kabir to stop her so he sits on the bench not letting her go. Now she was sitting in between kabir and manik. She tries to get up but manik and kabir pull her again and again so she finally sits looking at them angrily...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 16 :
Nandini just stays silent and doesn't even look at them.

ALIA : guys tumhe ho kya gaya hai I said you na ki muje iske saath nahi baitni hai but ya why will you listen to me main tho kuch hu hi nahi na tum logo ke liye right??? Nandini gets irritated & gets up to leave but M holds her hand & pulls her so forcefully that she falls on him.

MANIK : ( pulling her more close ) This is the last time am saying you don't even dare again to leave from here & looks angrily at her.They stay like that for some time.

ALIA : ( looking angryly ) manik you are in class room. Manik leaves her and they both sit straight silently.

ALIA : so you are very gud at playing games ri8 nandini

MANIK : listen alia just relax ye thu aise kyu behave karri

ALIA : I can't relax because I can't see FAB 5 breaking.

MANIK : what are you talking why will FAB 5 ever break?

ALIA : u guys are not able to see but I can clearly see it and first let her leave from here I can't sit with her sooo

MANIK : haan we are not able to understand the thing which is clearly seen to u but not for us aur ek baath nandu is sitting with us so u don't have to sit beside her. Nandini smiles listening him saying "nandu" and feels happy at the way he said as though he totally owns her

ALIA : ( in mind ) tho ye nandini se nandu bi ho gayi

NANDINI : 1 sec tum log yaha par kya kare ho

KABIR : nandini am sure tumhare sur par na koyi gehri chot lagi hai isliye tumhe achak kuch ho jatha aur aisee

NANDINI : wait mujhe kuch nahi hua hai pehle tum batao u people are 10 class na then why are sitting here manik and kabir realise that they still haven't said the truth to her and not even there real names. Kabir was about to say the truth but manik interrupts him and says "oo tho finally nandini madam ki subha ho gayi hain na"

NANDINI : (looking seriously) hogaya tho phir ab hasu??

MANIK : no please tum hasthe hue bahuth buri lagthi ho

NANDINI : aur tum chahe kuch bi karlo idiot hi lagthe ho

MANIK : how dare you call me that haan tum aise kaise

KABIR : shhh shut up and nandini let me say you one thing hum log 10 class nahi hai wo tho hum bas thumhare saath mazak karre the aur hum issi class main wo bi tumhare saath hi padenge and gives a smile nandini was angry listening this and was about to shout biology sir enters the class so everyone becomes silent.

SIR : gud after noon students since its our first class I don't want to bore you by taking class so let's just talk. All the students feel happy and excited listening this.

SIR : Acha chelo I guess thum sab log apne dosthon ko ache se jaanthe honge so let's play a game. I will ask u simple qestions about ur friends and u need to answer aur isse patha chel jayega ki kaun kisko better janta hai so here we go I want to start with with and looks nandini and says " new admission right " and smiles.

NANDINI : yes sir am new admission & i am nandini.

MANIK : (holding hands) arrey you are a rat not nandini.

NANDINI : just shut up & jerks her hand & sir sees them.

SIR : nandini lagtha hai tumhe pehle din hi ache frnds milgaye hai so I want to start with you because it will be a good start for game and don't worry since you are new I won't ask you any questions you just need to say what ever you knew about your friends till now that's it. Nandini having no option looks K,M & they smile at her

NANDINI : yes sirrr!!! I want to start with him showing K

SIR : nandini kya tumhare dosth ka koyi naam nahi hai?

NANDINI : haan sorry sir his name is manik and he is thee & stops sayings because everyone starts laughing

KABIR : ( In mind ) arrey yaar ab kya karoon & looks N.

NANDINI : ( In mind ) ye sab log has kyu rahe hain????

MANIK : manik!!! Mera naam it sounds so beautiful shayad isliye kyuki main ne apne naam ke baare main kabhi itna nahi socha hain ya phir isliye kyuki main iske muh se apne naam ko pehli baar sun raha hu ya phir and was admiring her innocence thinking about all that

SIR : ye pakka tumhara dosth hi na kyuki tum uske saath bait rahi ho lekin phir bi uska naam galath bolri ho

NANDINI : nahi sir ye main isse janthi hu ye manik hai aur ye aage kabir hai showing D & evryone laughs again

MANIK : ( In mind ) kyu iske muh se baar baar mere naam ko sunne ka man kar raha hai kyu achanak se mujhe mera naam itna acha lagne laga hai kyu kyu kyu?

SIR : Acha tho ab ye math kehna ki Jo tumhare baaju hai uska naam dhruv hai ponting manik and smiles

NANDINI : haan sir wo dhruv hi hain showing manik. Then manik comes into present and sees N confused.

SIR : nandini tum pehle unke naam tho ache se jaanlo phir baad main dosthi ke baare main sochna aur kabir you now stand up & say all your real names understand

KABIR : yes sir and slowly turns towards nandini and once again introduces everyone and this time with the real names that is K as K,D as D and M as M. Nandini gets totally shocked hearing this and have tears rolling in her eyes seeing everyone laughing saying FAB 5 made nandini fool. Kabir feels sad and even manik and dhruv feel sorry for her. Sir says every one to be silent and suddenly gets a call so goes out. Nandini stands shocked and doesn't say anything. Kabir and manik shakes her calling her name. She slowly looks at them with eyes totally filled with water and when kabir was about to explain her she simply pushes him and goes out of the class room running...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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( PART 17 ) :

KABIR : nandini!!! yar ye main ne kya kardiya.

DHRUV : nahi kabir ye tum ne akele nahi kiya hai galthi hum sabki hain tho tu aise math bol

ALIA : guys just leave wo apni marsi se cheli gayi na tho why are you reacting so much ???

MANIK : exactly guys she has a point we shouldn't waste time by reacting like this in fact we need to act by leaving now so chelo

ALIA : have u gone mad why will you go to her

KABIR : kyunki hamari galthi hai aur iske liye hame hi uske pas jana hoga so no more ques

MUKTHI : as you wish guys we can't stop you

KABIR : thanks yar we will come back soon SIR : ye nandini aise kyu cheli gayi aur tum log kaha jaane ki thayari kar rahe ho kya hua?

KABIR : arrey sir ye puchiye ki kya nahi hua.
Abhi abhi tho dosth bane the par aapke game ke chekkar main na pura ulta ho gaya. Wo cheli gayi sir naaraz hokar bina kuch bole aur bina kuch sune aur ab aap hi batayiye sir hame kya karna chahiye kaise usse bataye ki

SIR : bas kabir tum log jo bi karna chahthe ho wohi karo lekin mere class ke baad ab nahi.

KABIR : nahi sir nahi bahuth der ho jayegi please sir vaise bi aada class tho katham ho chuka hai na and i promise hum jaldi use vapas layenge please sir hame janedijiye nahi to wo ro roke pure school ko ansu se bardegi

SIR : Acha bas teek hai par jaldi vapas aana and they start running to search for nandini. They almost search every where and doesn't find her. They will be so worried as she was new to school and didn't even know anything.

KABIR : yar I hurted her badly mujhe tho apne aap pe gussa aara hai how could I just do it.

MANIK : nahi kabir just relax she will be fine.

DHRUV : haan kabir wo hame sache dosth ki tharah treet karthi hai isliye humse naraz hai & am sure hum manayenge tho wo manjayegi

MANIK : Yes we haven't checked there and starts running. D and K follows him. Nandini is sitting on the terrace of the school and Ayyappaaa!!! Why why are you doing all this to me you know na I don't have a habit of all this pehle I got stuck in boys washroom due to that harshad and when I was feeling happy that I atleast got few good friends you made me expose to the truth that even they were playing games with me kyu ayyappa kyu kya yaha par sab insaan ke saath hi kelthe hain. kya unhe feelings ke baare main kuch patha nahi hotha.ya phir shayad main hi pagal hoon Jo sabko itni jaldi trust karthi hoon main apko hamesha kehthi thi na ki mujhe enemies nahi hai tho isliye aap mujhe itne saare enemies bej diye na wo bi ek saath.aaj school ka pehla din aur main yaha baitkar rori hu thnx ayyapa. K,D & M stood behind her & listned everythng.

KABIR : Bas kar meri maa khoon nikalra hoga tere ayyappa ke khaan se isliye ab bas bi kar. Nandini turns behind and sees them standing she gets up & starts moving but they stop her

KABIR : nandini am sorry am really sorry woo

NANDINI : arreyy nahi sir ye aap kaisi baate kar rahe hai sorry tho mujhe bolna chahiye na aap logo se main aise class ke beech main se aagayi tho aap logo ko insult hua hoga na but don't worry main abi class main jakar sab ko bataungi ki you only won and I am a fool.

DHRUV : nandini please aisa math bolo hame patha hai ki tumhe bura laga hai aur lagna bi chahiye lekin sach main hame tumhe fool bananeka intension bilkul bi nahi tha hum tho bas masthi main ye sab karthe hai lekin tum

NANDINI : main kya kabir ho sorry dhruv na right mujhe kya samaj kar pagal banaya hain yahi na ki boli dikhthi hai kuch nahi patha hai school main nayi hai tho kuch nahi karpayegi

KABIR : bas bahuth ho gaya tujhe kya lagtha hai hum log subha se sirf natak karre the, haan main mantha hu jhoot bolkar humne tujhe bahuth hurt kiya hai par iska ye Matlab nahi hai ki tu Jo chahe wo bole humne Sirf apne naam badle hai aur uske liye sirf main responsible ho kyuki woo jhut main ne bola tha & nandini tries to say something but then

KABIR : meri baath katham nahi huyi hai aur main ne canteen main Jo tujhse kaha wo natak nahi tha I genuinely cared for you hum ne tujhe sathaya tha kyunki tujhe apna dosth mana tha bas mera hogaya ab tum bolo chelo jaldi & nandini just remains silent seeing him.

DHRUV : nandini kya hua tum abi bi naraz ho humse bolo na sach main even am really sory

NANDINI : kya bolu kuch samaj nahi aara hai

KABIR : iske alawa kuch bi bolo paka chelega in fact daudega bi hain na dhruv. haan to kya?

NANDINI : kehne ke liye kuch bacha hi nahi to

KABIR : listen gusse main tha tho am sry I didn't mean to hurt u agar tum kaho tho main tumhare maafi ke liye kuch bi kar saktha hoon

NANDINI : 100 set ups says turning back and

KABIR : kyaaa as mmm haan 100 na 1 0 0 100 teek hain aur main akela kyu ye kamine bi karenge naa

NANDINI : haan tho chelo I'll count start now

KABIR : pakka na numbers athe na 100 thak

NANDINI : start now. K and D start doing setups but maniks stands simply. Nandini comes running to k & D and hugs them. She says sorry and they too say sorry and it was beginning of their new journey of friendship. They start moving but manik holds nandini and says K & D to leave as he have some work with nandini. They both walk away leaving them together..
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PART 18:

As soon as kabir and dhruv leave manik pulls nandini so close that they were feeling each others breath. She looks into his eyes only for few seconds and simply turns her head away. Manik holds her more tightly and pulls her once again that this time her nose touches his one. She still doesn't look at him and looks downwards. He gets angry and makes her look at him holding her chin. She jerks his hand & turns her head making an angry face.

MANIK : can't you see that am standing over here right in front you just look at me damid. Nandini acts such that she doesn't even care about him and what ever he say. Manik looses his control and gets so much angry that he holds her hands with so much of strength that the marks of his fingers were placed on her hands and were clearly seen. She feels hurt and just closes her eyes tightly without saying a single word. He holds her more stronger hoping that she might say anything but even this time she won't say anything. He burns totally red with anger and "so tum kuch nahi bologi kuch bi nahi right??" Nandini slowly opens her eyes and she was feeling so much hurt that her eyes were totally filled with tears. As soon as he looks into her eyes he feels her pain and slowly starts loosening his hold realising how hard he held her. He doesn't leave her completely and neither hold her strongly. Both were silent for few minutes. Nandini tries to move away from him but soon realises that's it was hard.

MANIK : I said you clearly not to dare again to leave from class and you simply ignored it. Nandini looks him very angrily & only looks.

MANIK : kyaa kyaa dekhri hoo aise aur tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahi hoo dimak ke saath saath zuban bi kaam karna band kardiya kya? And again there was no reply from nandini.

MANIK : ( In mind ) goddd she is not even saying a single word kya kya karu.I am dying to listen to her. I just want to talk to her once. Nahi ye aise nahi manegi I need to do sumthg "So you are not going to talk to me no matter how louder I shout " & nandu signals as yes.

MANIK : just think once are you sure na that you won't talk to me no matter what ever I do. Nandini raises her eyebrows again as a yes.

MANIK : ok then so let me see how long could you actually stick to u r words & smiles. Nandini doesn't understand why he smiled & he slowly moves his hand from her shoulder down to her fingers and holds her hands. Nandini starts loosing her angry and feels butterflies in her stomach & just looks down.

MANIK : kya hua kuch bolna chahthi hooo???

Nandini controls herself and stays silent. Manik smiles and places his another hand slowly on her waist and pulls her more closer. Her one hand is placed on his chest due to the pull. Manik sees her hand on him & says "haan haan main yahi par hoon bolo na" & smirks. Nandini removes her hand and turns her head. Manik makes her head turn to him and this time with more love & more care. She looks him and blushes. He touches her forhead pulling her more close. Her eyes get widened and her eyebrows gets raised with his touch. He smiles looking at her and slowly rubs her eyebrows making her calm. He cutely rubs his hands on her cheeks and Her heart was beating so fastly that she even thinks that she might die at any moment & she just closes her eyes. He was not able to control himself and starts rubbing her nose with his one. She was still closing her eyes and couldn't dare to open them. He smiles at her cuteness and slowly blows air on her face she opens her eyes and sees him. He looks at her lips and leans forward to her. There lips were so close and had only an inch distance. Nandini places her hand on his chest and " manik ". He looks at her and realises what he was doing and slowly leaves her.

They both feel awkward & M breaks silence.

MANIK : age bolo muje mera naam patha hai nandini give him a serious look & was moving

MANIK : u were borned itself cheater cock or else

NANDINI : cheater cock & me like seriously??

MANIK : (In mind) finally she spoke thank god "tumhe yaha par koyi aur dikh raha hai kya??"

NANDINI : am not a cheater cock says angrily

MANIK : acha lekin kaam tho aise hi karthi ho

NANDINI : what kya kya kiya hain main ne???

MANIK : you said you won't talk to me what ever I do but you called my name na so now y were you leaving without talking to me bolo??

NANDINI : look whose talking duniya ka sabse bada cheater cock like sach main haan

MANIK : come again cheater cock aur main?

NANDINI : tumhe yaha par koyi aur dikhra kya

MANIK : don't act smart & bolo wht did I do

NANDINI : Tho tumhe nahi patha tum ne kya kiya hain teek hai main batathi hu tum ne cheting ki hai aur uski vajah se hi main boli

MANIK : khud apni baath pe nahi tik paayi tho mujhe blame kari ho haan ye acha hai tumara

NANDINI : ho helo tum to bolo hi math ye sab

MANIK : kyu lecture denika ri8 sirf tumhe hai

NANDINI : what the hell main lecture dethi hu

MANIK : tum lecture hi dethi ho aur kuch nahi

NANDINI : Acha fine listen you were totally lost few minutes back aur agar main tumhe nahi rokthi tho you would have kkii and stops few minutes of silence and then again manik asks her why she was not talking to him

NANDINI : why do you even care haan bolo

MANIK : listen i thought that I was wrong wo jo kuch bi main ne kiya tha was just for fun aur vaise bi jab tum K aur D se bath kar sakthi ho tho mujhse kyu nahi kar sakthi haan bolo

NANDINI : wo log alag hai aur tum alag hoo

MANIK : what nonsence mujhe bi unke tharah hi do ankh hain, do kaan hain ,do pair hain aur do haath bi hain tho main alag kaise hua ha

NANDINI : its not at all funny and am serious

MANIK : u know what main yaha aya tha sirf ye batane ki Jo bi main ne kiya was for fun

NANDINI : haan tho bol diya naa ab jao goo

MANIK : haan vaise bi tumse baath karne ke liye main nahi marrahu aur ye terrace tumhara nahi hai so if you have a prb then u can leave

NANDINI : haan tumhe ye bata neki zaroorath nahi hai aur haan main bi tumse baath karne ko nahi marriru hoon & she leaves from there

MANIK : what the hell ye samjthe kya hain apne aapko wait main yaha par hamara fight solve karne aaya tha aur use solve kiye bine hi usse phirse lada ohhh god ye ladki mujhe pagal karrdegi...
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Just awesome...loving it...continue soon dear
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the part was too cute
the way cabir said to her
n 100 sit ups wow good part
n funny fight between manan
it was good
continue son
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Read all parts in one go
nice storyline
awesome updates
cont soon
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PART 19 :

Nandini while coming down from terrace "ayyappaa usse kya lagtha hai wo jo chahe wo karle par main usse kuch nahi bolungi vo aise kaise kar saktha hai kya usse sach main nahi patha ki main usse kyu gussa hu ya phir" and suddenly stops for a while,she just thinks and "ek minute main usse gussa kyu hoon??? Usne tho sahi bola tha na ki jab main kabir aur dhruv ko maaf kar sakthi hoon tho usse kyu nahi.main un dono se tho normally baath karri hu lekin manik se kyu nahi. Kya lunch main jab alia manik ko kana kilarithi unhe saath dekh karrr shhh nandini ye thu kya bolri hain tujhe kyu farak padega unhe saath dekh kar wo giraffe alia ke saath rahe na rahe kuch bi karle tujhe usse koyi Lena dena nahi hai aur haan main usse isliye gussa hu kyuki usne mujhe torture kiya suba se torture????? ayyappaa why am I even talking about him" and leaves to the class. She enters into the class and feels relaxed knowing that sir had already left the class long time back. K,D were sitting with M,A on single bench chit chatting. Nandini goes there but doesn't say anything seeing alia & just sits back to them.

KABIR : kya hua nandini phir se kuch huaaa??

NANDINI : nahi kuch nahi hua main teek hoon

DHRUV : haan par tum udaas dikhri hoo kayi

NANDINI : jaise tum sochre ho vaise nahi hai

KABIR : aur tume kaise pata ki wo kya sochra

NANDINI : kabirrr shut up please chodo naaa

DHRUV : acha teek hai vaise manik kaha hai?

KABIR : ( slowly ) jab ye yaha hai tho wo bi & manik enters into classroom & sits with K,D while alia gets up leaving in anger seeing manik & evn mukthi follows A & they go out. M was between K,D and were facing nandini.

KABIR : dekha dhruv main tho abi abi bolra tha na ki M jaldi hi ayega to ye dekh & smiles

MANIK : haan to what's so funny in this hmm

KABIR : nahi issme funny kya ho saktha hain manik looks at nandini who was sitting exactly opposite to him and expects her to look him too. Nandini knows that he was looking her but doesnt see him & stays calm.

MANIK : ( murmers ) nakre tho dekho madam ke patha hai use ki am looking at her lekin phir be mujhe nahi dekhri aur dekhegi bi kyuu

KABIR : dekh zara dhere bol hum sab yahi baite hai kuch 1000 km door nahi hame tho sab sunayi dera hi lekin nandini bi sunlegee

MANIK : nahi nahi main tho bas ye kehra tha

DHRUV : haan buddy hame patha hain thu kya kehra tha to kuch bi bolne ki zarorath nahi hai

KABIR : haan haan sab patha hai so just relax M just remains silent thinking it was better.

KABIR : haan vaise nandini tho game haar gayi na mera matlab hai she didn't kiss the rat na tho main jaha that manik ko jaantha hoon he might have definetly given a punishment & manik & nandini have a eye lock listening this

KABIR : haan to guys kya aisa kuch hua hai jo hame bilkul patha na ho aur agar haan to kya M & N remember that beautiful moment and all that pictures start flashing in their minds. ( MAINE KHUD KO DEDIYA HAI TUJKO BG )

Manik : ( In mind ) how can I even forget about that moment. The way she came close to me, the way she smoothly lifted herself to match me closing her beautiful eyes,the way she placed her cute tiny lips on my cheeks giving me a mjr heart attack was breathtaking aur nandu main bas itna kehna chahtha hu ki "TU NE CHUA THO MAIN DHADAKNE LAGA" & I really mean it & was smiling all the while.

NANDINI : ( In mind ) punishment!!!which was the most beautiful one till today. I don't know why did I even kissed him. The way he looked at me with glitters in his eyes and the way he smiled looking at me when i kissed him was so beautifull. He just looked as innocent as a new born baby all the while aur manik main tumhe itna kehna chahthi hu ki "AA TUJH MAIN BITAO RATIYA AA TU MUJH MAIN KAYI PE BAS JAA" and was smiling too. Kabir and dhruv both look at them & smile too

KABIR : yaha par baite sabi logo ko bathana chatha hu ki kripaye karke aap yahi par baitiye aur kisi doosri duniya pe math jaayiye & listening this M & N come out of their thughts and realise that they were smiling madly.

KABIR : welcum to our world manan & smiles M and N say in unison what manan????

KABIR : arrey manik and nandini ko short form main badal diya bas & smiles smirking.

DHRUV : buddy thu itna koya koya sa kyu hai.

MANIK : nahi buddy aisa kuch nahi hain sachi nandini makes an excuse & leaves from der.

KABIR : thu ne phir se kya kiya, kya bola use?

MANIK : acha to main hi kuch kar saktha aur bol saktha hoon madam to bahuth boli hai na

DHRUV : kya hua buddy tu guse main kyu hai

MANIK : kya karu yar main is ladki ka kuch samaj main nahi aara hai ek baar rothi hai aur ek baar hasthi hai aur thodi der main phir se gussa karthi hain main karu tho kyaa karu bol

KABIR : pehle ek lambi saans le jaldi le naaa.

MANIK : dekh kabir tu pitega mere hath sachi

DHRUV : acha buddy tu saaf saaf bol kya hua

MANIK : pehle tho madam mujhe dekh bi nahi rahi thi aur jab mushkil se main usse baath ki tho main ne bolo ki Jo kuch bi maine kiya wo bas mazak tha lekin nahi woo kaha manegiii

KABIR : haan tho tune bas itna hi kaha kyaa??

MANIK : haan aur ye bi pucha ki wo jab tum logo se bath karsakthi hai to mujhse kyu nahi

DHRUV : thu ne usse sorry tho bola tha naa??

MANIK : haan wooo wooo sssoorryyy sry

KABIR : haan tho ye prb hai ab tho samja na?

MANIK : hmmm chodo yar kya tum log bii naa

KABIR : vaise dhruv dekh raha hai na thu isse

DHRUV : haan kabir dekhra hu wo bi ache se

MANIK : shut up aisa kuch nahi hai sach mai

DHRUV : haan to hum ne kab bolo ki kuch hai

MANIK : buddy thu bi iske saath jud gaya kya

KABIR : hello wo hamesha se mujhse juda ta

MANIK : acha teek hai lekin sach main aisa kuch nahi hai aur jaise tum log samja rahe ho

DHRUV : hum Jo bi samaj rahe hai sahi samaj rahe hai aur tere liye bahuth kush bi hai sachi aur ab ye sab chod aur jake usse manale chel

MANIK : mujhe nahi manana hai kisiko chod

KABIR : sochle beta pachthayega baad main

MANIK : haan soch liye aur main main nahi and jumps from the bench and says main yaha nahi bait saktha mujhe kuch kaam hai and leaves smiling even kabir and dhruv smile looking him...
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Kya likhti ho yaar vo b ekdam rajdhani express ki speed pe ...maza aa rha h ...keep writing. ...I'll keep reading ...am loving this aloott bas ek complain h ek din jaldi se poora kr do like ek he din me itna sb dika rhi ho so you could have showed many days passing with all these drama's... anyways it was so cute yaa kabir nd dhruv dono mast h nd ye alia mukti ka zyada ho rha h mukti ko itna follow krne ki kya zarvat h Isse ...continue ...nd bring lots more in this ...am to enjoying this ...šŸ˜†
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PART 20 ) :

Nandini goes to the washroom and is standing in front of the mirror saying ''Ayyappaa what is wrong with me main kyu baar baar uske baare main hi sochri hoon. Thodi der pehle hi main ne khud ko samjaya tha na ki mujhe usse koyi lena dena nahi hai lekin phir bi kyu vo mere saamne aathe hi main sab kuch bhool jaathi hoon aur kisi aur hi duniya main cheli jaathi hoon aur abhi class main patha nahi main main kya kya sochri thi, main aise soch bi kaise sakthi hoon nahi nandini nahi thu ab se uski tharaf dekhegi bi nahi haan thu agar usse dekhegi hi nahi tho kuch sochegi kaisi right tho teek hai ab kuch bi ho jaye main use apne paas aane nahi dungi''.
she comes out of the washroom and suddenly she feels a very strong hand pulling her behind she looks back but before she could speak anything in a very short period of time she was pinned to the wall in the corridor and was standing between two long hands placed on either side of her and those hands were none other than THE MANIK MALHOTRA. Nandini gets angry and shouts to move his hands but manik just smiles seeing her shouting.

NANDINI : what the hell tum has kyu rahe ho and how dare you haan how dare you pull me like this tum samajthe kya hoo apne apko haan just justtt

MANIK : shhh stop shouting i know very well what am doing aur agar

NANDINI : aur agar main chup nahi rahungi tho kya karoge bolo haan bolo

MANIK : (leaning towards her) aur agar nahi tho mujhe tumhe chup karana ache se aatha hai and it wont even take a long time for that you know and makes a signal showing her lips. haan tho nandu u know na what i mean. Nandini just bites her lips and looks aside without saying anything

MANIK : mujhe seriously patha nahi tha ki tum itni jaldi chup ho jaogi nahi tho main ye bahuth pehle hi try kar chuka hotha and smirks looking at her.

NANDINI : stop all this nonsense tum mujhe yaha par kyu le aaye wo bolo

MANIK : pehli baar tum ne apne dimag ko use kiya and i must say you ki ye tumne acha kiya aur regularly use karthi raho na acha hoga tumhare liye.

NANDINI : main tho karungi hi par mujhe lagtha hai ki tumhara brain kuch kam kaam kara hai kyunki you now jab koyi question puchtha hai tho usse answer dethe hai par its ok tumhe na bahuth time lagega sab samajne main

MANIK : kaise how do u always manage to put all this bullshit infront of me

NANDINI : tum kaho tho sahi hain aur agar main kahu tho bullshit hain like seriously haan aur vaise bi why do u always manage to come infront me and listen your so called bullshit then,am not forcing u to listen it naa then?

MANIK : just shut up mere paas time zyada nahi hain ye bakwaas ke liye

NANDINI : wo tho dikhhi raha hai kiske paas time hai aur kiske paas nahi

MANIK : you know what main yaha par tumhe laya tha to say sorry par nahi why was i even thinking to say sorry wo bi tumse mujhe laga tha ki shayad i was wrong par nahi mujhe abhi bilkul aisa feel nahi hora hai patha hai kyu because you dont deserve my sorry at all. Tum ho ek aur dikthi ek ho and i will definitely prove this to everyone some or the other day thab thak bass

NANDINI : (jerks his both the hands from either sides) main bas sun rahi hu tho iska mathlab ye nahi hai ki main kuch bolungi nahi main kaisi bi dikhu, kaisi bi rahu wo tumhari problem nahi hai main apni marzi se rehthi hu aur uske liye mujhe kisiki permission ki zaroorath nahi hai aur agar tumhe lagtha hai ki main tumhare sry ke layak nahi ho tho wo bi tumhari problem hain aur ha main tumse bath bi nahi karna chahthi hu tho mujse door rehna

MANIK : Tho tumse baath karne main mujhe bi koyi interest nahi hain aur

NANDINI : aur isliye tum baar baar mere peche aakar mujhe kabi class room main aur kabhi aise corridor main pakad kar kayi jaane nahi dethe ho

MANIK : hoo please tum tho aisa bolo hi math morning in classroom i was helping u for which u even said thnx aur agar ab ki baath kare tho yes i brought u here but now agar tumhari aankein hain to tum dekh sakthi ho ki am not blocking your way so it means tum yaha se easily ja sakthi ho aur am sure tum aise karogi nahi kyu ki tum khud mere paas rehna chahthi ho

NANDINI : tumhe imagination itni pasand hai tho main kuch nahi kar sakthi

MANIK : excuse me imagination tum kehri ho ki main ye sab imagine karau

NANDINI : exactly kyu ki aisa kuch possible hi nahi hain main aur tumharee

MANIK : acha possible nahi hain right isliye tum subha class main wo sab

NANDINI : kyaa what are you trying to say haan i just did wht u said tho

manik holds nandinis waist tight and pulls her close. He looks into her eyes and ''like really i said you to kiss me haan acha teek hai chelo maan lethe hai ki tumne wohi kiya jo maine kaha lekin ye batao kya maine mention kiya tha ki tumhe kaha par kiss karni hai you could have kissed me on my hand right aur infact kayi par bi kyu u would have just given a flying kiss naa???''

I have said you right tum jo dikhthi ho wo tum ho nahi and there could not be a better reason to prove you that i always say only right things aur vaise bi tum jaisi ladkiyon ke sath main apna time waste nahi karna chahtha got it
Nandini couldnt speak a word after listening to him. His words "tum jaisi ladkiya" were repeatedly played in her ears.she was just blaming herself for what ever she did. she was feeling hatred for herself and she didnt knew when her tears started rolling from her eyes. Manik saw her tears and realised what he said just before few minutes and regreted it badly. He slowly wiped her tears and she came out from her thoughts. she just looked him asking many questions through her eyes and he could clearly understand them. He was not able to see her eyes directly. he loosens his hold on her saying ''SSOORRYYY''. she runs outside and even though he wanted to stop her he couldnt.

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