MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE INDEX ON PG 1 - Page 5

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PART 23 :

Manan were sitting in their own respective cars and thinking about each other.

MANIK : tumhe dekhthe hi baagthe hue aakar apni bahon main le lena chahtha tha nandini,tumhare aanson ponchna chahtha tha,tumse puchna chahtha tha ki tum kaisi ho,tumhe batana chahtha tha ki main bahuth dar gaya tha tumhe apni aanko ke samne na paa kar,batana chahtha tha ki tumhe dekh ne ke baad hi meri sanse chelni lagi jo kafi der se ruk gaye the

NANDINI : tumhe dekhthe hi tumhare paas akar tumhare baahon main khud ko bhool jana chahthi thi manik, apne saare aanson ponchna chahthi thi, tumhe batana chahthi thi ki tumhe apne paas na paakar main bahuth dar gayi thi,tumhe batana chahthi thi ki jab maine tumhe dekha thab jaake mujhe sukoon mila aur chahthi thi ki bas hum dono ek dusre ke bahon main

NANDINI : bahuth kuch kehna chahtha tha nandini par tumne mujhe dekha bi nahi aur na hi mujhe kuch bolne ka mauka diya kyu nandini kyu kyuuu??

NANDINI : bahuth kuch bathana chahthi thi manik tumhe par kya karthi kaise tumhare paas aathi tumhari wo baatei abi bi mujhe sunayi dere hai tumhara wo chehra main nahi bhool paari. ''tum jaisi ladkiyan'' tumhare muh se suni ye teen shabd abi bi mujhe tumhare paas aane se rok rahe hain.

MANIK : mujhe nahi patha tha ki mere muh se nikle hue shabd hi mujhe itni badi saza denge aur agar patha hotha tho main aisa kabi nahi kehtha.main woo saari baatein nahi kehna chahtha tha nandini aur main jaantha hoon galthi hogayi hai mujhe aur wo bi bahuth badi lekin agar tum baath nahi karogi tho main tumhe apni saari baatei kaise samjaunga nandini kaise?

NANDINI : tumhare paas aane ke liye aur tumse baath karne ke liye patha nahi mujhe kitna vakth aur lagega manik tumne mujhe bahuth hurt kiya hai

MANIK : main jantha hu nandini ki maine tumhe bahuth hurt kiya hai aur tumhe thoda vakth zaroor lagegi par ek baar mujhse baath karlo nandini main dil se tumhe maafi mangna chahtha hu aur tumhare maafi ke liye kuch bi kar saktha hu and i promise iss baar tumhe bilkul hurt nahi karonga

NANDINI : kuch galthiyo ke liye sorry kaafi nahi hotha hai manik aur shayad is baar jo tumne kiya uske liye bi maafi nahi hai kyunki ek ladki kuch bi seh sakthi hai lekin apni character ke baare main kuch nahi sun sakthi hain

MANIK : nandini agar mujhe tumhe hurt karna aatha hai tho apni galthi ko sudarna bi aatha hain and i will make sure ki jaldi main sab kuch teek kardo

NANDINI : tumhe jo karna hai karlo manik par is baar main nahi maanungi.

MANIK : I promise nandini tum zaroor manogi kyuki tumhare paas doosra option nahi hoga aur vaise bi jab MANIK MALHOTRA kisiko manatha hai tho koyi bi zyada der naraz nahi reh saktha hain and he comes out of his thoughts when kabir shouts his name loudly. He just smiles and goes to his house. Nandini also reaches her house and goes up directly and falls on her bed. even manik goes and falls on bed directly and again both start thinking about each other. Manik wears a constant smile on his lips thinking about the entire day infact about his first meeting with nandini,his first hug with her,his first kiss to her & so many ''firsts with her'' & smiles & only smiles. Here nandini starts saying ''Ayyappa ye manik ye kya hai wo mujhe bahuth hurt kartha hain na lekin phir bi kyu jab bi main problem main hothi ho wo mere saath hi hotha hai hamesha always he saves me from that harshad aur aaj tho aap ne dekha na kaise maar raha tha harshad ko aur agar main nahi rokthi tho shayad harshad would have even died lekin manik ko itna gussa kyu aaya wo khud hurt kare tho teek hai lekin koyi aur kare tho usse maar dega whyyy ayyappa whyyy main kuch samaj nahi paari hoon whyyy'' and closes her eyes. Manik face flashens in her mind,his smile,their first hug,their first kiss and a smile comes slowly thinking all that and then suddenly she says ''ayyappa kyu why manik mere school ke pehle din jo kuch bi hua hai wo sab manik se hi related hain kyu ayyappa kyu bolo aur main kyu wo sab yaad aathe hi muskurari hoon jab ki mujhe uss par gussa aana chahiye ussne tho mujhe hurt kiya na tho phir main kyu hamari saari incidents yaad karke kush hori hoon ayyappa aap chahthe kya ho kyu mujhe pareshan kar rahe ho thodi der pehle hi main ne soch liya tha ki main usse maaf nahi karungi lekin phir bi kyu main uske baare main hi sochri hoon and stops for a while and again says ayyappa main aapse baath bi kyu kaari hoon'' and goes to take shower. Here Manik also goes to take shower...

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PART 24 :

Nandini gets ready and goes down to talk to her mother. Her mother was busy cutting vegetables for the dinner. Nandini slowly walks to her and hugs her from behind. Her mother holds her hand and makes her sit infront of her

NANDINI MOM : kyaaa hua beta thu itni udaas kyu hai sab teek hain naa?

NANDINI : haan maa sab teek hain kuch nahi hua hai mujhe bas aise hiii

NANDINI MOM : nandu main teri maa hu aur thuje dekhe hi batha sakthi hu ki thu teek nahi hai.kya hua beta bolo na. Main tho maa ke saath saath teri dosth bi hu na tho phir mujhe nahi bathayegi ki thu udaas kyu hai haan?

NANDINI : wo maa actually school ka pehla din hai tho thak gayi bas isliye

NANDINI MOM : nandu thu pehle kabi bi school se aane ke baad thaki huyi nahi dikhi aur main thuje itna tho jaanthi hu ki thu kab thaki hui hain aur kab udass isliye agar thuje nahi bathana hai tho teek hai & stands to leave

NANDINI : maa please baito na and makes her sit. am sorry maa jhut bolne ke liye wo aaj school main itna kuch hua ki bas mera mood teek nahi hain

NANDINI MOM : kyaa hua nandu kisine thuje kuch bola kya main papa se

NANDINI : maa pleas aap papa ko kuch math bolna aur vaise bi main unhe ye sab choti choti baathe bathakar pareshan nahi karna chahthi so please

NANDINI MOM : jab thu hi kehrahi hai ki choti choti baathe hai tho kyu itna pareshan ho rahi hain uski vajah se, acha chel ab batha bi de kya hua and nandini tells everything whatever happened with her because of that harshad. she says that kabir,dhruv,manik are her friends and that they helped her through out the day.she doesnt say about all her incidents with manik but only says that he saved her from harshad. she starts thinking about manik again whether she should say her mom about him or not

NANDINI MOM : Itna sab kuch hogaya aur thu mujhe ye ab bathari hai aur upar se chahthi hai ki main tere papa ko ye sab kuch na bathao kaise?

NANDINI : maa please mujhe kuch nahi hoga manik hai na and stops and again mera mathlab hai manik,kabir,dhruv hai na tho mujhe kuch nahi hoga

NANDINI MOM : acha laga sunke ki thuje unpar itna barosa hai aur main kush bi hu ki tuje ache aur sache dost mile hai jo hamesha tera sath denge

NANDINI : haan maa wo tho hain agar main thodi der bi nahi dhiki na tho pagal ho jaathe hai sab aur mera kayal bi bahuth rakthe hai aur manik thoo

NANDINI MOM : haan bol na hamesha manik par kyu ruk jathi hai tu bol

NANDINI : wo kuch nahi chodo na maa aur ye batao dinner par kya banra?

NANDINI MOM : u r favourite daal chawal vaise ek baath puchu sach bol

NANDINI : haan maa pucho na main aapse sach kaha chupathi hu haan

NANDINI MOM : ye jo manik hai tera utna close friend nahi hain ya phir

NANDINI : nahi maa wo mera dosth hain lekin aap aisa kyu puchre hooo??

NANDINI MOM : acha tho ye batha ki wo acha hai ya bura aur sach bolna

NANDINI : manik achaa hmmm nahi buraaa hmmm nahi patha nahi ma

NANDINI MOM : ye kya jawab hua thu ne hi kaha na ki wo tera dosth hai

NANDINI : haan maa dosth hai aur please aap jyada sawal math karo and leaves from there giving a kiss to her mom saying thnx. she goes up again and sits near her window thinking whether manik is good or bad or both. Manik in his house was sitting in balcony thinking about nandini.''ye mere saath kya hora hai main kisse kaho kisse ye saari bathe share karu and suddenly becomes sad and kaash maa ki aap mere saath hothe meri saari baathe sune ke liye bachpan se lekar aaj thak aapke liye aur aapke pyar ke liye main hamesha tharsa hoon maa aur aisa kyu hotha hai ki aapko mere alawa har kisi ke liye vakth hotha hai jab ki duniya ki saari maaye apne bachon ke liye hi apna saara vakth dethe hai and starts crying badlyyy. In the night both sleep thinking what would happen next morning. Manik suddenly wakes up and sees the time. It was 6 AM and he jumps out of his bed and goes to take shower. For the first time he takes his shower only for 5 minutes. He completely makes his room a mess in hurry of getting ready soon. He finally gets ready,have his breakfast and makes a call to kabir

KABIR : ( sleeping ) hmmm the number your dialing is currntly switched of

MANIK : kabirrr shut up main hoon manik now listen just open your eyes

KABIR : agar thu manik hain tho kya mera phone switch off nahi aa saktha

MANIK : kabirrr get up or else you will die in my hands very soon samjaa

KABIR : ( rubbing eyes )haan haan jantha hoon bol kya hua kyu call kiya

MANIK : wo main school ke liye nikal rahu tho ill meet u in school directly

KABIR : haan tho kal jayenge na school tho ab kyu call kiya kal hi bolna tha

MANIK : kabirrr suba ho chuki hai and its already 7 AM so open u r eyes

KABIR : kya 7 AM main tho abi abi soya tha na yaar nahi aise kaise matlab

MANIK : thuje jo karna hai karle par main nikal ra hu aur ye hi bathana tha

KABIR : Ek minute thu mathlab THE MANIK MALHOTRA got up early in the morning and got ready and even leaving for the school kaise kaise hua ye

MANIK : haan thu itna shock kyu hora main subha jaldi nahi ut saktha kya

KABIR : nahi nahi utsaktha hai bilkul utsaktha hai wo kya hain na thuje aise dekhne ki aadath nahi hain na bas isliye vaise ye change acha hain sachi

MANIK : haan teek hain thu buddy ko bi batha dena aur main cheltha hu

KABIR : haan vaise kya thu batha saktha hain aisa kya kaam hai jo thu pehli baar itni subah subah utkar wo bi school ke liye thayar hokar aurrr

MANIK : bas bas bahuth sawal jawab ho gaya i cant talk any more so byyy

KABIR : vaise sun thu akele school jaldi pahunchne se kuch nahi hoga tho

MANIK : byyy and cuts the call. He leaves to the school & soon reaches the school. He could see no one near school except the watch man and then notices that it was 7 30 AM only and that he need to wait till 9 AM...

PART 25 :

It was exactly 9 AM and manik was standing near gate itself waiting eagerly for nandini. so many students were coming but he could not see nandini anywhere. He was just dying to have one glance at her and was in his own world thinking about her that he even havent noticed that everyone was staring at him because he exactly stood in the position of watchman. He looked around searching for her and then noticed that people were seeing him with a shocked expression and then after sometiome he understood the reason behind it. It didnt make a difference to him and then he murmers ''bas isi ki kami thi zindagi main jo aaj pura hogaya'' and again starts searching for her.

He was getting impatient and every second was like a year to him. He was walking here and there rubbing his hand in his hair and then suddenly stoped when some girl tapped his shoulder from behind. He turned with a huge smile and after realising that it was not the girl whom he was expecting his smile disappeared and he was sad again

ALIA : manik tum yaha par aise kya kare ho aur itni jaldi kyu agaye school

MANIK : wo kuch kaam tha bas isliye aur kuch nahi and again looks at gate

ALIA : acha teek hain wo kabir ne bathaya ki tum jaldi nikal gaye so isliye main bi jaldi thayar hokar akeli hi aagayi vaise thum yaha watchman ki tharah kyu kade ho chelo yaha se and try to take him inside holding hands

MANIK : ( jerks her hands ) ye kya karri ho alia mujhe yahi par rehna hain

ALIA : main bas tumhe andar lejaari thi manik thum itna gussa kyu karre ho

MANIK : alia tumhe dikh nahi raha hain main yaha par kisika wait kara hoon

ALIA : haan tho andar bi wait kar sakthe hain na manik aise gate ke paas

MANIK : alia agar tumhe prb hain tho tum jaa sakthi hoo am not stoping u

ALIA : aisa kaunsa special insaan hain jiske liye tum iss tarah wait karre ho and before manik could say anything kabir and dhruv come in between

KABIR : ( hugging ) saale jaantha tha tu yahi gate ke paas hamare liye wait karra hoga.vaise jantha hoon ki thu marra hain usse milne ke liye par kam se kam andar wait kartha na aise gate ke paas tu jantha hain na thu kon hai

ALIA : usse milne ke liye matlab kisse what do you mean kabir ye kiska wait

KABIR : meri maa main 'usse' nahi 'hamse' kaha tha aur ye hamara matlab mera aur dhruv ka wait karaha tha patha nahi tume bi kya sunayi detha hai

ALIA : hooo by the way main bi isse ye hi bolrithi ki andar wait karthe hain

DHRUV : aur issne teri baath bilkul nahi maani hain na manik and smiles.

manik was not even listening what they were talking and was searching for nandini. dhruv slowly says in his ears ''ajayegi tension math le'' and smiles. even mukthi comes and all of them start leaving for class. manik though doesnt want to go having no option left follows them to class. He again stops at the door itself and starts looking backside serching for nandini.He says everyone that he have some work and without listening anything rushes from there.

He was going up and down all the floors seraching for her.In one of the floor while he was going down some people start shifting benches so he gets stucked between stairs and gets totally leaned to the wall. He gets irritated and while trying to get out from there notices a girl opposite to him standing exactly in the same position like him. He was not able to see her face and after trying very hard he could only see her lips which were enough for him to know who the girl was.

''nandini'' escapes from his mouth and a smile falls on his lips.

when he get few seconds of time in between he pulls nandini to his side of the wall and makes her lean on the wall. Nandini holds his shirt tightly and slowly opens her eyes.

The moment their eyes met an unknown happiness was seen in their eyes.Both were lost in each other forgetting the entire world around them.

( ''KITINI BAATHE HAIN JO KEHANA PAYE TUMKO HUM DO NA THE ISS THARAH'' backgrnd song)

suddenly one of the bench hit maniks head and he leans on nandini. He shouts in pain closing his eyes tightly and feeling his pain nandini slowly rubbs his head with her soft fingers. He smils on her touch and opens his eyes.

she was looking his head rubbing it and ''TUM TEEK HO NA''.

Manik smiles and looking her ''TEEK NAHI THA PAR AB HO GAYA HOON''.

she looks at him & slowly removes her hands from his head. she tries to go out from there but manik holds her hands and leans towards her. He slowly brushes her nose with his & she starts blushing.
manik couldnt stop himself seeing her blushing he slowly brushes her cheeks with his hands and then goes down to her lips. she starts shivering with his touch and closes her eyes.He sees her and smiles. she suddenly opens her eyes and once again starts leaving. she goes a little bit far but then again falls on him due to his pull and without wasting a single second manik hugs her tightly.she hugs him back slowly may be because even she needed it badly.They both wanted to let go their pain and to some extent it even happened. nandini slowly realises that she was doing the same mistake again and soon get herself free from him. she doesnt say anything and simply goes away.manik even though wanted to hold her couldnt because the way got cleared and everyone could see them easily. He runs behind her and both enter into class. she goes and sits behind kabir and before she could say anything she sees that manik was already sitting next to her. she tries to get up but her both hands get pulled by two strong hands. one was maniks and other was kabirs. she looks seriously at kabir signalling that she doesnt want manik to sit on her left side.

KABIR : manik utja chel saying this he gets up and makes manik get up too

MANIK : ye thu kya karra hain kabir thu jaanth hain na mujhe yaha hi baitna

KABIR : haan main sab kuch jaantha ho aur nandini ki baath bi mantha hoo

MANIK : seriously kabir thu thu sach main mujhe yaha baitne nahi dega???

KABIR : haan bilkul nahi,suna na bilkul nahi kyunki main yaha baitunga

NANDINI : kabir thank you so much thum sach main mere sache dosth hoo

MANIK : what nonsence kabir am warning you agar thu iski baath manega

KABIR : manega kya already manchuka hu tho thu hat aur muje baitne de and sits beside nandini.

while manik was going out in anger he holds him and ''Ye thu kaha jaara hain bahar biatega tho class kaise sunega''

MANIK : thuje kyu padi hain jo karna tha wo karli na tho ab bas chod mujhe

KABIR : arreyy yar thu kyu itna gussa hora hain aa bait na class shuru hogi

MANIK : kaha tere sur par nahi am not interested kisi aur ko dund lena

KABIR : pagal hain kya mere sur par kyu baitega hum doo hi tho hain yaha

MANIK : lekin abi abi thu ne hi tho mujhe utaya na phir ye kyu bolra hain ki

KABIR : haan bhai main ne hi utaya thuje kyuki nandini nahi chahthi ki thu uske left side baite isliye main yaha baita uske left side lekin uska right side tho abi bi kaali hain aur usne ye bi nahi bola ki tu uske right side nahi bait saktha hain and winks at him. He looks at nandini and says ''hain na nandini''

nandini gets angry and gets up to come out but without giving her any chance manik jumps into bench and sits beside her making her sit too. manik and kabir have a high five smiling while nandini looks them both angrily...

You are an awesome writer..came across this story today and read all the updates in one go am in love with this story and the dialogues are penned so beautifully especially cabiras..love the way he speaks..,was laughing all the while and manan are just love
both are so adorable..manik realized his mistake but it really did hurt her he shouldn't have said that even though it was not intentional and is said in anger but still that was wrong..hope everything gets solved between them soon..and dhruv too is funny dhruv and cabir convo is hillarious..mukti is also bearable as she is comfortable with Nandini being friendly with them but this brother sister duo harshad and Aliya are such a pain..loved everything just one thing I felt is rather than school college backdrop would have been suited for the story..it's just my pov but I really appreciate the effort you put in giving quick updates..am eager to read the story further keep updating:)

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