The Elevator- MANAN SS... CHAPTER3A,B on Page21 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
Ayo what an update ji!
Waiting for the next part,
jabhi time mile please please update kardijiyo.
Love you dear and take care.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
plz next update soon, nd pm to me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
I just saw this story ...n frankly wht caught my attention was the name of ur story - wondering what hs diis to do wid MaNan - Well that confusion is still on - but ya ur story's 1st chap...I loved it ...Manik fell for Nandini - he collects whatever bears her touch - how cute...n Nandini...wooo...all bindaas n all...n her cooking - seems like she is inspired by her onscreen Chachi...bt loved dT part 2...plzzz cont soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
i just loved it awsomeee part nandini ka khana nandu kanjoos heinn hahahha
manik love
photograph
awsmeee jusst loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: miniagrawal

Woww...beautiful...outstanding...or should i say out of the box.
Totally different concept, the way u portrayed both manik nd nandini's character is marvelleous...
I cant even imagine like this...
Infact i imagine something after reading the prolonge...but u have change the whole table...hatsoff man..
Loved the concept.
Specially crazy nandini...nd mature manik...
Looking forward to see more...
Humble request to post the nxt part soon...
Cant wait to see further...
Love mini.

Sorry for making you wait for so long just two days more I will be posting on Friday, And thanks a lot sweet heart for the amazing comment my thirty two teeth were flashing while reading it thanks for doing that😃🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
AWESOME UPDATE SOON
LOVED IT
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
OH MY GOD..!!! What an update...seriously uh are damn awesome...this update was just completely wooow... uh seriously nailed it...I mean I had one of the best times reading this update...I mean literally everything uh wrote was just flawless...commendable would be an understatement for this post... I mean I don't know what word would perfectly fit to describe that what an amazing, mind blowing, fantastic, brilliant, incredible, mind boggling, rocking update it was...hehehe I am at loss of words seriously... I'm just dumbstruck that how magnificent the first chapter was...I mean I can clearly predict that this story is gonna be one of the best stories I have ever read... HATS OFF yrr...uh are a natural... uh have outdone yourself...just perfect...thank uh sooo much for the pm...really grateful...please update very very very soon...will be waiting eagerly...keep up the wonderful work...best wishes to uh... :) :D [/quote
Woooh!! U made my day by saying this I never thought that any one could love this SS to such an extent, u left me the chatter box at loss of words, thank u so much sweet heart😃 Seems like my hard work is paying off...

Thank you sooo much
Love you🤗😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: amrutha.shetty

Wht a update yaarrr ..😊...u surely have some talent infact much more ...i ssly enjoyed it to the fullest...I was smiling all the while reading it...alia n manik r brother sister thts the best part ...😆.nandini nd her food making skills ...lol ...manik malhotra even gulped it down ...this🤣 is the best eg of pyaar kya kya krvata h ...could imagine the scenes going on live while reading nd thts wht is best abt a writer tht readers can actually imagine those scenes ...I never wished it should end while reading...kuddos to u for writing it so beautifully ...nandini's reaction will b worth it when she'll come to know who's the MD ...now let's see how will manik cover up abt tht photo...am waiting to see wht's coming next nd most importantly for the title which says the elevator ...😉..update soon this time whenever ur free ...b back soon haa...continue nd keep on writing it feels good to read such stories ...

Lots of lovee❤️

And that's the best compliment I can receive😳, Iam glad that I made u imagine all the things, I will surely be back soon, And the mystery of the title hope that will revealed soon😃😆
Thank you so much
Love ya🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey aqsa ..kya likhte hain yaar tu 😊😊😊😊 awsome writter u r dear... first congrats to u for ur new story "the Elevator " really loved the prolong & chapter-1 ..u certainly give long long wala updates..loved to read ur all updates ...your both stories are really beautiful and totally different from each other..just have a chotu sa request please do continue with both of your stories dont give a halt to any of your stories please 😳😳
now coming to the "the Elevator" the concept is really good ... manik here is a bit arrogant and rude and on the other side nandu is bubbly girl with childish nature really sweet.. its gonna be fun to read their love story... love at first sight its gonna be intresting... but we want cabir in ur story please bring him in your story..its really fun to read cabir in any story just loved his nature and as he always act as a cupid for our manan and give character stretch if possible then we can get an idea about all the characters in your story...really loved ur first chap and chaps in "loving her is red"... please give updates jaldi se..really looking forward for your updates of both of your story ...may Allah bless u..tc ...with lots of love and hugs😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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