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Ayisha Noureen

@Smileygirl23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

ha ha ha
awesome! I laughed a lot! Nandu is so cute! experimental dishes!! manik toh gaya
I am a malayali.. and I have watched Arya2
wondering how this ss will turn up.. lekin thank God mukti nahi nandu hi hai.. and i love this sissy Alya
love
Ayisha

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Ashmita18

@Ashmita18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

OH MY GOD..!!! What an update...seriously uh are damn awesome...this update was just completely wooow... uh seriously nailed it...I mean I had one of the best times reading this update...I mean literally everything uh wrote was just flawless...commendable would be an understatement for this post... I mean I don't know what word would perfectly fit to describe that what an amazing, mind blowing, fantastic, brilliant, incredible, mind boggling, rocking update it was...hehehe I am at loss of words seriously... I'm just dumbstruck that how magnificent the first chapter was...I mean I can clearly predict that this story is gonna be one of the best stories I have ever read... HATS OFF yrr...uh are a natural... uh have outdone yourself...just perfect...thank uh sooo much for the pm...really grateful...please update very very very soon...will be waiting eagerly...keep up the wonderful work...best wishes to uh... :) :D

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Nandini is such a freak!!! It was a laughing riot!

And Manik.. He is so desperately in love with her:D

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manan_0711

@manan_0711

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Ty for d pm...

oh god...I was laughing lyk anything while reading d whole update...

it was so cute n funny...

loved it...

hehe manik has become a love sick puppy...haha...

N d akash part was awsum...hahaha oh god...it was damn amazing update...

continue soon...

'll b waiting...

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AKANKSHA

@Akanksha29100

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

wow ...
dis is so awsm n interesting ...
plz update next part soon ..
plz ...
till den ...
take care

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Angel

@asangel

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Awsm post...nandu's charactr is chrry on d cake... plz pist nxt one soon..dnt mk us wait

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Sanskruti

@Sanskruti164

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

UFF

FINALLY U UPDATED

THANKS FOR PM

IT'S AN AWESOME UPDATE

THIS IS A VERY DIFFERENT LIKE CRAZY ND CHILDISH NANDINI

U GAVE SUCH LONG UPDATE

LOVED IT

UPDATE SOON

ALWAYS GIVE US SUCH LONG UPDATES

KEEP SMILING ND WRITING

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amrutha.shetty

@amrutha.shetty

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Wht a update yaarrr ..😊...u surely have some talent infact much more ...i ssly enjoyed it to the fullest...I was smiling all the while reading it...alia n manik r brother sister thts the best part ...😆.nandini nd her food making skills ...lol ...manik malhotra even gulped it down ...this🤣 is the best eg of pyaar kya kya krvata h ...could imagine the scenes going on live while reading nd thts wht is best abt a writer tht readers can actually imagine those scenes ...I never wished it should end while reading...kuddos to u for writing it so beautifully ...nandini's reaction will b worth it when she'll come to know who's the MD ...now let's see how will manik cover up abt tht photo...am waiting to see wht's coming next nd most importantly for the title which says the elevator ...😉..update soon this time whenever ur free ...b back soon haa...continue nd keep on writing it feels good to read such stories ...

Lots of lovee❤️