The Elevator- MANAN SS... CHAPTER3A,B on Page21

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Mukti? Are uh serious?
It was an amazing concept... Loved it...xcept fr d last MUKTI thng..?
Plz cn uh xplain
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Awesome prologue...I would definitely love to read this ss...please doo continue and as soon as possible...I'm really excited to read another great ss...please please update soon...waiting eagerly...the start is sooo great that I can actually imagine how cool the whole story would be...please pmme whenever you update the next time...keep up the great work...best wishes...:) :D
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Mukti? Srsly? Manik n Mukti :O
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Amazing prologue...
but Mukti...????...confused...
plzzz...continue soon...
D concept is awsum...
continue soon...
'll b waiting...
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fab update dr.
bt MUKTI????
not fair yaar.
plz update nxt part soon.
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I know she wasn't Mukti cause eyes ,lips tak thik he but she doesn't have potato like cheeks .
That is Nandu only and he will surely come to know about it soon.
Waise very good start dear .
Congratulation for this new story .
Continue soon and take care .
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Awesome prologue ..
But mukti :D u really amazed us ..
Do continue this story please.
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Originally posted by: zooni.shah

Hello people my name is Aqsa... Am a huge crazy Parthian and a mad kyy fan like u all... I'am already writing a Fan Fiction named Loving Her Was Red and now here iam with another of my rantings to entertain you


So basically this is an SS which will be rapped up with in six to seven chapters obviously written on manan... I got this idea watching Allu Arjun's movie Arya2 well if anyone doesnt know him toh let me tell uh he is a south star and very famous here, Here as in at my place which is Hyderabad

Yeah yeah i belong to the city of NIzam's cool na😛 chalo leave this now lets speak about this SS so am goona continue this only if i get enough response from uh lovely people

Before starting am telling uh that what ever u think of this be open and speak.. Criticism is more then welcome and accepted with a warm big hug so feel free to express
I hope u people eNJOY reading it as because i enjoyed writing

Do drop ur views please..

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---PROLOGUE---

--India--

Dressed in stripes blue n white formal shirt with black pants, the signature smirk on the face and the intensity of eyes hidden with spects... carrying a file in hand

"The Malhotra Industries(Mumbai)" he read the name under his breath standing in front of the tall long glassy building in Mumbai

Entering inside the company he asked the receptionist for the way to the cabin where interview is held, she directed him and he reached in front of the cabin of" The Marketing head" and knocked the door.

"Come In" came the voice of a lady

He let the door open and and came in front the table, the lady's back was facing him as she was standing near the table's front side leaning half by her back as support and studying the file with extreme concentration holding a pen in her mouth dressed in pencil long black skirt and white netted top till which exposed her collar bone through the net and the while milky skin neck

He examined her from head to toe, though even from the back the thin slim legs were visible from the black skirt as it had a split from her mid thigh to her toe... With Long black silky hairs waving like the waves of sea, the perfect butt and curves.

Damn! She was sexy he thought... Finally coming out from the examination he cleared his throat so that he can get attention and she can get aware of his presence.

She turned making him throwing into heaven, her angelic face was indeed a heaven for him. Big doe eyes, pulpy luscious pink lips, shaped eyebrows and potato like cute cheeks..

She raised her eyebrows and clicked her fingers to drag his attention and thankfully he came out of his heaven...

She took out the pen from her mouth normally but even that seemed so seducing to him, as if she was just leaving his lips after kissing.

"So you are the one?" She asked titling the pen towards him

Left under the spell of her sweet honey voice he didn't paid heed to her words and just nodded

"Please take a seat" she asked him and he obeyed

"Files?" She asked and he handed it over to her which few seconds back were in his hands, even her touch on the file made him feel that she touched him

'What spell has she casted' thought he finally

"So um.. Mr.Manik Malhotra, you've done good in all the courses as mentioned but I would like to ask some questions " asked she

Finally recovering from his thoughts he answered each question asked by her correctly which left quite an impression on her and without any doubt she asked him to join the company and declared him as the new employee he smiled as she congratulated him

He left the cabin and took his mobile out from his pant's pocket and made a call while walking out of the building

"I've entered as an employee in the company, u make the preprations and handle everything in London,Akash" informed Manik and switched the call off

He recalled the events of the day which took place two days ago

<<FLASHBACK>>

--IN LONDON--

A cabin which more looked like a master bedroom with complete simplicity but still which has a classy effect, A wall with all the shades of grey and the rest painted in white, IN the very middle of the cabin a glassy wooden table containing random files, a jug full of water and a glass aside with a pen stand and all the working materials required...Sitting on his chair he shouted

"Nonsense, is this how the work is done? You people can't even handle a single company..."

He was a man of nearly 28 who was now shouting on his poor employee

"Sorry sir, actually the market position isn't going good that is y--"

Before his employee could complete his lame excuse he again barked

"Oh shut up with your excuses, Iam Manik Malhotra and I can't handle failure.." He paused for a second and continued

"Akash get the papers ready and give it to Mr.Advani to sign" he completed as he ordered to his PA

The confused employee dared to ask question against his boss's will

"But sir what shall I sign" asked the employee named Advani

He glared at him in anger from head to toe and then done what he is good at, "smirking" and then letting his hands slip inside the pockets of his grey pants

"You are fired" declared he

Without giving any chance to the employee to prove himself he left the cabin and walked out with his PA

"Evil Malhotra" the poor employee cursed under his breath.

Yes he was The Malhotra.. The famous international business tycoon, he has his industries all over the world only at the age of 28. A very young talented man

Known for his attitude and rudeness to the world with equally deadly handsome features starting from the soft nerve forehead then the intense deep chocolaty eyes and the sharp nose with perfect sword like sharp jawline and his little fancy stubble... He was the true definition of tall and handsome with fair color and witty attitude only to the people at work

Other then that he was a sweet heart, like a coconut, hard from outside and immensely soft inside with its own aura... A bachelor and an orphan living with his sister Alya

He only knows two things firstly to love his sister like anything and secondly to never let failure knock his door step

He was an poor orphan left with his sister in an orphanage by one of his relatives after his parents death since then he became rude, ruthless.

He believes in perfection or i guess perfection believes in him ,that is his effect what ever he wants it should be perfect and if it isnt then he makes it.

He has made "The Malhotra Industries" as the number one companies. He had opened several branches of his company all over the countries...Many of them include prestigious countries like New York, Canada, India, Japan, China.. He was indeed one of the richest man on the globe

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Walking through the corridor of his office with his PA he was checking the charts his company in India which have been falling constantly and his company was about to have a great loss due to that

"Book tickets to India" ordered Manik to his PA

"But sir u never visit any of your branches and specially India so...?" his PA tried to put a fact in front of him but was stopped by the deathly glare of his boss

"Do as I say" he ordered again

The poor PA nodded and soon did as his boss ordered

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"Why are you visiting India? Send any of your trusted employees to handle the situation" his sister asked him making a cute angry pout

"Aalluu my baby I need to go, the company is facing a great heavy loss due to irresponsibility of the staff there, I need to go check and sort things out there" he replied to his sister making her understand the importance of his visit

"But bhai I've checked the charts there is no problem" she enquired his brother being confused

She was another talented born Malhotra being a fashionista she knows the functions of a company. She adopted this habit from her brother...

"Yes that's the problem that the charts shows that everything is fine but something is definitely wrong otherwise such loss wouldn't have happened now I need to find that only" he explained

"But how?" She asked

He smirked

<<FLASHBACK ENDS>>

--India--

He left for his hotel and a smile crept on his lips remembering his interview in his own company today... He recalled her name in his head as he read it on the name plate of the cabin of Marketing Head

"Mukti" he took her name so softly that it sounded like a prayer

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seriosly mukthi not digestable
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I thnk marking head ids mukti.. Bt manuk meet nandu in mukti cbin... 😊 😉 i jst lived ur start.. Very nice.. Update soon next part..

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