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CHAPTER 2: IMAGINATION OR REALITY


While standing on the road with her hand bag muttering self abuses for waking up late Nandini was trying to find an auto from past 20 minutes but got defeated every time but to her luck she finally located one


"Bhaiya bandra chloge "she asked the auto driver

"Ha par double paise lagenge " The auto driver said with attitude


She was shocked double money no way she was not going to pay a single etra penny to him


"Kyu double paise loot macha rakhi hai aap sab logo ne jitna meter hoga utne hi paise dungi

main" she said being stubborn


"Arey madam bandra se koi vapas passenger milta nahi hai, khali aana padhta hai paise toh double hi lagenge chalna hai toh bolo varna jane do nahi toh waiting charge lag jayega" The driver argued


"What waiting charge? prime minister ho kahi ke jo wait karne ka charge loge "she asked getting angry


"Arey madam shakal se to ache gharane ki dikhti ho aur kya thode se paiso ke liye kanjusi kar rah ho aur mera bhi time khoti kar rahi ho "auto wala said in his typical language but she was angry now about the thing that he called her 'Kanjoos'


"Kya kha tumne kanjoos aur mai din dahaade loot tum rahe ho aur kanjoos mujhe bula rahe ho " she shouted on him stomping her foot.


"arey madam hato mujhe nahi le jana apko ek kaam karo paidal hi chali jao paise bach jayenge aur thoda vazan bhi kam ho jayega mera time mat kharab karo ,dhandhe ka time par " auto wala said and quickly started his auto and left Nandu fuming in anger.


"Pata nahi kaha kaha se aa jate hai "auto driver shouted out loud


Aiyaapa what he just said kanjoos how dare he? Aur to aur kya matlab tha uska vazan kam ho jayega iam not fat, bad thodi cheeky hot bubbly hoon, keede padhe is auto wale par, iske sab baal white white ho jaye sare daant gir jaye iski biwi se iska jhagda ho aur wo isey ghar se nikal de, iska auto kharab ho jaye urghh aiyaapa kar dena ye sab,he eserve this "she complained to her aiyappa and started looking for another auto


After some time agn a auto stoped there .


"Madam ji kaha jana hai apko " The driver who was dark in color with funky long moustache asked


"Bandra par me double paise nahi dungi "she said before the driver could complete his words


"Par madam ji bandra se passenger nahi milti hai phir se toh double paise toh lag jayenge"he said and she tried the last trick she could which was making innocent puppy face


"Bhaiya please meri dost vaha ke hospital me admit hai aur mere paas zyada paise bhi nahi hai, kisi ki zindagi ka sawal hai please le chaliye mujhe, aur koi bhi auto rukne ko taiyar hi nahi hai aur dhoop bhi kitni hai kitni. Ab batao ek sundar jawaan ladki ko yu beech sadak par chodna theek hai kya "she asked trying the emotional mantra to which the poor Auto driver got emotional


" sorry ragu tujhe iss auto vale ke liye ICU me pohchana padha, par dost isi kaam toh aate hai" she thought and left a silent sorry to Ragini


"Arey madam ji pahile batayiki padi, chaliye hum apko yu lekar chlate hai "he said in his typical bihari tone and nandini did a silent victory dance in her heart as she got successful and very quickly without wasting another moment she sat in the auto and the journey began


"Madam ji aur kachu apne bare me bataiye" The driver tried to make a conversation


"Mai kya batau bhaiya bohot hi gareeb parivaar se hu aaj hi dost ka accident ho gaya pata nahi ab uska ilaaj kaise hoga " she said while making innocent puppy faces while the driver became hell emotional


"Arey madam ji tanik bhagwan par bharosa rakhhiye wo jo b karta hai ache ke liye hi kqrta hai,ab hume hi dekh lijiye pichle panch sal se hmari shadi nahi ho rahi thi par ab pichle mahine hi hamari shadi ho gayi, kitni koshisho ke bad amma ko hamare liye ek susheel kanya mili hai, hamari joru ka naam phoolaniya hai lakho me ek hai hamri joru

Auto wala said with -Am so proud of my wife- look


Nandini was enjoying his company, ahh how much silly he is but obviously not more than her


"Acha kaha rehti hai aapku wife I mean joru" she asked with tongue in cheek enjoying


"Wo hamri joru gaav(village) me hai hamri amma ke sath"auto wala said with very sad look


"Wo gav mein aur aap yaha, alag alag kyu rehte ho aap dono "she asked getting interested


"Kya kare madam ji paeit(stomach) ke khatir yeii sab kareka padi huu.. hum aaye to eeha batorwa bann ne hamar amma ka sapna tha par ka kare madam ji kismat ke mare hum auto hi chalaike padi " He informed


"abtorwa kya"she asked him with a disgusted confused look


"Arry madam ji angreji nahi samjat ho ka abtor, hero ,abhineta " Auto vala said and now she understood that he was trying to talk about Actor which eventually in his pronounciation turned into something else


"Oh acha actor "she heavied a sigh


"ha wohi wo tanik sleep of jeebh huvi gawa vo ka kehte hai englisss me isleepp of tongue(slip of tongue) uuhh hum aapko apni acting dikhaye?" He asked being jovial


"Balwant ray ke kutto me tumhara khoon pi jaunga "he shouted so loud imitating Sunny Deol that Nandini jumped up from her seat


"Basanti in kutto ke samne mat nachna"he acted further and winked at Nandini


She palmed her face thinking


" kya yaar aiyappa kaha kaha se aise log mere paas Hi bhejte ho, thank god! He isn't a Bollywood Actor varna mera Bollywood would have tuned into a bhojpuri world"


"Chote chote desho me aise badi badi baate hoti rehti hai senorita"he said in shahrukh khan's style and that fueled nandini's anger a bit more

'Iski toh mai, how dare he ruin my romance devta's dialogue, not been in his auto na I would have ripped him into pieces' she muttered playing with her hem of shirt as trying to pacify herself


"Arey bade bade desho me aise choti choti bate hoti rehti hai senorita ye dialogue hai "she corrected him

"Ohhh madam ji phir se tanik issleep of jeeb(slip of tongue ) hui gawa saari saari (sorry)"he said she rolled her eyes


"Chalo madam ji tanik gaane hi sun lete hai "he said n switched on his typical music player


"Lagaweli jab lipistic , hilela arra distric

Tu, lagaweli jab lipistic , hilela arra distric

Zilla top lalelu

Komariya -2- kar lopa loap, lalipop lagelu """"


She was feeling to dance on the music but stopped herself as she was in the auto

Ah-ah-ah angry plus irritated nandu bad combination, she dint got a chance to dance and on top of that this auto driver was making it hard for her to control her angry she was waiting impatiently to reach office.

Soon they reached the place n nandini got down from the auto and paid him hundred rupees as per the meter the pay was 95 and she wasn't having any change


"Madam ji chuttey naahi hai 5 rs chod dijiye na"he said


She was in shock as if he asked her to donate both of her kidneys, she was now going to take his life


"What chuttey kyu nahi hai, tumhe pata hai 5rs ki keemat kya hoti hai matlab 500 paise meri 10 fav kachha mango bite aati hai kaise chodu 5rs"she explained him dreamily


"Par madam ji agar aapke paas chuttey ho to aap de do "he said


"Arey me kyu du ye to tumhara kam hai na tum do "she said

"Nahi hai humre paas "he said


"yahi loot macha rakhi hai tum logo ne pehle 4 km door laane ke poore 95 rs le liye ab 5rs bhi nahi de rahe ho vapas tumhe pata hai bus ki ticket bas 20 rs ki hoti hai or tumne pura 5 guna jyda lia hai mujse aur upar se tip bhi chaiye "she shouted and now he became angry


"Arey madam ji dekhiye garib admi hu par iska ye matlab nahi beymaan hu, petrol ka bhav dekha hai aapne aasmaan choota hai aur upar se agar aap jaise passenger mil jaye to hmara to pura din kharab ho jata hai yeh lijiye apne pese samjunga aaj kisi garib ko daan diya hai ,chaltey hai jai ram ji ki "he said started his auto and left


"Auto me boyfriend ke sath baithkar bhaiya khana mana hai " This was written on the back side of the auto she read that and turned to leave


Someone was watching all her antics since she stepped out off the auto and was laughing hysterically and planning something in his mind, Well who else other then Manik


"Huh samajhte kya hai ye sab apne aapko, Mai toh complain karungi aisi ki lag jayegi inki... metnal people, doesn't know the importance of 5Rs" She cursed the auto driver and pushed herself into the elevator of the building and closed her eyes to inhale some peace, she wasnt aware of his presence in the elevator so she just muttered to herslef

"Cool down, yes ye sab hote rehta hai, calm down ... breath... aahh... yes perfect" And making cute pouts and inhaling some breath she opened her eyes and moved a little backwards only to crash into him...

She turned and looked at him with a frown face which soon turned into a hug smile

He held her and made her stand straight while she straightened her white tee

"Hey Manik, how are you? Office jaa rahe ho? lol sorry haan obvious vaha jaa rahe hoge.." She started the conversation and while her stupidity hit her head with her hand and raised her eyebrows waiting for the shy soul to speak but she dint get any reply so she started again as something came into her mind

He just stood there like a love sick puppy listening to her melodic voice and sensing the proximity a few minutes ago with a shy smile on his face and that was hard to guess that was it the smile or smirk

"Acha leave that, Meko na ek baat puchni thi" She faced him looking into the eye

"i know haan toh jhoot bilkul mat bolna" she crossed her arms around her chest and began her interrogation eyeing him with those big doe eyes which looked more cute and adorable than threatening

"Vo mere picture tumhare paas kya kar rahi thi ? I know am beautiful par tum aise mere pictures kaise click kar sakte ho aur mujhe hi nahi bataya ye karte waqt.. If u really wanted my pictures mujhe bol dete i would have given them to you... Par that's not the question tumne mere photo kyu li ? Acha wait love shuv me padh gaye kya" She asked him chuckling at the last line and praising her own self which was now stopped as she was pinned to the nearest metallic wall of the elevator and stuck between Manik and the wall

Her eyes shoot wide open as she continuously looked to Manik and her hands which were pinned by him on top of her head... His breath was fanning her face ,he came so close to her that her body pressed his and the way he was intently looking at her lips and then looking into her wide eyes with a smirk, made her gulp the saliva down her throat, he bend down a little to match her height and before she can utter a word he just crashed his dry lips on hers and kissed her no, No! Actually smooched the hell out of her pinkish lips, while sucking every bit of it and she stood there.. All shocked not even suppose to struggle to get out of his grip or get rid of his closeness. He sucked her lower lip and bit her there and she opened her mouth as a gasp left out and he pushed his tongue in, travelling the smooth ride of her mouth tasting her, He sucked her lips so hard that it was glued to it... He pushed himself more into her and pressed her body as if he could get access into her and after a quite while of kissing, smooching and tasting her, He left her and came near her ear and whispered .

"Yes" With this he moved away and stood straight as if nothing had ever happened and he is a innocent soul.

The world came to a stop for her as she stood their silently watching him in the same position as he left her.

"It was my first kiss" She thought to herself

The elevator door opened as they reached 7th floor and he left, leaving her inside with her thoughts, She still couldn't digest the fact that she just had her first kiss few seconds ago... Though he left but his scent has gotten into her and his taste into her mouth...

After the constant buzzing of her phone she came out of her dream land and picked it up

"Hello Mam, Zindagi ek aisa khel hai ke kab kya hojaye pata hi nahi chalta, aapne bhi aisa kuch experience kiya hoga" The other person on the phone greeted her and described something that really happened with her a minute ago and she just looked to the elevator's door without even blinking her eye and replied being lost

"Haan"

"Toh mam yahi mai batana chahti hu, Kal ho na ho? Kya pata? So aapko bacahane ke liye hum hai na, Jald se jald apni life insurance, karvaiye aur apni saari tensions se mukti paiyie... So mam aapka naam" The lady on the phone asked offering her the life insurance policy

"Huh! What??... Shut up no i dont need any policy, shut it and agli baari call kiya na i will sue you" She finally recovered from her shock and disconnected the call even before the lady could convince her.

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It has been two days since her first kiss now and Manik dint even bothered to talk about it, she felt amused about his innocent behavior and scratched her head in frustration as she was really pissed because of it... The ever so bubbly chubby Nandini was silent now and this was observed by every person.

While Manik had his own ways to deal with his love and their passionate kiss... He kissed her for the first time and that gave jitters to him.. From two days he behaved with her as he did before in the office and he knew that was pissing her off but he loved that confuse face of her. He was really enjoying her state and was playing this in his own way.

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Nandini was sitting in her cubicle and was ogling at Manik being confused.. His behavior confused her more she went into a self interrogation session that he really kissed her or she was dreaming, but it wasn't a dream for sure the cut on her lips proves that, but why is he behaving so normal?? He should have said sorry to her for kissing without even her permission, Or should have done something stupid but should have reacted..

He should have reacted, This was really confusing, she felt as if her brain will burst out.

"Itna jo aap soch rahe ho jane kiss ko yaad kar rahe ho?" Ragini came took a half seat on Nandini's table and brought her out of Manik's thoughts.

"Huh?" Nandini just gave a confused look and raised her eyebrows

"Abey yaar ho kya gaya hai tujhe why are you behaving like this, tu nandini hi hai na?? Ya raato raat kismat ne kiya koi haseen sitam?" She asked her with suspicion and in a ever dramatic way

While nandini just frowned and gave a negative nod as nothing happened and shifted her gaze to Ragini from Manik.

"Oh! Wait a sec, lemme guess tujhe bhi? I knew it, matlab he is so charming ke sab pagal hojate" Ragini asked her dreamingly looking upside anf then stealing a look at Manik and smiling

"What kya pagalo jaisi baatein kar rahi hai? Who is charming? And mujhe bhi kya? Nandini asked getting irritated from the hide n seek talks

"Arey am talking about Mr.Perfect, usne tujh par bhi jadu kar diya na? But he is mine dare you think about him, Tujhe pata i've even planned about my honeymoon with him... uff soch sirf vo aur mai..." Ragini warned dreamingly only to deserve a frown from her friend and a thing which she really dint wanna hear as from the past two days nandini's tape was stuck only on the thing that Manik is not Mr.Perfect

But is there any person who can resist his charm and charisma? Definitely not.

"Shut up Ragu, how many times I should say you ke he is not what he looks like" Nandini informed for the umpteenth time while going through a file

"And why do you think that way" Ragini asked frowning and ogling at Manik who was busy in his cubicle working on his laptop

"Beacause he ki-... ah.. vo.." Nandini stopped looking into her file and fell at short of words as she realised she was going to say something which she herself was not sure about

" He... AH... vo... kuch nahi" Ragini completed her

"Seriously tu pills le rahi hai kya to repeat words? Do din se bass yahi sune jaa rahe hai hum sab. Bata de na like others that you are jealous ke he doesn't give a look at you at all" Ragini scorned, and was irritated to hear something like this from her dearest friend and that to about her crush

In return nandini slapped Ragini on her thigh.

"Maa kasam iss ladke ne dimagh ka kheema pao bana dala... just ek saboot(proof) aiyappa to prove that he is not that good, just one" She crunched her eyes and prayed to Almighty Lord

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"So Mr.Dhawan i hope this time we work with co-ordination and there will be no arguments or complains regarding the material" Mr.Bramha shook his hand with Mr.Dhawan and tried to settle the ever so dispute between The Malhotra Industries and The Dhawan Empire sitting in the confrence hall of the office , as both the companies are going to work together in a project that will bring more profit, name and fame to them.

"And i hope the same with you Bramha JI" Dhawan replied giving a genuine smile

"Well i would love to meet the marketing team for this, as i want to know about their works and abilities" Dhawan said managing to make a point as he received a sigh from Mr.Bramha

"Ah.. sure, lets go" Bramha replied after thinking for few seconds and headed with Mr.Dhawan to the Marketing Team's floor

They reached in the center of the hall and Mr.Bramha introduced Dhawan to his team

"May i have your attention please, Meet Mr.Cabir Dhawan the owner of Dhawan Empire and our new team mate in our new project, So that's my bit now make yourself comfortable with him...And aahh! Nandini would you mind showing him around?" He asked nandini pleading as she was the only one who could charm anyone with her nonstop blabbering and how could she deny so without any second thoughts about what she has gotten herself into she gave in.

While other members of the team stood straight in their cubicles and passed little smiles to Cabir as welcome but Manik was getting all furious and irritated about Nandini passing her time with him. How could he see her love getting gelled up with anyone else even if it was his best friend.

Nandini after introducing every person in the team to Cabir moved towards Manik's cubicle and looked here and there avoiding his deep chocolaty eyes.

"And he is... Um.. " She stammered a bit and gulped down her saliva remembering their kissing scene and unknowingly turning into crimson.

"Mr.Perfect?" Manik completed her and smirked as she always described him using this term and now he was loving this her shocked/embarrassed expression.

"No, no, no you aren't Mr.Perfect, not at all you are just a uuhhh... umm.. Masked Man yes.. what? What kya, tu pagal ho rahi hai, calm down, cool.. breath... Arey ghanta breath... someone ask him to stop looking at me"Nandini thought to herself biting her lower lip which only turned Manik on and left a confused Cabir

"UHU.. UHU... well agar tum dono ka aankho ki gustakhiya khatm huva ho toh, Miss.Nandini will you introdue me to him?" Cabir asked being back in his mischievous mode and not missing a chance to be killed by his friend in his mind for hundredth times.

"Sorry sir, Yeah he is Manik" she finally looked him into the eye, took his name slowly under her breath which was thankfully audible to them and watched him giving a innocent smile that only irritated her as his masking nature was getting on her nerves .

Cabir forwarded his hand to shake and Manik gave in and squeezed it so hard that cabir left a cry out

"Abey pagal hai...- Haann okay bye" He cried out in pain and then realised that he was supposed to hide his friendship, so just kept a hand on his Bluetooth device which was nicely placed on his ear and faked a call and left the two alone.

Manik smirked lightly and looked at Nandini who ran away as soon as Cabir left.

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"Checked, checked, um.. haan checked" Cabir muttered checking the files sitting in the conference room as the presentation was done and the deal went successful after their hard work for a week.

It was the time for celebration in the office as they earned immense profit on professional bases and fame too. A week complete of hard work payed off and every one present in the conference room relieved a sigh as their days and nights of hardship and work went well and everything was now on the tracks for the company as it was achieving great success.

"Party time guys.. Party from my side my place and Bramha Ji make sure that everyone attains it. No arguments everyone has to be there as enough of work and now just sitting and relaxing" Cabir squealed in excitement after checking the files and informing everyone about the party.

And with this everyone greeted congratulations to each other and left the conference hall but Nandini stayed picking the files which should be submitted to Alya soon, And when she was about to make a move out of the place Cabir stopped and asked her about the progress of her problem.

<FLASHBACK>

It was a fine day in the office after Cabir's entry and the work load.. She literally dint forgot her first kiss but got herself busy in her work and avoided Manik but who said he avoided her.

He would appear anytime from anywhere and just peck her lips quickly even being in crowd or surrounded by their colleagues. He became a real head-ache for her. Just in few seconds he could come and disappear, pecking her sometime on lips, cheeks, waist, collar bone or whether it be her hand. He was every where she was so confused that she cannot differentiate between the real and imaginations. Though his pecking and kissing was not really an imagination but he did things in a swift moment that it really left her to over think about herself. She felt like her brain is just making her see useless images or scenes or she is getting affected by The Mr.Perfect charisma like every other girl.

Just in a few days this guy made her mad. The girl who made everyone go crazy made her go mad and insane... Sometimes in her new apartment where she shifted a week ago she used keep her eyes wide open in night so that she cannot imagine Manik cuddling her and sleeping. But she was so wrong all the time in morning she found herself in his arms and after just few minutes when she returns from taking a bath he would disappear like a day dream or more like a nightmare.

He used to be present everywhere. This was making her a maniac. The way her mornings started after shifting into her new apartment with Manik's cuddling, his eating of the dishes made by her with great difficulty, his soft kisses on her body.

Damn! This was one of hecking days of her life and just a few minutes ago he came kissed her softly and disappeared. That was it she was angry, confused and going mad about the thing which really don't exist according to her.

She was standing in the balcony of the office floor which reached to the stunning gardening view at the ground floor and looking aimlessly at the surroundings and was getting angry remembering all the moments with manik and trying to differentiate between her imagination and reality and after dreadful war between it and coming to the conclusion that she had completely gone insane and need to consult a doctor, she threw the first things visible to her in the air and looked at them as if they would suppress the amount of confusion. Such things were the pen she was holding which happily bid her bye and flew in the air or the cherries she was eating and some of them also include destructive weapons like hair clips, safety pins and mouth freshener. And not getting satisfied by this she searched for her phone and when was about to give it in the arms of the warm welcoming cold wind was stopped by a person.

She turned to look at the pair of hands which caught her and stopped her from throwing her precious Nokia1011.

"Calm down, calm down Madam matlab tum itna mehenga phone kaise phek sakti ho? Tumhe pata hai aage jaake matlab future me iska auction hoga, these are very rare models.. huh tumhe to kadr hi nahi" Cabir said with a tinge of sarcasm in his voice and snatched the phone from her

"By the way Nice phone haan.." He made fun of her to which she just welled her eyes up and took her phone back and thanked him

"Thank you sir"

"And what's that for?" He asked confusingly

"For saving my first love" she said with a shy smile looking at her phone

"Kya? Isne pee-vee rakhi hai kya? Manik bhai teko bevdi se pyaar hai seriously, ye thanks mujhe iss ghatiya phone ko bachane ke liye keh rahi hai?? Aayi kaha se hai yeh french fry? Hey Navya ki Mata Rani paka dala isne, par isko bhi toh pakana banta hai...Manik bhai may ur mind rest in peace" Cabir thought to himself seeing Nandini's crazy personality while praying for his best friends well being and after shaking his head in disbelief he asked genuinely.

"Vaise Nandini itna pyaar kaise aa raha tha apne phone pe?" He asked being concern and genuine

"Vo sir kabhi aapke saath aisa kuch huva hai jaha aapko lagta hoga ke kuch huva par kuch nahi, par phirse u feel like something has definitely happened par there is no way that your mind settles to it" She being a confused soul asked a question in return making him open his mouth wide open not even understanding a single word about what she said

Cabir struggled to recall what she said and thought "Poora gone case hai, accha huva saale ke sath, dusro ko dum karta tha ab bhugto khud ki pagal ko... Ladka pagal ladki poori pagal, perfect match"

After drawing some calculations in the air and acting like thinking something really serious cabir replied in a single word in Aamir Khan's style

"Hallucination" he said pulling his finger in and out from his fist imitating Aamir Khan

"Haan, pagli yeh hallucination hi hai, Matlab lagta aise hai ke jo ho raha hai vo nahi hota, par jo nahi ho raha aur jo na socha vahi toh ho raha hai ab jo hogaya aur hone ke aabhaas me farq hai vahi hallucination hai" He said in one breath not even understanding what he blurted out

"Correct sir, hallucination yes am hallucinating. Thank you sir... thank you so much" She thanked him in an over joy manner clapping her hands and soon left as she thought she found the solutions to all her questions.

<<FLASHBACK ENDS>>

Nandini explained him that nothing is helping her at all and her hallucinations are increasing day by day, second by second he managed to ask about what she is hallucinating about but she being adamant just kept mum and left.

The second nandini left manik charged inside the conference hall and held cabirs neck and pushed him to the wall and asked

"What are you doing? What stupid thing are you teaching her? Hallucination? She is hallucinating Cabir?" He asked threatening him and shooting daggers with eyes

"Arey, dost hai ya- du-shman ch-hhod mujhe saale" Cabir managed to say his voice choking and trying to free himself from this Monster

Finally Manik left him and cabir coughed and straightened himseld.

"If friends like you exist na there will be no need of any enemy, Pagal hojaunga mai dono ke beech" He muttered to himself while drinking water

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Nandini was looking at her wardrobe and choosing some dresses to wear for tonight's office function and was really confused between Red and Black.

She brought both the dresses with her stood in front of mirror and tried them and finally after saying Plenty of sorries and convincing her red dress that she will wear it the next time she chose black one and went into the kitchen of her 2BHK Apartment and took out a full bowl of vanilla ice cream and settled herself into the master couch in the hall wearing only her sweat shirt and hot pants and swtiched on the plasma TV and was going through different channels while eating spoonful of her ice cream and making yum noises, finally after shuffling alot through channels she stopped at one seeing the name Fifty Shades Of Grey'

"Oye hoye, this is that movie only na which Ragu was speaking about. Chalo for a change lets watch it" She thought to herself and started watching the movie as it started a few seconds ago

The very first interview scene reminded her of Manik's interview and she blushed at the thought... She was so interested and engrossed watching the movie that she dint paid heed to her surroundings. As the movie proceeded further from the club scene to Anastasia Steele's landing into a hotel and waking up from the hangover and watching Mr.Grey's bare body and when finally the scene shifted to the elevator where they began to talk and Nandini watched with more interest and suddenly she just jumped out of her place watching Mr.Grey kissing Anastasia in the movie in elevator which exactly resembled the sight of her first kiss.

She switched off the TV quickly and turned around to find Manik sitting calmly smirking at her showing his bare chest.

She stepped closer to him and took a seat right next to him and touched his face slowly with her fingers trying to find if he is real or not.

"Aiyoo aiyappa he seems so real. Huh mere saath hi aisa q karte ho aap?" She thought to herself

While Mr.Malhotra had his own ways of teasing her more like playing with her hairs touching her facial fetaures and other idiotic stuff

"Karlo karlo, do as you like, meri beemari ka faida utha rahe ho na? No problem.. karlo par just wait jaise hi mujhe ye problem ka solution mila na i will kick you out" She warned him and he just did what he always does playes with her hairs and licked the ice cream off her lips.

"Manik sometimes i feel you are so real, that everything that is happening now is so real and not my hallucination but as i just blink my eye u faid away and dissappear like the darkness... This is not fair." She said childishly making a pout and crossing her arms across his chest to which he relucantly stopped and looked at her.

Within no second he kissed her pout and took her for another session of intimate kiss as his regular habits and his hands trailed all over her body while she gave into his kiss for the very first time thinking as it's her hallucination and there's nothing wrong in kissing while hallucinatiing as it will remain as her imagination.

Sensing her responding to the kiss he increased his energy and sucked her lip so hard double the normal times. While she just moaned into his mouth and bit his lower lip and he just kept sucking her swollen lips and travelled her mouth until they both fell at short of breath.

True that she was not hallucinating, All the stuff was happening in real, but less to her knowledge and naive nature that she felt that it was hallucination.. Poor Nandu

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"So let the party begin..." Cabir announced cheerfully and the party went to its swing.


The party was arranged at Cabir's farm house far away from the city...


The farm house had lavish exquisite interiors and French glassy door which lead in to the place and after that a big hall with very less furniture and a small bar counter which was now occupied by people... The floor was cuddled by white balloons and the pool area was clouded with employees of the company who were going with the flow and drinking trunks of wine.


No one seemed in their senses and Manik was restless all the while looking for her.It just has been an hour since he left her in the Apartment and here he cant even handle the distance,he needed her badly but she was giving a hard time to him


Cabir saw his Manik standing little far away from the pool standing alone and looking at the entrance constantly dressed in black jacket, white tee-shirt and blue jeans with those broad specs looking breathtakingly hot.


He marched towards him and handed a glass of wine to which Manik denied giving an innocent smile


"Peele nandini ia not watching you" cabir teased manik only to get a punch on his stomach


"Oouuwww bhai agar nahi peeni toh bata deta maara q" he was scowling in pain


"Nai how do you manage like seriously? Kaha se itni energy laata hai tu bakwaas karne ke liye?" Manik asked him being irritated and in a serious tone and stopped soon seeing her entering the pool area


She was dressed in a black knee length, sleeveless laced net dress with diamond stud in ears and a silver bracelet in hand which was engraved by her name on it. Long stilettos and snakey wavey hairs flying with the flow of wind ... dark silver black eye makeup and little blush on her cheeks with winged liner and kohl.


God! She was planning to kill him tonight the way she walked and her curves hugged the dress in perfect manner made him go crazy, she surely was looking elegant beauty and angelic death of his...


Precap:


"Are you drunk?"


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Haayyyeee finally updated ...After seeing the comments for chapter1 I was like

Gomez

First of all thanks a lot for the ever so humble and lengthy comments that really brought a thousand volts smile on my face and I hope you people does the same with this chapter

Bohot mehnat lagi hai iss vaaale me seriously khoon paseena bahakr he chapter likha hai please lambe vale comments karna.

And honestly never thought of including the hallucination part and cabiraa ki entry but on request by some friends I did it Now its time for you to shower me with utmost love you can so that it boosts my energy and make me write the next chapter soon.

Okay the bhojpuri was an idea that just popped in my mind i love the way they speak its interesting in a way so no offense... haan if anyone found it offensive so really sorry

This chapter was buckled out of me by my awesome fb readers and ofcourse you guys and how can i forget Natsss... lol love u sweetie and every person

Plus my hubby Aashu who is a proud writer of Devil's Bride she helped me alot in this chapter so the credit goes to her too

And for PM's buddy me sweet hearts, and dare you guys ask about when am gonna update next cuz it will take time haan... So manage.. Vaise dare kar bhi lo toh I won't do anything

and u guys out their reading this I LOVE YOU for all the love for previous part please show the same with this

Stay blessed and take care

Love Aqsa😉

Edited by zooni.shah - 10 years ago
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Amazing update..am in love with this Nandani, she is adorable!
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Haha this is so funny
They're both mad
Lovely
please continue soon
and PM me if possible
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Haha! Awesome story!!
Continue soon and pm if u can :)
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ahh no need to give me any credit wifey i m always there fr u just like u n you knw we cnt write widout each others ideas n suggestions fr me its just next to impossible so just let it be n yes wo secnd kiss to mere liye epic suprise tha hmm or comedy part me muje competition milta ja rh h ha well i would love to be loser frm u luv u sweety n yes readers plz give her lots of response coz meri wifey ne bht mehnt ki hai uspe thk b gyi oh my poor wifey so better u all leave u r cmnt
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Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

ahh no need to give me any credit wifey i m always there fr u just like u n you knw we cnt write widout each others ideas n suggestions fr me its just next to impossible so just let it be n yes wo secnd kiss to mere liye epic suprise tha hmm or comedy part me muje competition milta ja rh h ha well i would love to be loser frm u luv u sweety n yes readers plz give her lots of response coz meri wifey ne bht mehnt ki hai uspe thk b gyi oh my poor wifey so better u all leave u r cmnt

Haayyyee mela hubby😳 sunn liya na sbne maa kasam agar response nahi mila toh those time ke liye story bhool Jana, aur aap bhi kya pati parmeshwar bass kya meri tareef haan... Bekaar me blush Kara diya😆 Chal Chal I know we complete each other so love lets just sit back and relax and read the comments
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#67
Hopefully 1 word is enough for ur tremendous writing"AWESOME""BRILLIANT"..too gud...loved it..
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Fab update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Originally posted by: kitkat5756

hey aqsa ..kya likhte hain yaar tu(haaw tujhe nahi pata kya likhti hu mai?😛)😊 awsome writter u r dear... first congrats to u for ur new story "the Elevator " really loved the prolong & chapter-1 ..u certainly give long long wala updates..loved to read ur all updates ...your both stories are really beautiful and totally different from each other..just have a chotu sa request please do continue with both of your stories dont give a halt to any of your stories please 😳😳
now coming to the "the Elevator" the concept is really good ... manik here is a bit arrogant and rude and on the other side nandu is bubbly girl with childish nature really sweet.. its gonna be fun to read their love story... love at first sight its gonna be intresting... but we want cabir in ur story please bring him in your story..its really fun to read cabir in any story just loved his nature and as he always act as a cupid for our manan and give character stretch if possible then we can get an idea about all the characters in your story...really loved ur first chap and chaps in "loving her is red"... please give updates jaldi se..really looking forward for your updates of both of your story ...may Allah bless u..tc ...with lots of love and hugs😳

hugs love and blesses taken sweetie and hope the same with you that May u get all the success happiness and love that you deserve😃 Chal baccha wish granted cabira ko i've included in my SS now u r the one who made me go all blushing while reading it wonderful comment thanks for the lengthy one and mai itni bhi much khaas nahi...😳
PS : Am not gonna halt any of my stories and my baby ff ko toh kabhi nai it's my jaan

Love u loads dear
Thanks again
A warm tight big hug to you
May Allah bless you too
Love ya
Take care
Aqsa
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Superb update... mnk ne seriusly nandu ko pgl bna diya... bt tll me smthng ...was dt actuaaly he prsnt ovr dere in hr apartmnt or sge is imagining ...

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