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samiksha singh

@samiksha_2593

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Wooowww

Its just amazing

I lyk nandu hallycinating part
N ofcorse their frst kiss
In lift

Oh my god

Mtlb kaha se itti energy aati h

Itti achi n romantic lynes
Likhne k liye

Hatss offf to u dear

N thanx for pm
N pllss next part update soon

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AQSA (intna hi jaan lo kaafi hai)

@zooni.shah

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: asangel
Superb update... mnk ne seriusly nandu ko pgl bna diya... bt tll me smthng ...was dt actuaaly he prsnt ovr dere in hr apartmnt or sge is imagining ...

He was actually present there sweetie

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diayu

@diayu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

It was amazing maza aa gyi plz update next part soon its really interesting 😊

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Ayesha Nazrat

@musicialtie

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

ohhh myyy godd I am do in love with this ff.

girl I want to hug you fr this awesome funny blushy mushy mushy cute romantic adorable ff.

spclly the part 2.

The hallucinations
the manik spell
the elevator kiss
those steal kisses
the cuddles to the smirks.

god I am so in love with this ff.

plc do update soon

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manan_0711

@manan_0711

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Ty for d pm...

OMG...!!!

I was laughing lyk hell I had to hold my stomach...

hahahahahahahh poor nandu...😆

manik oh god he is too much...

God dat auto scene was hilarious...I couldn't stop my laughing...

d elevator scene...hahaha...

d way he was behaving with nandu...freak I was going to fall down my bed while reading d whole update...

seriously loved d update to d core...

it was so much fun reading dis chapter...

God cabini talk...it was already confusing n after reading I got more confused...

but on a serious note d update awwwsummm...

hahaha nandu...😆wat 'll happen if she 'll come to knw dat all things were happening in real not her imagination...manik baba u r dead...😆

God dat movie scene n manan scene was awesome...n damn funny...😆😆

loved manbir conference room scene...

all d whole...d update was super super super awesome...

plz continue soon...

'll b waiting for d update

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86MISHA

@86MISHA

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

wow

so finally you update...

i loved it👏

keep writing

update soon...

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Wow... Superb... So well written...
Their first kiss to all tge so called hallucinations..heheh... Aww...
I hope she realises its the truth...
Heheh bihari auto wala.. Too good...
Awesome update...
I loved it...
Thnkz 4 the pm

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Suprabha

@shaanmaan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Awsm update
but when will nandu came
to know that it was all
real ??

Plzz continue soon
update jldi
waiting ..

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Sweety

@backrush9

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#79

your story is different.. nd has smooth flow.. m loving it, pls pm me

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littlesnow

@littlesnow

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#80

This ws awsm...
I really enjoyed dat auto driver part...hahaha 10 mango bite in 5rs this scene ws hilarious ...
Poor nandu...she is hell confused by her imagination and reality.. This was really new concept I loved it
Keep writing... N ya thanx fo giving such long update...

Waiting for next update... Update soon

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