Manan ff -The Lost Souls Chap 12 pg24 /16th Apr - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

awesome update...

loved it so much...

loved the tom and jerry fight of manan...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
nice update ..but bohot hi chota tha..!!
update regularly ...cont soon..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
So hello all !! Here i am with the next chap...as now also the response is not that gud...i wasnt going to update but for those who are commenting and likin it I am updating it 😊
So enjoy 😉


Chapter 6
Next day Nandini woke up early and got ready for college. MukYa were still sleeping so she thought nt to disturb them as it was only 5 in the morning. So she took her veena and went on the terrace. She once prayed her Aiyaapa and started singing trying to remember how she lost her parents (Plzz listen to this song while reading it)

Khoyi khoyi si hun main
Kyun yeh dil ka haal hai
Dhundli saari khwab hai
Ulja har khayal hai

Saari kaliyan murja gayi
Rang unke yaadon me reh gaye
Saare gharande reet ke
Lehrein aayi lehron me beh gayi

Rah me kal kitni chirag the
Samne kal phoolon ki bhag thi
Iss se kahun kaun hai jo sune
Kante hi kyun maine hai chune
Sapne mere kyun hai kho gaye
Jage hain kyun dil me gum mere

Saari kaliyan murja gayi
Rang unke yaadon me reh gaye
Saare gharande reet ke
Lehrein aayi lehron me beh gayi

Na na na...

Kya kahun kyun ye dil udas hai
Ab koi door hai na paas hai
Choo le jo dil wo baatein ab kahan
Wo din kahan raatein ab kahan
Jo bhi dhakhal hai ab khawab sa
Ab dil mera hai betab sa

Saari kaliyan murja gayi
Rang unke yaadon me reh gaye
Saare gharande reet ke
Lehrein aayi lehron me beh gayi beh gaye

By the time song ended she was in tears and talking to her Aiyaapa "Y?? Y Aiyaapa?? Y only me?? First you took away my parents from me and then my memory...Am I soo bad..Kya mein itni buri hu that I dont deserve anyone??"...n she was crying badly. All this was noticed by her two BFFs Mukti and Navya. They too were crying seeing her in this state. As mukti was unable to see nandini in that condition she ran towards n took her in a bone-crushing hug kneeling infront of her.

Nandini was first shocked by her sudden hug bt then she too hugged her back as tightly she could.

"Nandu...tu aisa kyu keh rahii hai..tujhe pata hai naa hum dono tujse kitna pyaar karte haii...we both are there naa for you...HUMESHA..FOREVER...HUM DONO TERA SAATH KABHI BHI NAHI CHODENGE...TERI SHAADI KE BAAD BHI HUM TERE PICHE PICHE TERE SASURAL TAK POHUCH JAYENGE ( to which nandu chuckled a lil n mukti too chuckled seeing her happy) Aur haa phir kabhi mat kehana ki Uh dont deserve anything...YOU DESERVE THE WHOLE WORLD'S HAPPINESS...DEKHNA EK DIN TUJHE KOI ESA MILEGA JO TUJHSE KHUD SE BHI BOHOT JYADA PYAAR KAREGA AUR HUMESHA TERA SAATH DEGA TILL INFINITY...SAMJHI TU??

Mukti asked her after breaking the hug to which nandu jst nodded her head like a cute kid who just obeyed her Mumma after listening a long lecture from her. All this while Navya was jst standing there n adoring her two soul sisters...after they were done she said "Mukti Maa hogaya aapka bhasan to chale colg ka time hogaya hai. Aur nandu mukti maa ki bacchi aap jara fresh hokar aayenge...toh phir hum saath me breakfast karke colg ke liye niklenge"

After listening this from Navya three of them burst out in laughter and kept laughing for good 5 mins. MukYa were vry happy after seeing Nandini getting normal again.

After some time they three were ready for colg n left together in Nandus car. They reached colg in just 10 mins as MUKTI was driving the car...As they reached the colg n parked their car all the eyes were fixed on them as to whose car is this ??

Manik and Cabir were also present there n wondering whose car is this n who is in the car. They were eagerly waiting fr the owner of the car to step out...Just then Mukti first stepped out and then Navya..to which Manik and Cabir shouted "MUKTI" "NAVYA" as their jaws dropped down. Now every single boy present there were ogling shamelessly at one direction opposite to MukYa to which Cabir and Manik gave a confused look to each other and then looked at the direction where everyone was starring...and what they saw made them baffled...



Sooo here's the update. Not soo pretty long one.. but I hope you all must have enjoyed...Soo now I want lamba wala comments from all and silent readers plzz jaag jao..


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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Loved ur story... 😊
Eagerly waiting for the next update 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
I'm liking this story.. 😊 interesting it is.. Loved reading it...
Do update soon.. And pm me if possible 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Hmmm...so ur story is quite amazing nd intriguing.
But Dude, u update in ages. Mtlb u started writing in july nd its november now nd there are just 6 chappys. Write regularly nd i hope ur ff will get more popular coz i feel it has d masala in it.
:)
Nd pm me when u update next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Awesome update car to achi hogi hi after all nandu itni rich Jo hai all of them were seeing nandu n nandus car.
Update soon dear n long one
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Just came across this story must say
The story is awesome
Pls continue and update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Just loved it ... Very nice concept... ... Eagerly. Waiting. for the next update. ur just amazing. be happy take care keep smiling Thank u for this wonderful. Story. keep smiling. take care 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
NOTE - GUYSS I'VE STARTED A MaNan TS - A LoVe SaGa
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4516452
Do read n leave ur comments ;)

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