Manan ff -The Lost Souls Chap 12 pg24 /16th Apr - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3:

Manik was still smiling looking at his keychain when his mind went in flashback

FLASHBACK:
The small Manik also never received love from his mother after his fathers death. He was always deprived of love. He always remained sad and craved for some love until a girl walked in his life to give his life a 360 degree turn.
It was as usual a boring wala Sunday for Manik as he had no friends to play with and no family to spend time with. Noyonika was always in her office works.
Manik was just sitting in the garden adoring his stars in the sky (it was night) when he heard some chaos in surrounding. He saw a family with luggage shifting in his neighbourhood. There was a lil girl with her parents.
He was busy in seeing the girl's face when he noticed the nameplate besides was still empty.
Just then he saw the girl turned and he saw her and was spellbound by her beauty - Her big doe eyes, her cute lil nose, her small pouty lips, her hearings twinkling just like his stars, her long silky hairs and the bangs falling on her face were making her look more beautiful and on top of that she wore his favourite Red colour dress.
Girl - heyy hii
Manik still in his thoughts "Her voice is soo melodious"
Girl clapped her hands in front of him to wake him up from his thoughts
Where r uh lost???
Manik - Ummm... nothing hii i'm Manik
Girl - Hii i'm...
before she cud tell her name her mom called her
She said sorry to him and was going to run away but he stopped her and asked her FRIENDS??
She smiled and nodded FRIENDS😆 and ran to her home
For the first time Manik smiled from his heart he was happy having his first friend in his life.
The next day Manik got ready to go for his school and went to his car and just when he was about to sit inside His First Friend came from behind.
Girl - Manik (tapped on his shouldrr)
Manik turned around and his face lit up seeing her
Manik - hey hii wat r uh doing here??
Girl - Woo i'm going to my new school today and i just saw uh to came to meet uh 😊
Manik felt soo happy
He then asked her school name to which she replied it as XYZ
Now it was a coincidence or anythng else bt listrning the school name Manik just hugged her tight
The girl was startled by the sudden hug bt then she too hugged him back.
He then broke the hug and said that they both are in the same school
She too got happy aftr listening this and smiled. Manik then offrd her to come with him in his car bt she said that as its her 1st day in her new school her Father is going to come with her.
Listening this Manik's face fell down as he also always wished that his father wud come in his school but that wasn't possible.
The girl asked him as what happened bt he replied nothing and said will see uh in school bye 😊
The girl found something wrong in his behaviour & by that tym her father arrived and they also drove to her school.


AT SCHOOL:
The girl walked out from principles office with her father and then she noticed Manik sitting on a bench.
She took her father with her and walked upto him
"MANIK" she said and he looked up
He smiled & stood up. She then introduced her father with Manik and also mentioned that he is his neighbour.
The girls father greeted Manik with utmost love & care
He placed his hand on Maniks head and said "he is really very sweet" to which Manik smiled and tears welled up in his eyes bt he controlled them.
Soon her father left and the two of them went to their classes. Both were in the same class.
They both sat on the same bench next to each other. In btwn the class Manik poked her with the pencil to which she frowned as she was concentrating on what teacher was teaching and he was giggling coz he was getting bored😛
After his continuous poking she asked him irritatingly "Kya hai Manik ??" He said "I still dont know ur name" he said this making a cute pout to which she chuckled.
Oohh soo uh want to know my name...but why?? She asked making him irritated.
Areeyyy what why we r friends n I still dont know ur name so just tell me fast.. he said as he was very desperate to know her name.
She chuckled and thought of a mischief & said "Ok ok telling baba my name is ANGEL
He was dumbstruck & thought she is no less than an my angel in my life & her name is only ANGEL...Woww!! He smiled broadly😃
She shook him the 3rd time MANIKK she said only audible to him. She asked kya hua naam acha nhi laga?? He than said her no no its just beautiful like her to which she blushed a lil 😳
The rest of the day they had fun in school & Manik was showing her his school.
After school they reached home all tired & Manik stopped her from going inside her home which made her confused.
Manik - Areeyy!! Byee to bolke jao Angel
Angel - Acha baba okay byee!!
Manik - Kitna rukha sukha byee karti ho tum par dont worry mein apni frnd ko ache se byee karunga
He smiled sheepishly
And the next moment what happened made her shock and freeze at her place.



Sorry again!! Late...always late I am😛 but kya karu jab time milta hai tabhi i can write na😃 So heres the nxt update plzz do like and comment if uh liked it!😉


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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Really good nd very interesting. Chotu manik nd nandu r damn cute. Plz update regularly. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Your story is very sweet with nana muna manik and angle nandni.
Their sweet talk is very cute. Please try to update regular. .
Nice story. Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Hollaa guyzz !! After ages ryt 🥱 Sholllyyy 😳😳
Bohot wait karvaya naa maine sab ko ??? But wat to do soo much of studies n work i have...Baap re Baap
Acha chelo chodo...here's the nxt update


Happy Reading

Chapter 4
(Flashback continues)
Manik kissed her on the cheeks and then said goodbye Angel to which her eyes popped out.
Manik chuckled on seeing this😳
(Flashback ends)

Present
Manik thought to himself "I wish i could have never let you go...I wish I never had said you Goodbye😒 I miss you Angel"
He then moved out from the jam room

On the other hand
Nandini's class had just finished so the trio made thier way out giggling
When suddenly Mukti asked "Nandu kaha thi subah itna late kyu hogaya??"
This made Nandu go back to flashback what all happened with her in the morning with the MONSTER😡
She made a grumpy face and narrated them the whole story.
As soon as she completed the story the duo started laughing their heart out and then Mukti said "Nandu usne tujhe Andhi bola...haha lol"
Nandu glared her angrily due to which she stopped laughing. Later to avoid the topic Navya said "Arey chodo na yeh sab hume bhook lagi hai chalo canteen chalte hai"
The trio left fr the canteen

In the canteen
Manik was with Cabir and had also narrated him the morning incident to which Cabir gave his expert comment "Waah milna padega iss ladki se...kuch toh baat hai usme to usne colg ke hulk 'The Manik Malhotra' ko muh tod jawab diya"😆
Manik glared at him and soon his attention went on the trio who had just entered the canteen
Nandini was laughing her heart out along with Muku and Navya. Manik was mesmerized by her the way she was laughing...but then he came out of his la la land when Cabir clicked his fingers in front of him.
Cabir "Oh bhai kaha kho gaya??"
Manik avoiding eye contact n looking here n there "K..a.h.ii n..a.h..i "
By then before Cabir cud further interrogate Manik there came Mukti
"CABIRRR MANIKKK" Mukti shouted to which Nandini Navya Manik n Cabir covered their ears.
Cabir said "Ahh!! Muktiii kya kar rahi hai..mujhe behra nahi banna...abhi toh mujhe meri bohot sari tariff sunni hai yr..."
Manik "Shutup cabirr...aur Mukti tu chilla kyu rahi hai" making an irritated face.
Mukti "Manik Cabirr kya yr kitne tym ke baad mile hum...to thodi khushi to hogi hi naa"
Cabir then said "acha theek hai ab ye bata yeh dono kon hai??" pointing towards NavNi
Due to which Maniks expressions changed from smiling to furious one



Done finally !! Do comment hwz it ...cz the nxt update will b based on the feedback😊
Edited by kyy_manan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Interesting.. 😉 ab plz.. For next update dont take this much time 😔 😛 Keep writing 😉
Edited by Palchinn - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

awesome update...

loved it so much...

wondering if angel is actually nandu...

loved the flashback and the friendship of manan with their respective friends...

hope manan can soon sort out their issues...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Awesome update...loving it..
Continue soon...
Next one little big update huh..plzz pretty
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18



Wow you updated. ..

It's beautiful chapter.

He missed his angle.

But fight with nandni..

Looking forward to seeing more.


Stay blessed dear.





Thanks.





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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Very few commented😭 Still m updating in hope that ill get more comments
Chapter 5
Manik looked at Nandini with anger n Nandini also made an irritated face n looked away.
This caused Maniks anger to rise at its peak. He thought "WTH she is showing attitude to me ME MANIK MALHOTRA...wait ill show her " N before he cud to anything Mukti started speaking..
"Ohh yaa Cabir Mukti meet them they are my best friends she is Navya and she is..."
Manik "Ahh i know she is Miss Andhi" (with a smirk)😉
Nandu "Ohh plzz shutup uh monster...how dare you call me that😡" And with this they both started their tom n jerry fight
Finally aftr good ten mins Mukti Cabir n Navya shouted on top of their voice "STOP"
To which MaNan were startled
Then Cabir said to Nandini "Hii i'm Cabir"
Nandini smiled n said "Hii Cabir i'm Nandini"
Then mukti said to NavNi "Nandu Navu maine kaha tha na Fab 5 ke baare me..."
Nandini "haa ha pata hai par yaha srf do log hi hai...baaki do log kaha hai??"
Manik "Ohh to Miss Andhi Nandini ko ye to dikhayi diya..huh"
Nandini "You..."
Mukti "Areyy haa nandini woh dono naa kahi akele tym spend kare rahe honge...you know what i mean...hehe"
To which NavNi laughed
After good jolly time MukNavNi left bidding byee to ManBir.

As soon as they left Manik said "WTH yr Cabir ab ye ...kya naam hai uska haa Nandini..woh Mukti ki frnd nikli...ab me usse revenge bhi nahi le sakta...agar mukti ko bura laga to"
To which Cabir laughed n after some time they too left.




And this update is purposely small cz no one commentimg...Comment karo to lamba wala update milega😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Update was good.
Waitinggg for next parttt.

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