Manan ff -The Lost Souls Chap 12 pg24 /16th Apr

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Hiii guyzzz...i am a newbie...I'm writing a ff on manan..Its my first ever ff
on manan
So hope you guyzz like it 😊


PROLOUGE:
MANIK MALHOTRA- A RICH SPOILT BRAT 😉 and
the one and only heir of Malhotra Industries. He's always been rude,
arrogant with others but in reality he is soft at heart and has always
been craving for true Love. He has best friend ahh!! not actually he's
like a brother to him whose name is CABIR. Only he knows Manik in
and out. Also he has 2 more friends named DHRUV and ALYA. He only
hates one person in his life that is NYONIKA.

NANDINI MURTHY- A sweet, bubbly girl who lived
in USA but she returned back to India after her parents death with NAVYA her
best friend. She has one more best friend her childhood friend whose
like her sister named MUKTI. She always thinks for others rather than thinking




INDEX
CHAP 1 -PG 1
CHAP 2 -PG 2
CHAP 3 -PG 2
CHAP 4 -PG 3
CHAP 5 -PG 4
CHAP 6 -PG 4
CHAP 7 -PG 6
CHAP 8 -PG 12
CHAP 9 -PG 15
CHAP 10 -PG 18
CHAP 11 -PG 22
CHAP 12 -PG 24
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It's awesome !
And interesting 👏
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Nice concept...
Liked it..
Continue soon :)
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Chapter 1:

It was a bright sunny day and the sunrays were falling directly on a girly like structure who was constantly trying to hide her face in the pillow to avoid contact with sunrays.
Suddenly a girl came shouting in her room
"Nandu, uth jaldi...kitna soyegi..dekh ab to 9:30 baj gaye...ab to tere Aiyappa bhi tuje daatenge." she said giggling.
"Mukti yaar sone de naa..aur tu chinta mat kar Aiyappa se meine baat kar li hai." saying this she kept the pillow on her head.
Mukti then made her stand from her bed and forcefully pushed her in the bathroom to get ready to which Nandini grinned. After some time Nandini got freshened up and came down wearing a red color sleeveless top and shorts. As soon as she climbed down the stairs she saw that Mukti and Navya were already waiting for her at the dining table giving her angry glares. To which she walked fast to the dining table and sat quickly.
Navya was the first one to speak, "Arey Nandu, kitni jaldi uth gayi tu!! Dekh abhi toh sirf 10:30 hi baje hai." Then Mukti said, "Ha yaar Navya tu sahi keh rahi hai. Sorry Nandu meine tuje itni jaldi utha diya." Finally Nandini said irritatingly, "Ha ha ok...kal se 7 baje hi uth jaungi bas..Ab plzz breakfast kare muje bohot bhook lagi hai."
She said with a pleading face. Mukti and Navya chuckled listening to her and soon they 3 had their
breakfast.

It was 2pm when suddenly the weather started changing. The sky started surrounding by dark clouds. And then it started raining. Due to this change in weather Mukti and Navya got hell pissed as they had made a plan to go for shopping. But one person was there who was more than happy. She was none other than Nandini. Her happiness knew no bounds. She loved rains from childhood. Nandini started jumping in joy and these two were just happy seeing her jumping like a kid.
She ran outside to enjoy the rains and Mukti and Navya too followed her bt they stood by the door as they didnt like the rains much. Whereas Nandini went to her garden and started dancing in the rain. Seeing her going all wet Muku and Navya got worried and started shouting at her to come back as she'll get sick. But Nandu being the stubborn of all said no to them and then enjoying the rains she started singing[
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Kalaiyaan Kalaiyaan

Tu leya de meinu golden jhumke
Main kanna vich paavan chum chum ke
Tu leya de meinu golden jhumke
Main kanna vich paavan chum chum ke
Tu leya de meinu golden jhumke
Main kanna vich paavan chum chum ke
(She started dancing and then pulled Mukti and Navya outside to join her)


Mann jaa ve mainu shopping kara de
Mann jaa ve romantic picture dikha de
Requestaan paayiaan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve
(They three started doing the signature step just as in the song)

Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri teri hisse aayiaan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve
(They repeated the signature step)


Yeah
Youre my darling angel baby
White kalaiyan drives me crazy
Shiney eyes glitty glitty glittery
Youre the like that makes me going hazzy
(Mukti said mischiveously like a boy and twirled Nandini around)


Oh mainu chadhiya hai rang rang
Main khwabaan de sang sang aaj uddi phiran
Main saari raat uddi phiran
Oh badle jindadi de rang dhang
Meri neendein bhi tang tang, aaj uddi phiran
Main saari raat uddi phiran
(Nandini sang and went behind Navya and kept her chin on her shoulder)


Mann jaa ve gulabi chunni diva de
Mann jaa ve colourful chudi pavaa de
Requestaan paayiaan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri teri hisse aayiaan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve
(Again they 3 did the signature step)


Ghumde phirde saare citiyaan milkiyan
Chittiyaan kalaaiyan ve
Tere hathaan chumda rehnda
Phab tu lai liyaan, oh chittiyaan ve
(oh chittiyaan ve!)
(Mukti and Navya sang and pulled Nandini from here to there)


Mann jaa ve mainu shopping kara de
Mann jaa ve romantic picture dikha de
Requestaan paayiaan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri white kalaiyaan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri teri hisse aayiaan ve
Chittiyaan kalaiyaan ve
Oh baby meri chittiyan kalaiyan ve
(Lastly they started jumping and in the end shared a group hug)


[SIZE=3]Now all this was watched by a guy who was standing in his balcony. He could not see any of their faces but he could see that there is a tattoo on a girls left side shoulder on the top. He just smiled seeing them and stood there smiling in his balcony.



Pheww!! This was all my 1st chap howz it plzz like and comment below
your comments will encourage me to write the next chapter 😊
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Woow awsome one really very good
Wait for tje next update
Cont soon👏
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Mind blowing
plz continue soon
Update nxt part soon
PM me plz whenever you will update nxt part

Love,
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<font size="3">Sorry guyzz i'm a lil busy now in studies...i'll take a lil time to write the next chap...soo plzz bear with the promo now...here is the Promo</font>


<font size="4">Nandini was walking fast as she was late</font>
<font size="4">On the other hand Manik was coming from the opposite direction but his attention was in his phone so he wasn't aware of who was coming from the front</font>
<font size="4">And then </font><font size="5">BOOM</font>
<font size="4">Nandini : Sorry sorry really sorry i...</font>
<font size="4">Her sentence was left incomplete by our very own Manik Malhotra</font>
<font size="4">Manik : What the hell cant uh see Miss Commoner or should i say Miss Andhi</font>
<font size="4">Nandini looked at him in anger and the next moment Manik winced in pain</font><font size
Edited by kyy_manan - 10 years ago
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Sorry sorry sorry guyzz for not updating from so long 😒 Sorry fr keepin you wait for soo long bt i really wasnt well from past few weeks. I got tym now so m updating the 2nd chap

Chapter 2
Flashback:
Nandini started singing the song. But there was someone whose sleep got disturbed due to this melodious voice
For the very 1st tym Manik Malhotra i mean 'The Manik Malhotra' got up with a smile on his face. He was just mesmerized listening to this melodious voice. Nevet in his life he had listened such a beautiful voice.
He immediately got up from his bed went towards his balcony.He just saw 3 girls dancing and singing in the rain. He couldn't recognize wich one of them was singing & also was unable to see their faces due to the heavy rains. But he noticed a tattoo which made him smirk & he thought "I will surely find out who was the owner of this beautiful voice." He then went back to his room & freshened up for colg and left.
(flashback ends)
Here Mukti & Navya were ready for colg n were shouting at Nandini to come fast as they were late.
Nandu shouted : Muku Navya tum log jao mein aa jaungi.
Muku Navya : Pakka ??
Nandini : Haan pakka bye!
Muku Navya : Okay! bye! Jaldi aa jaana.
With this they both left fr colg in Muktis car. After sometym Nandini came out talking to her Aiyapaa "Uff! Aiyapaa colg ka 1st day n i'm already late. Mera kya hoga Aiyapaa??"
She then hurriedly left fr colg in her car and reached the colg within no tym. She texted Mukti that she has reached the colg n is unable to find the class & asked her in which class she is.
Nandini was walking fast as she was late.On the other hand Manik was coming from the opp. direction but his attention was in his phone so he wasn't aware of who was coming from front.
And then "BOOM"
Nandini :Sorry sorry really sorry I...
Her sentence was left incomplete by our very own Manik Malhotra.
Manik :WTH cant uh see Miss commoner or shud i say Miss Andhi.
Nandini looked at him in anger & the next moment Manik winced in pain!!
Nandini stomped her foot on his angrily. 😡
Manik : Owww!! Ouchh!! WTH!! you... 😡
Nandini : Listn uh whatever ur name is how dare uh call me Andhi.. Dare uh call me blind nxt tym. I said sorry to uh & also it wasnt my fault completely...tumhara dhyan bhi nhi tha to tumhe bhi sorry bolna chahiye...samjhe...MONSTER 😡
Saying this she ran towarda her classroom as Mukti already had texted her t
he room no.

Manik was now hell angry. Nobody dared to mess with him but this girl was driving him crazy. He said to himself "How dare she mess with me. Bloody Commoner. She doesnt know who Manik Malhotra is.Now ill show her with whom she messed up." And he also walked from there angrily.
Manik was in the jam room & was playing his guitar angrily thinking about the incident wich took place few mins back.He was hell angry n was thinking how to show Nandini her right place. Just then he got up & a keychain fell down.
Manik was about to go but then he noticed the keychain and picked it up.He was continuously staring at the keychain. Yes it was HIS keychain. It was a keychain of a guitar. He smiled lookin at it & all his anger flew far away from him. 😆




Sorry for this crappy update. I had no tym as i have my internals cmng so busy preparing for it. But still I wrote this Chap for ull. Hope ull will like it & if not then all the eggs n tomatoes are welcomed :p Do hit like and leave your precious comments 😊
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nc update..beautifully pened.manik& nandini encounter..hehehe..too much funny..plzz update nxt prt soon

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