Manan ff -The Lost Souls Chap 12 pg24 /16th Apr - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Wowww amazing...awesome...beautifull...
mindblowing story
Read all d parts in one go
Enjoyed a lot...hahahahaha miss andhi n monster...manik ki angel nandu hai...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Hi dear read ur ff in one go,its awesome N waiting for next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
hi..!!! so i read all the parts in a go nd i seriously loved it..;!!! eagerly waiting fr nxt part...update soon!!
nd plz do me a favour..i cant buddy u cause i hve problem in my account..cant buddy people!!! so plz pm me even if i dont send a buddy request!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Hello everyone !! Thankyou all for likin and commenting but please silent readers do comment...comparing to the views the comments are too less...bt i hope aage mujhe aur jyaada likes & comments milenge... :)


Chapter 7
Nandu got out from the car and as soon as she stepped out everyone was stunned to see her. She was wearing a red one piece reaching till her mid thighs and black stelletos, her long silky hair were giving complement to her white alluring skin.

Manik and Cabir's mouth were wide open seeing her. She was lookin too hot & cute at the same time.😲
Manik thought "How can someone look so hot & cute at the same time??"😊

Cabir shook him and said "Oyee kaha kho gaya?? Nandini me ??" He asked with a smirk.😛
"Haan" manik said still lost in her beauty. And then he realized what he said.
Then he immediately said "Kya...kya ...kuch bhi bol raha hai...me...nan..nandini me kyu kho jaunga...muje koi interst nhi hai..huhh" 😡
"Haan woh toh dikh raha hai..hehe" cabir said giggling.
"Cabirrr" manik shouted.😡
And before he could do anythng the girls approached them and said hii.

Cabir said "Hii girls...Someone is lookin hot haa" he said lookin at nandini bt mukti thought he said to her so she said "Thanks Cabir tujhe toh pata hai main paida hi hot hui thi"
"Whatt??" Cabir said
"Ohh hello!! Tuje kisne bola tu hot hai...meine toh nandini ko bola..tuje mein hot bolunga aise bure din bhi nahi aaye mere samjhi" he said
"Cabirr tu gaya kaam se" mukti gritted her teeth n ran behind him.
Seeing them fighting n chasing like tom n jerry NavNi were there standing n laughing n once again manik was lost in her laughter.

But then Cabir came to him n jst whispered in his ears "Udd gaye totte re tere toh udd gaye totte re" & before manik cud do anythng he ran from there n stopped mid way n shouted "Class me milte hai manik"
Manik murmured under his breath "Cabirr beta tu mil muje phir bataunga kis ke totte udd gaye"

Mukti then came there to NavNi n Manik "Chalo class ka time ho raha hai...uss cabirr ke bacche ko to me baadme dekh lungi..huhh"
"Chill yr mukti...chal class mein chalte hai" nandu said ignoring maniks presence.
"Manik tu kya kar raha hai khade khade chal tuje nhi chalna class mein??" Mukti asked
"Haan chal" he said

Then they four went to class.
In the class Mukti n Nandini were sitting together behind Nandini wad Manik n beside him Cabir.
Navya was sittin with a guy called shahid before MukNi and DhrulYa were there sitting in a corner.

Cabir was the frst one to speak "Abeyy oo love birds kabhi hum logo ko bhi tym do...yaha to aao hum tum dono ko kisise milvana chahte hai"
Dhruv n Aliya came there n Cabir introduced them to NavNi.
Then soon the professor entered the class bt the class was vry boring...evry one was doin timepass .

Suddenly Manik saw something on Nandinis left shoulder on the upper side. He saw a tatto on her shoulder which made him shocked.😲


Now like and comment jldi jldi...n long ones...silent readrs jag jao plzz its a request.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Awesome
amazin'
mindblowing
fantastic
fabulous
superb update
read all the chapters in one ago
and loved them a lot
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
I read all parts in one go. . It is a cute si sweet si love story..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Nice update manik to gaya kam se waiting to know manik KO kab pata chalega ki nandu hi uski angel hai do something ki sab nandu k ghar Jaye n manik sees her childhood pic with her family n multi use bole k ye nandu ki pic hai n how she lost her memory tab mama aayega.
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
amazing
i just love nandu new dress up
love u
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Awesome
Amazing
Superb update
Cabir tera kch nhi ho skta...tu ekk din pakkaa peetega...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Ahh..what tattoo ?? And why shocked 😲
Jaldi se btao na.. 😛

Eagerly waiting for the update 😉

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