Manan ff -The Lost Souls Chap 12 pg24 /16th Apr - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Wooow awesome story very interesting story line
All read in one go
Keep the good work up
I really liked it
Plz don't discontinued
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92
Hey guyzz !! I know I know ki sab yehi soch rahe hai ke il continue or no...So here YES i'm continuing this ff as many of uh requested me to do so... :) But as i'm badly stuck up with my college work i cant update...I'll surely try & update till tomorrow...Till then enjoy the Promo !!

PROMO


Cabir Manik Nandini were siting in the canteen & talking abt random things when suddenly cabir thought if a mischief.

Cabir : Are Nandini (teasingly) itne din ho gaye tumne hame apne boyfriend se nahi milvaya...vry bad...bolo kab milvaogi?? (Looking at manik)

Manik who was busy in his phone with his head down shot up his head n looked at Nandini for an answer.

Nandini got to know abt Cabirs intention so she acted : Ohh haan !! Really sorry Cabir..mein itne din se busy thi naa isilye bhool gayi...kal pakka milva dongi !!

Cabir with a shocked face : Wh...what??..matlab...s..a..c..h m..e..i..n tumh..ara BOYFREIND hai?? (Pressuring the word boyfriend)

Nandini (innocently) : haan !! Kyu?? Nahi hona chahiye??

Manik felt a pain in his heart hearing her but then reminded himself that he is only friend with her to know the truth..Thats it & nothing else !!

Cabir : Nahii woh...mera woh matlab nahi tha (in a low voice)

Nandini noticed their faces which were sad & she felt bad so she was gonna tell them the truth whenn...

Guy : Hey baby doll !! I'm back !! (Hugging her from backside) I missed uh sooo much girlfriend ;)

Manik & Cabir were shocked but someone was angry & also jealous..!! (Kon ho sakta hai ofcourse MANIK)



Soo kaise laga ??? Jaldi bolna warna phir naraz ho jaungi aur kahi chali jaungi :( Do like & comment on howz the Promo :)
Cya !! Tata !! Bubyee !! Take care !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Plz don't discontinue u y story.
It's very nice
plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Nice promo n pls no misunderstanding between manan nandu should tell that she doesnt have bf n update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Haha nandini apne hi prank meI pass gyi ...
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Chapter 9

Manik took a glance at Cabir & was sure that he is upto sumthng. So then he said immediately "Umm..vo..nandini chalo ill drop uh home as Mukti & navya tumhari car le gayi hai"

N : Its ok manik il manage...uh dont take tension

M : What yaar nandini...abhi abhi to friends bane hein...itni formal kya ban rahi ho?? Chalo im telling uh na il drop uh to bas.

C : Han nandini...manik drop kar dega tumhe...kitna force kar raha hai...kitne PYAAR se bol raha hai...vaise tumhe ek baat bolu?? Manik ne aaj tak hum me se kisi ko bhi itne pyaar se nhi pucha jitna tumhe...

Manik glared him due to which he got scared & kept quiet

M : Cabirrr (smiling yet gritting his teeth) main tujhe raat ko jab TERE ghar tujhse milne aaunga naa...tabhi tujhse dher saari baatein karunga...voh bhi PYAAR se...thik hain.

Cabir gulped & nodded

MaNan left bidding bye to Cabir

C : Hey bhagwan!! Plzz bacha lena aaj manik se...i promise aaj ke baad use kabhi pareshan nhi karunga...kal baat karenge agar zinda rahenge toh...tata!!


In Manik's car
M : Haan toh ab bolo kaha jaana hai??

N : Whatt kaha jaana hai...mere ghar aur kaha.

M : Ohh woww what an excellent ans Ms. Murthy..im impressed!!

N : Thankyou ;)

M : Thankyou?? Like seriously nandini !! Tum bachpan se hi aisi ho yaa WAQT NE KIYA KOI HASEEN SITAM...no wait haseen nahi ho sakta...umm..toh...

N : Ho gaya tumhara dialogue marna?? Ab mein bolu tumhe mere ghar ka raasta??

M : EUREKA!! Finally like finally you got some brains...thankyou god!! Ab bolo..

Nandini then showed him the directions & manik also didnt notice the way as he was bsy in talking to nandini. As they reached manik was shocked. Nandini got down & said thnx to manik & made her way to her house.

Manik came out of trance & saw nandini going so he shouted "NANDINIII"

Nandini got scared & saw manik cuming running towards her. "Kya hua manik..tum thik ho naa...tum chilaye kyu..bolo manik...anything serious..mein tumse kuch puch rahi hoon manik...kuch to bolo..mujhe aise kyu bulaya...kahin tumne bhoot to nahi dekh liyaa...aiyaapaa..plzz bachao..manik bachaoo..."

M : CHUPPP!!! Bolne dogi toh bolunga naa...mein tumse sirf yeh puchne ke liye aaya tha ke tum yaha (pointing at her home) yaha rehti ho??

Nandini got angry as only fr this purpose he shouted & scared the shit out of her. She shouted "WTH!! Manik tumne sirf yeh puchne ke liya chilaya...like seriously...tumhe pata hai mein kitna darr gayi thi...you idiot.."

M : ok ok sorry...woh actually mein waha (pointing towards the house in opp. direction) rehta hoon..isliye (making a puppy face) sorry!!

N : (sighed) its ok!! Waise tum yahi rehte ho...gud ab aur pareshan karungi tumhe. (She joked)

Manik murmured under his breath "Pareshan kon kise karta hai yeh to aage chalke hi pata chalega"

N : Kuch kaha tumne??

M : Haa..na..nahi to...acha ok bye...mein cabir k ghar jaa raha hoon...kal milte hai & he left.

Few days passed like this & manik & nandinis frndshp grew stronger. As manik was in this frndshp only fr a reason bt he had unknown feelings developed fr her. Nandini on the other hand had also unknown feelings developing & only Cabir noticed them.


Few days later...


Cabir Manik Nandini were siting in the canteen & talking abt random things when suddenly cabir thought if a mischief.

Cabir : Are Nandini (teasingly) itne din ho gaye tumne hame apne boyfriend se nahi milvaya...vry bad...bolo kab milvaogi?? (Looking at manik)

Manik who was busy in his phone with his head down shot up his head n looked at Nandini for an answer.

Nandini got to know abt Cabirs intention so she acted : Ohh haan !! Really sorry Cabir..mein itne din se busy thi naa isilye bhool gayi...kal pakka milva dongi !!

Cabir with a shocked face : Wh...what??..matlab...s..a..c..h m..e..i..n tumh..ara BOYFREIND hai?? (Pressuring the word boyfriend)

Nandini (innocently) : haan !! Kyu?? Nahi hona chahiye??

Manik felt a pain in his heart hearing her but then reminded himself that he is only friend with her to know the truth..Thats it & nothing else !!

Cabir : Nahii woh...mera woh matlab nahi tha (in a low voice)

Nandini noticed their faces which were sad & she felt bad so she was gonna tell them the truth whenn...

Guy : Hey baby doll !! I'm back !! (Hugging her from backside) I missed uh sooo much girlfriend ;)

Manik & Cabir were shocked but someone was angry & also jealous..!! (Kon ho sakta hai ofcourse MANIK)

Nandini recognized him by his voice she instantly turned around & shouted "OMG!!! ABHIII...I missed you soo much" (making a pout)
She said hugging him. (Manik burned in jealousy seeing them hugging each other. He soo wanted to punch abhi..but alas...)
Abhi chuckled on her baby like behaviour & imagining her pout although she was hugging him and her face was nt visible to him. He too hugged her back & said "I missed you too baby doll..much more than you...isliye toh aaya hu sirf tere liye" (M : Baby doll...how dare he call her baby doll...huhh..& yeh kya hai sirf tere liye aaya hu..iski toh mein...bt stopped as nandini said)

N : Thankyou soo much abhi fr coming...I LOVE YOU
(MANIK WAS LITERALLY SHOCKED HEARING THIS HE SOO WANTED TO PUNCH THAT ABHII BUT WHEN HE HEARD NANDINI SAYING 'I LOVE YOU' TO HIM HE CUDNT DO ANYTHNG...HE FELT A SHARP PANG IN HIS HEART AS SUMONE STABBED HIS HEART)


So hogaya chap 9...ab plzz comment karo...aur bolo kaisa laga..this is d third tym i wrote this as do baar mera update delete jo gaya tha:'( Plzz like & comment jaldi m waiting...
riyaparo thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Awesome update
continue soon
thankr for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Haha ab aayega maza..
Aww manik was jealous. .
Ab use realize ho jayega and may be wo confess kar de ..
Do update soon
Waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
abhi sa jealous hoka agar manik ko apni feeling samjhe aye toe bohot ache baat ha...
nandu manik ko kya truth bolaga???!!!jab usa khud kuch yaad nahi ha...pata nahi sab kuch kasa hoga???!!!
plz next part post kariya...asap plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazingg
Fab update
Thnx for pm me
jealous manik...wowww abhi ki entry
Lovd it
Continue soon

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