Manan ff -The Lost Souls Chap 12 pg24 /16th Apr - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Hey... I m new reader of a r stry..
Read it in a go..
I think u hv pmed thee 8 chp..
Can u pls pm me too..
I want know Wht happen d..
I really liked ur stry...
And hi n monster..lol roll..
Pls do pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Arrey I did comment on chap 6. But i didnt get to know when u updated chap 7, so couldnot comment. Its just dat my semester exams are approaching so i dont come online much. Do pm me the part plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Plzz send the PM
Love your story

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Read all part in one go. Pleaseee do pm me 8 chap
Edited by Maramkhan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
PLS PM me chap 8
Ur story is soo good
love the concept

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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Start of the friendship.. Beautiful 😊
Many thanks for the PM..
Do continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is the last time I am bearing it...Plzz comment or else I will have to discontinue this ff.

Here is the chapter...Enjoy!!

Chapter 8

Manik was shocked to see the tattoo on her shoulder.

He thought 'Yeh..yeh kaise ho sakta hai...how is this possible...its exactly same'

It was a tattoo of guitar same as the keychain Manik had given by his Angel.

Maniks POV

'Toh kya she is my A... No no she cant be...She was soo beautiful and yeh..umm..yeh bhi beautiful hai par...she was very sweet and yeh khadoos huhh...she cant be my Angel. I need to know then who is she. Areeyy yaar par yeh kitni nakchadi hai yehh...huhh...par phir bhi kuch karna padega'


Soon the class got over and evryone headed towards the canteen but Nandini told that she has some work in library. So she went towards library. This was a chance fr Manik to talk to her so he made an excuse that Nyonika called him. Soon evrybody left for canteen. Manik went behind her& called 'Nandini'

She turned back and saw Manik coming so she frowned making a cute pout & started talking to Aiyapaa 'Aiyapaa !! Ab isse kya chahiye...yeh yaha kyu aa raha hai?? Kahi phirse jhagda karne to nhi aa raha...Uff!!'


Manik 'Aa...voo..Nandini..mujhe...tumse kuch baat karni hai...' he said hesistantly.

Nandini raised her eyebrow asking what??

He continued 'Vohh..actually...voh..mujhe bolna tha ki...voh actually..mein..'

'Kya voh mein voh actually..jaldi bolo jo bolna hai' Nandini said

'Actually main kehna chahta tha ki uss din jo kuch bhi hua voh thik nahi hua..haa toh bas..galat hua' he said in one go.

'Ohh to Mr.Manik Malhotra is here trying to say SORRY haina??' She said smirking

'Umm..haa..vohi...that only sorry' he said in a whisper to himself.

'Wht?? Mujhe kuch sunai nahi diya' she asked him

'I said sorry' he said a lil loud bt only audible to her gritting her teeth.

'Areey thoda politely' nandini

'Listen you...' manik

Maniks POV

Control manik control you can do this. I know bohot jyada nakhre dikha rahi hai bt you have to do this'

'Listen Nandini I am sorry' he said a lil politely.

Nandini 'Ok ok its fine...waise i'm sorry too...voh mujhe bhi tumse waise baat nahi karni chahiye thi'

Maniks POV

Awww she is soo cutee...the way she said sorry soo adorable she looks...wait...whatt?? Manik tu pagal toh nahi hogaya naa...concentrate'

Manik "Soo friends??" forwarding his hand

Nandini thought for a while then she too happily gave her hand "Friends"

"So then any girlfriend??" Nandini asked. She herself didnt knew why she asked him this question.

"Naah" Manik said "Tum nahi mili naa" he said with a mischevious smirk😉

"Whatt??" Nandini said shockingly😲

'Areyy chill was just jokin...chalo lets go to canteen' manik said

'Oh then its ok...yaah bt i wanted to go library..toh...' nandini

'Baad me chali jaana abhi sab log canteen me wair kar rahe honge so chalo' manik

Saying so they both headed towards the canteen chatting laughing smiling with each other.

As soon as they entered the canteen Fab 4 & Navya were shocked to see them together that too smiling.

Cabir 'Pinch me please...am i dreaming yaa phir yeh sach me...'

Before he cud complete mukti pinched him hard to which he yelled

'Aaah !! Mukti kamini maar daale gi kya??' Cabir said

Mukti 'Tune hi to bola ki pinch kar to maine kiya yaar' innocently

'Areyy chodo woh sab par aaj suraj kaha se nikla hai ki yeh dono haste gaate hue aa rahe hai ??' Navya questioned

MaNan reached there & said Hii to every 1.

Cabir being the naughtiest 'Kuch to hua hai...kuch ho gaya hai'

To which Manik glared him & cabir said 'Kya?? Hadd hai ab main khulke gaa bhi nhi sakta..huhh' faking anger.

Manik gave a whatever look.

Soon Dhrulya left & then MukYa had some wrk so Nandini told Mukti to take her car.

Soon they also left. Now only MaNanBir were left.



Pheww !!! Done kaisa laga do comment bt nt in PM . Kya hoga ab MaNanBir ke beech me?? Cabir kya karega?? To know like & comment fast😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Hey..
I asked fr pm but u didn't
Thnk fr the chp..
Gud one..
I hope Manik discovers abt his angel soon..
Keep writing
Awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Liked it
Manan are friends! !!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
It's very NYC cute
I hope he will find soon about his angel
Plz update soon

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