Manan ff -The Lost Souls Chap 12 pg24 /16th Apr - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful concept..

Angel n little manik was so cute...

but suddenly where she gone..???

Thanx lord mukti knew cabir n manik from before..

i thought lots of argue will happen saa bach gayi..

umm there wasn't much role of
navya..

Grrr Abhi kahan sai aagiya..

hoo manik face was worth to watch..

thanx for pm

keep smiling n take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazingly written.. Went thru al d updates so far..I loved it.. With abhi's entry,thngs r going to get quite intresting !!! Keep up d gud work.. Thank u 4 d pm ! Stay Blessed ! #OkThanksBye !
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc update waiting fr d next one
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Posted: 9 years ago
wsome update

loved it
manik getting jealous

mukti as a bestest frnd

next update please

pls send pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read it in one
n its swam
bhavanims thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
I read all chapter in one go it was awesome
Nice concept pls update next soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aca hoga ager nandu don't reval abhi

Jealous manik ko dektay maja ata hai



Awesome


Nice



Superb




#WeStandByParth
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heyaa!! Guyss i am here to give u'll a promo...so be ready...i hope u'll will like it..!!😊
Promo

Manik was really pissed due to nandinis behaviour & thought to finish the mess once for all..

He saw nandini walking in an empty corridor..he immediately pulled her in an empty classroom & pinned her to the wall!!

Nandini gasped due to the sudden pull & was about to shout when someone put a hand on her mouth to avoid her from shouting.

She had her eyes closed as she got afraid...she slowly opened her eyes to meet familiar pair of eyes which were now blazing with fire..!!

M :Dont shout! I'm gonna take my hand (he spoke sternly)

She nodded. He took of his hand still pinning her to the wall & began with his oh-so-desperate-questions

M : WHO THE HELL WAS HE NANDINI??

N : (innocently) who??

Manik ran his hand through his hair in frustration & banged his hand on both her sides on the wall trapping her.

M : Dont! Dont try to act innocent with me...tum achese janti ho mein kiski baat kar raha hu (his eyes spitting fire)

Nandini still didnt understand as to whom he was referring & was getting irritated so she snapped out

N : WTH Manik!! Tum kiski baat kar rahe ho..how wud I know ke tum kiski baat kar rahe ho...Ek toh first of all you drag me here out of nowhere & now asking these stupid questions...Like seriously..??

Manik pulled her with her arm digging his nails in her arms causing her pain.

M : Ohhh soo now you dont know abt whom i m talking right...I AM TALKING ABOUT ABHI DAMMIT..!!! (he shouted)



Promo😉 Giving an update is impossible fr me as my exams are coming so here is a chotu sa promo...do like & comment abt it!!
Tiara115 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ah possessive manik is back ..
Really excited
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Waiting waiting...for possessive manik😃

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