Enchanted - a manan ff link for new thread and part 14 in the indexl - Page 17

I read all the 6 chapters in one go and I just loved it. The concept is so etheral yet so practical.

Your writing skill is very good. Keep on updating as I have fallen in love with this story 👏

May Allah bless you 😊

Jus read all 5 parts...
I liked yur story... it was not at all bad...
but I din like sm things...
C d way u have shown nandini is jus tooo much! (I feel)
Its like she is like tooo quite..., she is too scared of manik, she takes it
quitely wateva he says..., she bares everything..., she is tooo traditional
(C u knoe I actuallly don read ff's whr she is jus into indian dresses cause I jus don like)
I mean i feel come on... live in today's world... get ova dose kurti's n suits... its like ok u wear... bt y always?
Srry If u felt bad... I was jus a bit frank!
Really srry...
U knoe wat I think nandini shld leave manik... n shld have a comebck as nans...
totally different... its my suggestion it may b crap... bt I jus wanted to tell u... soo I commented
nyways will b waiting fr d nxt part! Tysm fr d pm!

finally some MaNan face to face scenes...super like...update soon...lol...I'm greedy

This story is so different . It's so nice , cont soon

Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next soon with manan update

wow...Thnx for the lovely update...it was jus awsm...i jus loved it..cont. soon eagerly waiting for next part...

The story is going great and you are giving full justice... Would love to see Manik's reaction on Nandu's interaction with Dhruv Nd the parents ...as in what he is missing as Nandu is not her normal self with him... Could be jealousy / possessiveness ... Now that I leave it in your good hands ... But would love to see how you bring that :)))) waiting for your next update

I love the story line really very much plz do update soonish will ne waiting impatiently

Love your story... Its just pure love and adoration frm nandini...its beautiful .. Ya i would like nandini to be more assertive ...but if manik realises his love on his own...without someone else's prodding will be beautiful

Now i understand dat manik too love nandini unconditionally.. Its jst dat he didn't realised...
Lovely n cute update...
Gudmrng nd hv a grt dae ahead...