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Originally posted by: Kritika_05

Hy dear it's amazing update 👏
Read all d parts amazing work dear plzz next manan update
Can't wait but it's okay take ur time dear but give a long one 😊

Thankyou I'll give manan update also don't worry just wait and haa I'll try long one

Originally posted by: HTA111

Wow awesome fabulous fantastic update

Yay its abhi and Manik was not liking it the closeness with his Nandu but she she told him that he is her cousin so he is relieved now but why is he so much angry on the phone whom he is talking to but he was startled when Nandu kissed him and she being close to him is his weakness and he won't let her go that easily

Continue soon and thanks for pm

thankyou once again ur comment made me so happy what can he do he dnt want anyone around her and she's his weekness no doubt and phone thing u will know soon and I'll continue soon stay blessed

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Awesome

Gr8

Fab

Rock

Make manik jealous n realise yaar

thankyou and see me manik ko jealous th bana du but realize itna jaldi nhi as meri story khatam hojaegi fir so understand

Originally posted by: music_manan

Nice n intelligent story writing. Ur story is vry smooth . I like this nandini vry much. Who is vry much confident. She can take her own decisions . I m vry eagerly waiting for their realisation. Vry beautifully penned.

thankyou and haa I want her to be confident and powerful and not dependent on anyone as every girl should be like this and yaa realization will come dnt worry and I'll update soon

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE

nice but short...so plz try to give long update

along with full of manan scenes

thankyou I give manan scenes but I need to focus on others also to balance the story anf I'll give long update next one

Originally posted by: suraiya77

Wow!
Awesome update!
Loved it..
But chotusa!
It's ok that's not a problem
so abhi is nandu's cousin
the last part was sweet

thankyou I know chotusa hai but I have a reason as I mentioned and yes he's her cousin will update soon

Originally posted by: AsthaVerma92

No prob its a chotu update bt a good and an owsm one m w8ng for ur nxt update...

Update soon dear

Thankyou dear and next time pakka big one and I'll update soon

Originally posted by: parul.pandey

nice

pyar ki suruaat ho gai hamare manan ke beech

good

as usual abhi ka flirt shuru ho gaya mukti ko dekhte hi

but harshad wo itni asani se to chup nahi hoga

koi nahi hamara manik hai uske liye

par nandini ne thanks kyun bola manik ko

and thanks

haa love has started to grow but these idiots need time to understand and abhi flirt karega tabi u guyzz will get mukbhi na and harshad ko mene abi bhaga diya hai aur right time pe laungi and manik usey nhi chodega amd nandini ne thanks kyu bola u will get to knw in next

Originally posted by: thakkarisha2810

hey thankyou so much for this update.. yes i was a silent reader , but your story is just awesome could not stop my self commenting ..

Thankyou so much , i read all chapters at a go , trust me enjoyed a lot.. i know i will sound greedy but please update next part soon & please do pm me

thankyu once again

thankyou I'm happy that u commented now it means a lot to me and I'll update soon and about the pm u need to buddy me then u will surely get it okay

Originally posted by: akkukh

hey ...
new here !!!!
commenting first tym ...
uor story iz amazing gal ...
and han don't get upset regarding comments n all ...
write so so so gud ...ki unko lrna hi padega ...
jaise I m doing ...
till then
take care ...
update soon ...
n don't be upset :)

thanks a lot I'm happy u commented and haa I'll try giving my best everytime and I'm a writer na so I get upset that's it and thankyou stay blessed