MANAN FF:CAN IT BE REAL.................part 16 pg 25 5/10/15 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 6:
manik nandu reached at nandu's house they were walking through the garden towards the main door when nandu's dog came and jumped on manik and started licking his face.
manik: hey smurfy my boy ya i know u missed me ( manik tapped his back... and rubbed his ears and stood up...)
nandu: lagta ha is na tumahin buhat miss kyia .
manik: ya it seems so ...
nandu: chalo bhookar singh ab kahana kahana ha k nahi .
manik: what bhookar singh nandu ki bachi abhi batata hoon...
manik started chazing nandu she ran inside and stood behind chachi ...
chachi: aray aray nandu kya kar rahi ha...
nandu: chachi dekho na yeh manik ...
chachi: mujy pata ha tu na he usy tang kyia ho ga phely...
manik: han chachi is na mujy bhookar singh ... kaha...
chachi: ( hold nandu's ear ) nandu badmash ...
nandu: ahhh chachi.dekho na ye kitna khata hai...abhi tho humne pani purii khaya hai...aur ab is bhukad singh ko phir se khana khana hai...
manik: nandu... tum
nandu run upstairs manik chazed her ...
chachi: tum dono jaldi hath mun dho k neechy aa jao ... cabir bhi ata hi ho ga...
nandu: manik dekho ab tum bhookar ho toh ho ...
manik: tum ru ko zara abhi bata hoon...
nandu: mujhe pakado tho sahi...
manik chazed nandu in her room sunddenly both of them fall on the bed... manan eyelock...
chachi: nandu manik jaldi a jao cabir bhi a gaya khana kha lo
manik nandu came back to their senses ... Manik got up nandu also got up and arranged her
dress ...
manik: woo chachi bula rahi hain...
nandu: han... han ... Tum... chalo main ati hoon.
manik left ... nandu was smiling ...
manik came down cabir was already there...
cabir: hey man... Kya hua smile kyun kar raha hai larkion ki traha...
manik: shut up ...
cabir : ok dude let's eat ...
nandu came down and sat with manik, cabir was sitting with chachi
chachi: toh bacho kaisa gaya clg ka phela din...
cabir: ohhh... kamal...aj toh maza a gaya...
chachi: ohhh acha aisa kaya hua ...
cabir: aray humara plan kamyab ho gaya...
chachi: konsa plan...
nandu manik & cabir give each other a shocking look ...
nandu: wo chachi ya cabir toh asy he ... ap kahana kaho na ...
manik: han chachi kuch nahi ...
chachi: kuch toh khichdi pak rahi tum sab k beech...
manik ... Tum batoo
manik swallowed the food in his mouth ... quickly
manik: main...
chachi: han tum...
cabir: aray meri CID chachi kyun ek bat k pechay padi ho... bechary ko khana toh khanay do...main bata hon
nandu & manik gave cabir a questioning look...
cabir : chachi wo soha ha na...
chachi: han... wo tumahary school wali...
cabir: han wo hi... wo apnay manik ... ( manik nandu shocked ) ki raging karnay wail thi... toh hum na usy hi us ky plan main phasa dyia...
nandu manik took a breath of relief ...
chachi: cabir tum na us bachari ko zayada tang toh

nahi kyia na...
cabir: chachi wo aur bachari ... Full on vamp ha...
chachi: acha ab mun bad karo aur kahana kaho...
all of them finished food ...
cabir: ok chachi hum sab mery room main ja rahay hain...
chachi: chalo thik ha...
nandu ,manik and cabir went upstairs to cabir's room...
manik: ohhh dude I thought ... Tu chachi ko sab batay wala ha...
nandu hit cabir on his head ...
nandu: pagal o tum chachi kya sochay ge ...
cabir: ohhh relax guy's ... thora drama dalna toh banta ha na...
nandu: ah ha ha drama ...
manik: seriously dude scene toh tu na awesome set kyia ...
cabir: acha cholo yeh choro ... ab mujy bato k which song r we performing...
nandu: hum batyian ...
manik: aray bahi music director toh tu ha ... hum toh... singers hain jo bolo ge wo karenge ...
cabir: oh ho mr. Rockstar malhotra...show off mat kar na yar ... help me out...
manik: oh ho acha baba ... kuch sochaty hain...
cabir: item song kisa rahay ga...
Nanduu hit him with pillow...
nandu: idiot tu paghal ha so cheap ...
manik & nandu both said together ...
manik& nandu: how about a romantic song...
they both looked at each other and started laughing ...
cabir: ohhh... man exactly awesome aur agar tum dono main lead karo gay toh It will rock...
cabir: chalo ab bas lets write the lyrics ... then we r ready ...

to be contuuu

here is the next part as promised
its a little boring but trust me it will be better in next part




note
guys who ever want a PM for the update plzzz
let me know through comment or PM
cause i'll not me sending PM'S to silent readers
sorry 😊
Edited by zaroge - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Nice update
continue with next part soon .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
It was awesome will you plz pm me next time when you update loved the story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Nyc update...
Continue soon...
Pm me if u can...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Amazing one..love dit...Manan scenes rocked...
Mananbir r the best...
I jzt wanna see soma Cabini bonding as bro-sis too...
Plzz PM me wen u update the next..
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Cabir is such a nautanki :) and the sweet MaNan moments:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
superb... waiting for next one😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Nyc update... I just love the trio's bonding...
Thnkz 4 the pm...
Update soon plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Wow read all chap in one go it was completely awsome plz pm me next time.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
it's soo chotu update but it's ok it's quite good but thoda sa or acha hoskta tha...
sry bura lga to
acha h part bs eyelock ko thoda ache se express krte n all
baaki k liye so sorry if I hurt u lil bit bhi toh sorry ...
n thnx for pm n keep smiling 😊

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