MANAN FF:CAN IT BE REAL.................part 16 pg 25 5/10/15

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi all m finally back with my story ... 1stly would really like to say sorry to leave it hanging ... i was having a very bad writer block ...but i would like to mention
all of ur comments n motivation that inspired me to write again
special thankxxx to

#Glara ( thank a lot dear)

all the perivous parts links are below as i shifted my FF to ky2 forums now
new readers do read n comment

teaser and part 1
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4311597/manan-ff-can-it-be-real-part-3-pg-2

part 2 and 3

part 9
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4400143/manan-ff-can-it-be-real-part-16-pg-25-5-10-15?pn=8
part 10

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.aspTID=4400143&TPN=10

part 11
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4400143/manan-ff-can-it-be-real-part-16-pg-25-5-10-15?pn=12

part 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4400143/manan-ff-can-it-be-real-part-16-pg-25-5-10-15?pn=15

part 13
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4400143/manan-ff-can-it-be-real-part-16-pg-25-5-10-15?pn=17

part 14
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.aspTID=4400143&TPN=19&#p126575399

part 15
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp TID=4400143&TPN=23&#p127218565

part 16
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/127469181

and finally here come

Part 5:
manik and nandu reached their favorite pani puri spot near the beach. Nandu manik and cabir always come here whenever they are happy or sad they come here and have pani puir competition.
nandu: namastay kaka.
kaka: namastay bitia . janta hoon tub tak pani puri dana jab tak manik har na jay ( I know give pani puri until manik loose)
manik: see now kaka also know what u will come and say
nandu: whatever but one thing for sure u gona loose today.
manik: ohhh we'll see manik and nandu started eating pani puri both of them were eating they were having tears in their eyes but none of them wanted to loose.
At last manik stopped
manik: kaka bas kaka otherwise my stomach will burst.
nandu: yahooo ( she started dancing with joy)manik was just looking at her and smiling
kaka: bitwa har bar toh tum aur cabir bitwa har jatay ho toh shart he kyun lagatay ho ( son every time u and cabir loose then why u bet with her)
nandu: see I told u I will win.
manik: ya my pani puri queen. Now let's go.
as manik and nandu were walking towards the bike manik saw a father feeding his son ice cream and playing with him. Manik's father passed away when he was 15. He was really close to his father after his father died he stopped taking with people and playing also then he and his mother nyonika shifted to Mumbai .manik's father was very famous music director .he always say to manik that one day he want him to be a rockstar .thats why manik was so interested in music . but he missed his father a lot because of nandu and cabir he started being normal again .
nandu : ok manik now drop me home quickly .
nandu turned and saw manik staring at the father and son she knew he was sad
nandu: manik ...
manik turned nandu saw tears in his eyes manik ran towards the sea and sat on the stone nearby. Nandu followed him. Nandu came and sat next to manik she hold his hand manik was still looking towards the sea
nandu: u r missing ur dad
manik: hmmm
nandu: manik look I know u miss ur dad . even somewhere up there he will also miss u
manik: then why he left me and maa alone. Why he leave me
nandu: manik see now he will not come back but still he will be looking at u from above and if he see u sad like this he will also be sad.manik didn't respond .
nandu: ok I know how to refresh ur mood .nandu stood up and played a song on her phone she started dancing in front of manik.
sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan
Rang jaaun, rang rang jaaun ri, haari main

Tujhpe main jhar jhar jhar jaaun
Hoon piya bas teri main
Ho chhu le toh khari main
(Toh khari main khari main...)

Ho.. sun saathiya maahiya
Barsa de ishqa ki syahiyaan



Nandu forward her hand towards manik . manik told her

hand and stood up he hold her hand and put one hand

around her waist they both started dancing ...
Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun re
Main ret si, boond ka zariya tu
Paa ke tujhe bheeg jaaun ri

manik held nandu close to him . nandu can feel his breath on

her face and the strength of his arms around her waist ...

manan eye lock...

sunddenly nandu's phone started ringing . they came

back to their senses

.
nandu: ohhh chachi aka phone ha. Hello

chachi: nandu where are u

nandu: chachi m with manik actually after college we came to

eat pani puri

chachi:ohhh ok but I cooked lunch for u. give phone to manik

nandu: chachi want to talk to u

manik: hi chachi

chachi: hi beta . this is not fare I cooked lunch for u guys

and u are eating pani puri

manik: sorry chachi but m still hungry so I'll be there in half an hour .ok

chachi: hmmm that's my boy .

manik: ok bye chachi.

nandu realy liked the way manik respect her family.

manik: come lets go

manik turned to leave nandu hold his hand.

nandu: manik ...

manik turned and looked at her

manik: hmmm
nandu: one day u will be a rockstar u will full fill ur fathers

dream . people believe it or not I have trust in u . one day

everybody will have only one name on their lips manik ...
.nandu: and then u will be so busy no time for anyone

nandu take out a pen and forward her hand

nandu : so please give me ur autograph now

manik hold her hand and said

manik: no need of this cause I'll be always singing with u my every song .

nandu: hmmm . me and singing in front of huge

crowd manik: ya miss nandini murthy.

we will take every step together
manan eye lock...after some time they came back to their senses

manik: lets go now m really hungry

nandu: liar. Sirf chachi ka dil rakhnay k lyia ja rahay ho .

manik: no really we have to do some planning u know right

nandu: ohhh yes
manik and nandu sat on the bike and

reached at nandu's place

to be cont...

sorry no pics in this one cause i was already to long
plzzz read n do comment
i promise to update daily now 😊












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Glara thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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first of all a big thanks to u.i cant imagine u updated so soon aftr i requested u in common page.but am glad & thankful to u that u respect ur fans so much.so best of luck for ur all works & ur future.not bad today nandhini & manik dance.superb & they lost in each other.continue like this plz.dont bring anyother girl r boy aftr thy commited to each other.becoz it will hurt me more.because i believe love s purest relation ever we hav,but some ppl lost it becoz of thr attraction towards others while thy truly love someone else.so plz in advance i request u.once again thank u a lot...it means a lot for me.i accept this as ur gift for me
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too cute it was😊 loved it
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hey asked the DT to merging it all will be a together
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Originally posted by: Glara

first of all a big thanks to u.i cant imagine u updated so soon aftr i requested u in common page.but am glad & thankful to u that u respect ur fans so much.so best of luck for ur all works & ur future.not bad today nandhini & manik dance.superb & they lost in each other.continue like this plz.dont bring anyother girl r boy aftr thy commited to each other.becoz it will hurt me more.because i believe love s purest relation ever we hav,but some ppl lost it becoz of thr attraction towards others while thy truly love someone else.so plz in advance i request u.once again thank u a lot...it means a lot for me.i accept this as ur gift for me



Well u will be glad too know that even I believe in happy
Love stories n this story is very close too my heart
I promise I won't disappoint anyone
zaroge thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: naddiya26

hey asked the DT to merging it all will be a together



Hey year sorry but I have no idea what's DT
Do u mind helping out if u can
Otherwise I think now also its fine
I put up all the links
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Posted: 10 years ago
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THats awesome read all parts in one go...
Plz continue soon...
Pm me if u can...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaroge



Hey year sorry but I have no idea what's DT
Do u mind helping out if u can
Otherwise I think now also its fine
I put up all the links

you pass me the links chapter wise i will ask DT
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey ... I read all the parts. .. It is an amazng story...
I loved it... plz update soon n thnk u 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ohhhooo awsm yaar
i love that song
Sun Saathiya from ABCD2
n ur story is superb dear...
thnx for pm

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