MANAN FF:CAN IT BE REAL.................part 16 pg 25 5/10/15 - Page 5

Wow I liked this part.
Liked fab5 bonding n waiting for manan date.
Continue soon

Amazing but when will manik realize his feellings. I hopr the date is not soha's plan

Amazing update...
Fab 5's bonding is good..
Chachi is worth watching...

Continue soon..
Waiting for date..

Lovely

Awsm yaar..
I'm feeling just like Amazon Advertise
Or dikhao Or dikhao apna naaraa or dikhao...hindustani dil kehta h or dikhao or dikhao...
Wow yaar date how awsm yaar...
can't wait more tc stay blessed n ty for pm
love you yaar 😊 😉

Amazing and fab update..loved every bit of it...loving fab6 bonding...waiting for the double date romance..

hey people really really sorry for the delay
enjoy reading hope u like it

Part 9:

nandu went to cabir's room ...
cabir: i told u not to dress up to much. ... manik will think its weird...
nandu: no he won't ... ( because it was to late to change )the door bell ranged nandu went to open it the door it was navya...
navya: OMG u look fantastic ...
(nandini's look)
nandu: ( blushing) come in ... manik is not here yet...
navya: what a hero your boyfriend is he is coming to pick u up my loser said he'd meet us there that means he have already bought his ticket and i have to buy my own...nandu was confused she hadn't thought of that...would manik be paying for her...? maybe he would have to just to pretend ...and later she can pay him back...
navya: hi aunty hey cabir...
cabir: hi...( cabir was busy doing some work on his laptop sitting on the sofa...the doorbell rang again and this time it was manik... he looked freshly showered ... he was wearing a colourfull t- shirt with black jacket and cream colored pants ...his eyes looked ... smoky
(manik's look)


he was holding a beautiful red rose...



manik: HOLY SMOKES is that u ... is that u... i like ur dress...

nandu felt like she is turning all red...
nandu: hi ...manik...
manik: this is for u...as she took it there fingers brushed...suddenly he leaned and kissed her on her cheek...it was soft and quick

... nandu felt like a butterfly bumping against her face ...
nandu thought that means navya is around ...
nandu turned and looked around but no body was there
nandu to herself then why did he
cabir: manik stop loitering and come here...
nandu: (whispered ...) thank u...
just then navya came
navya: OMG... did he get u this... that's unbelievable... do u know how many times harshad get me flowers ... zero
navya: lets put it in a vase
they both went in the kitchen nandu took a glass vase filled with water and put the rose in it ... it was perfect nandu thought... why it can't be real...
manik: ok let's go ur highness
they said goodbye to cabir ... manik drove to the theatre they got down ... harshad was standing it front there...unlike manik he was wearing a pink t-shirt with ripped jeans, and he looked like he hadn't showered in last few days...

he didn't compliment navya although nandu thought she was looking awesome in here black dress...navya was right harshad bought his ticket ... so she have to buy her own...nandu tried to open her clutch but manik hold her hand...

manik: na ... let me do the boyfriend thing...
navya: ahem...(to signal harshad to learn something from him but he didn't get it)
they all went inside navya and nandu sat in the middle and manik and harshad on the sides ...
manik: ok guys m going to get pop corn...
harshad : hey dude get for me to...
navya gave him a are- u- serious look
when manik came back he was carrying a large soda and sweet popcorn with cheese ...
manik: here u like it right...

nandu: they're my favorite thnxxx...
manik: anytime girlfriend...
manik: i thought we can share the soda but they only had one straw ...
manik: do u mind sharing ...
nandu: no that's fine ...
nandu took and a sip and realized it was fanta...orange the way she liked...nandu thought ... obviously manik have been out with girls so many time so he know exactly what to do...movie started ... the theater went all dark ...nandu looked from the corner of her eyes without moving her head ... navya and harshad were holding hands...
nandu: ( to her self) where should i put my hands on my knees or on the arm rest...
just the manik hold her hand nandu's heart was beating a thousand beats at a time...after sometime song started ...
she again looked n this time harshad n navya were kissing each other
she didn't know wht she should
suddenly as if listening to her heart

manik started was moving his thumb up and down on nandu's hand ...that made her calm
the song started
( dream sequence nandu imagined ... herself and manik dancing)

after the song nandu came back to her sense ...
in sometime the whole place turned super cold because
of the AC
nandu(to herself): oh God i again forgot to bring a shawl
her hands were turning cold
after a min she felt something around her
shoulder she turned and saw manik warping the a shawl around her
she gave him a smile
manik leaned towards her n whispered in her ear: i knew u will forget again when we were leaving i asked chachi to put in ur bag...
he wrapped his around her and started watching the movie

nandu(to herself): God manik is just perfect so much care
i just love him i just wish we stay this way humesha

an hour passed the movie finished ...

they came out
navya: it was awesome yar ...
harshad: come on navya... it was borring...
.navya: no it wasn't.
suddenly ( navya stop... everyone shocked soha was standing in front...)

navya:ohh no ! what is she doing here ?
soha was standing outside the movie theater arms folded and wicked anger on her face
soha: navya...
navya: hey !... look who we met here soha( pointing towards manik nandu)
soha: after all i have done to u did this i made u popular, i got u a boy friend don't u knw that i can take it away just like that?...she snapped her finger

nandu find herself unconsciously leaning into manik ,away from soha he put one arm around her in a protective way that she liked...
navya: ohh...come on soha don't be a drama queen. i just wanted to go for movie ... ur are not be-all and end-all of my social life.
soha: u will be lucky to have a social life after this... harshad...come with me ( she turned)
navya: ohh plzzz he's my boyfriend...
soha: not if i don't want him to be ... come harshad...

harshad hesitated ,looking back and forth between navya and soha...
navya: harshad...
soha: come on harshad i'll get u leena (leena is a new cick in collage )
harshad: ok ...may be she won't fuss at me like this one...
they both walked away
nandu and manik exchanged an uncomfortable glance navya was not nandu's friend exactly but they couldn't walk away like that after what happend...
manik(whispered to nandu): just now he was kissing her like a filthy fish

nandu: he's an A class jerk.
harshad left with soha
navya was shocked for sometime then walked to manik and nandu
navya: omg ... what a waste of three months that was, sorry guys , we totally ruined ur date...
nandu: its ok...
navya: u guy's should go for dinner i think i'll go home...
nandu: thats terrible... u should come with us...

( nandu was not sure what manik and she will talk will it still be a date... as long as navya will be around it won't be that awkward)
manik: ( halfheartedly ) ya ...
.navya: no i don't want to b the third wheel
nandu: hey we can call cabir ... he will be happy to join us...
navya: u sure...
nandu: he won't mind right manik...
manik: sure ... i think i can share this once
( as he pressed nandu's hand she wondered what it meant)
nandu called cabir... although he didn't wanted to come but he made it to the dinner...
he came in yawning

cabir came and sat next to navya...

navya: sorry to call u ... u don't know how i got ditched...as navya started telling her and harshads story manik came close to nandu and tapped on her hand... nandu jumped .
manik: wana share french fries...
nandu nodded her head... cabir was listening to navya...
doing funny things


.nandu and manik were siting together...nandu whispered ...
nandu: it looks like a comedy film...
manik: hmmm ... but it's 4D...
navya was making all kind of faces while
talking

nandu and manik smiled at each other... they
were enjoying the exclusive movie
after sometime they finished the food ...
cabir : ok guys it late now lets go home...
manik: hey man did u bring my bike...
cabir: yes sir... parked outside...
navya: hey u guy's go home i'll go by myself...
manik: hey how can u go alone... come i leave u on my bike...
navya: no way... m scared to ride on bike...
cabir: its ok... manik u send nandu home i'll drop her...
manik: ok...
navya: is it ok with u cabir...
cabir: yes mam now let's go have collage 2moro...navya went to hug nandu...
and whispered...
navya: enjoy ur ride home dear...
nandu shocked...

cabir and navya went 1st...
manik: lets go ur highness...
nandu: stop calling me that...
manik: now what's wrong in that ur highness ...
nandu: come on m not a princess... m just an ordinary girl...manik came near to nandu sooo close ... that she can feel his breath on her face ...
manik: no... u r not... u r very special...
nandu was shocked...
manan eye lock

manik: helooo...
nandu came back to her sense
nandu:hmmm...
manik: come on yar u r my Cinderella isn't it and i'm ur prince charming toh ur r her highness...
nandu: ohhh...
manik( pretending like a princess): come on princess ... u better check if u dropped

ur glass slipper otherwise i'll have to look for u in the whole kingdom
nandu: acha... abhi batati hoon...
nandu started running behind manik... finally they stopped
nandu(pulling manik's cheeks): ok mr.charming now let's go home...

manik: as u wish ur highness...
nandu: manik...
manik: ok lets go...they sat on the bike and left

to be cont

hey dear i really like that princess and prince concept..
ur story is so cute like a fairytale..
keep writing..

It's like Manik wants to be with her too

i just love ua story