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Posted: 10 years ago
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All chapters are awsome I read in one go just awsome pls update soon
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Part4:


"AND i am soha khurana" a voice suddenly interupted them.
Abhimanyu: Hello sohaa.
Nandini and soha exchanged smiles.
Abhimanyu: guys..dont you think we should start practicing?
Soha:Absolutely. We've already wasted 10 mins.
Nandini: but there were two more members na? They are supposed to be with us here.
Soha looks around and spots mukti and manik.
Soha: there they are. Look. (She points towards them)
Nandini: ohkay guys you both go to the music room, ill get them.
Abhi and soha left.
Nandini approaches FAB5.
Fab5 were standing in a circle.
Nandini comes from behind.
Nandini:(smiles and says) Umm..hello guys. Sorry to disturb your conversion. But two of my teamates need to come with me for practice.
They all turn except manik. He doesn't care whoever it is.
Alya- Hello? Nobody orders us. They will come when they feel like.
Nandini: listen..dont be so rude. I just..
Mukti- didnt you hear? Get lost now..
Nandini turned red with anger and left.
After a few mins..manik spoke
Manik: guys we need to get in. This performance is important. I think we should reherse.
Everyone agreed and left.
On their way mukti goes to the washroom and manik continues to walk towards music room.
Just before reaching the music room he hears a voice talking to itself.
"Aiyappa what do these people think of themselves han? How can they be so rude? this is not done...because of them our team's performance would be affected. "
Manik peeped inside and saw nandini. He was mesmerised by the way she was looking. They way she was talking. The way she loooked cute even while she was irritated.
Nandini sees manik looking at her.
Nandini: so finally you are here. Thanks for coming. She makes a angry pout and leaves.
Manik smiles to himself and enters the music room.
Abhimanyu says hi to manik and leaves for drinking water.
Just as he opened the door someone banged into him. Both the person and him fell on the floor.
It was noone other than mukti.
Both abhi and mukti went to the same rehab. They used to exchange glances everyday but they never talked.
Abhimanyu: Hey. Tum yahan bhi?
Mukti: ouch. Yes. What are you doing here?
Abhi: forget all that. I am abhimanyu. And it looks like i have LITERALLY fallen for you. (He laughs)
Mukti: haha ya why not. Now get up and help me too. They both get up and mukti goes inside the room smiling.

Scene change. The other room.
Alya,Druv and cabir entered the room together.
The girl in two plaites and a green suit walked up to them in excitement.
Navya: haye mata rani ki kasam hum toh iss college mein ek baar aa gaye, humare liye vohi bahaut hai. Oh by the way. Humara naam navya naveli hai. Kal hi patna se aayi hun. and you?
She extented her hand for a friendly handshake.
Cabir caught her hand and said "Hello aur mai batman!"
Navya: arre par..
Cabir: han just like you're actually behaving like a madhubala..i am batman that ways.
Everyone in the room started laughing at this.
Druv: guys enough. Lets practice we are already late.
Alya: aww druv being the the typical him. So cute ya druv.
He blushes a little.
They all agree. Navya goes and picks up the guitar and starts tuning it.
Cabir to alya: aarre wah, yeh madhubala ko guitar pakadna atta hai
Navya: sirf pakadna hi nahi bajana bhi atta hai
Cabir: ya we will see.
They start practicing.

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Part5:

Alya was on keyboards. Cabir on drums and vocals. Navya on electiric guitar and vocals. Druv on the rythym guitar. Sid also lead vocals.
Throughout the reharsal alya and druv were stealing glances. Navya was on her highest pitch of excitement and cabir was enjoying the music.

In the other room, manik couldn't stop staring at nandini. Her eyes were beautiful. They were twinkling like stars. But she was not smiling. She looked angry. And manik staring was making her more uncomfortable. She came up to him "Hello? please stare karna band karo and lets practice. We dont have time."
Manik nodded and smiled. Mukti saw all this and came up to him.
Mukti: Manik what's wrong with you haan? I mean manik malhotra ko ek ladki orders deke challi gayi and he just smilled and agreed? Wow.
Manik came back to his sense. In his mind "ohgod. This is not me. C'on manik get back to your old self."
He went up and gave nandini a deadly look and said "Fine lets start. Ill lead."
She had no option but to agree.
Mukti was tuning her guitar. Abhi came up to her "So whatsup beautiful?"
mukti: umm..abhi look please dont try to get cheezy with me. I am not like those typical girls. PLEASE!"
She stepped aside a little. Abhi in his mind "I know there is something you're hiding. I know it. Ill find out. Very soon!" He smirked!

Nandini started singing. Manik was mesmerised. He was just adoring her. Her smile came back while singing. He smiled at this too. They all practiced.

All was set. Both teams performed.
Judges appreciated both of them.
Soon after interviews took place. Everyone was happy. It was time to bid goodbye now.

Nandini to soha and abhi: bye guys. Had a great day. I hope we all make it.
Soha: yes nandini. I hope for the best too.
They hugged. Abhi and nandini gave a side hug. She was moving towards the door and leaving. Manik noticed this and followed her outside.

Meanwhile, before leaving abhi gave mukti a smile and left. Mukti saw and pretended to ignor and looked the other side. Deep down she was feeling different. Abhi and soha left together.

Navya came up to fab4: acha toh ab hum chalte hai. App logon ne humse baat toh ki nahi par humme khushi hai. Bye batman tumhe bhi. She giggled and left.
Mukti ( in a puzzled tone): yeh nautanki kaun hai? And batman what?
Cabir: nothing vo ignore.
Navya also left.

Nandini was in the corridor and was walking. A hand pulled her inside a classroom.
Nandini: tum. Again. Wth whats your problem.
Manik: voo..i just came here to know your name. I mean they say na keep your enemies close to your heart so thats why.
Nandini: Nandini murthy. Ohkay? Now leave me.
Manik left her hand. She turned and left.
Manik was just standing there smiling. "Nandini..hmm."
He suddenly realised that he is standing there alone and smiling like an idiot. "Uff. Stop it manik."
He also left the room.

They all went back home. It was a tyring day for all. But this day has already started affecting their lives. Some were in total bliss to step into space and some couldn't just stop smiling. ;)


PLEASE ITS A REQUEST, PLEASE DO COMMENT! :)

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Part6:
Scene:Mumbai 2July2014:

Fab5 received their admission confirmation letter and all were on a conference call.
Manik:Wuhoo. Congratulations guys. We've done it.
Cabir:Party time yaar.
Alya:Haha,I cant believe we're in.
Mukti:Cabir is right waise,party toh banti hai. so today evening my place. See you all.
Druv: cool bye. :D
They end the call.
Manik thinking "wuh..this is such a great news. Finally fab5 are going to space. Next 3 years are going to be amazing. Umm..that girl, nandini..would she have also made it? Vo bhi hogi na?...argh. why am i thinkimg so much. Forget it. "
That evening they party like crazy and have a great time.
Scene change: Manglore
Nandini was sleeping when rishabh woke her up with a big smile. He hugged her instantly. And handed her the letter.
Nandini read it and was very happy. She was selected for space. ;)
Scene change: Patna
Navya: Suno Suno everyone listen, Navya the rockstar has made it to SPACE academy. Wuhooo. (Everyone claps)
Scene change:Mumbai,Orphange
12 kids were sitting in a circle and enjoying some chocolates.
Orphange owner:You're doing a very kind work my child. You always come here and celebrate your happiness with these children.
Abhi smiled looking at those joyous faces.
Orphanage owner: What is the goodnews this time, if i may ask?
Abhi:I've made it to my dream college. I've got into SPACE music academy.
The lady congratulated him and he left.
Unfortunately,Soha had not been selected.

Three days later. Mumbai.
In a shared pg two girls were suppose to reach today.
Nandini reached first. She met the landlord, fixed the deal and started to settle in the room. She was cleaning the room so that she could unpack her stuff just then Navya entered. She was carying four huge suitcases with her and two big bags. The taxi driver had helped her keep these things in the room. Navya was smiling.
Navya:Hi. I am navya naveli from patna.
Nandini:Oh hey. I am nandini, from manglore. I think i saw you in SPACE auditions that day.
Navya:oh yes. I saw you too. We were in different teams,remember? Anyways. Now since we are roommates too, I hope we become very good friends soon.
Nandini smiled and nodded.
they both started unpacking and settled the rooms. (The house had two rooms).

7July2014:7am.
It was first day of college.
NNHouse:
Navya:Nandini please help me na. I cant decided what to wear. Humme na waha jate hi sabko impress karna hai. I want everyone to look at me as if i am a rockstar.
Nandini:Oho navya. Wear anything na..how does it matter. And waise bhi people don't get impressed at your looks. Inner qualities matter.
Navya looked at her with a puzzled look and went to her room to change.
*Fab5 whatsapp group*
Druv - I'll come to pick you all up sharp at 7:40. Be ready.
All reply in a ohkay.

8am. Space:
Navya and nandini were walking inside. They were both were happy.
Fab5 entered a bit later. They were standing next to each other. All the other people in college were just looking at them and were totally impressed by them.
Manik was looking around as if searching for someone/something.
Mukti noticed this:you're looking for someone?
Manik:ummm..no!
Abhi enters from behind. He sees mukti and smiles. Mukti also does the same.

They were all first made to attend a small welcome ceremony. nandini and navya seated in the 3rd row. Fab5 entered and were all very happy. Abhi enters and spots Nandini. He says from a distance "Hey nandini!" Manik hears this and turns. He sees nandini hugging abhi. He sees her smile. He smiles himself too. Raghav sir enters and asks them all to settle down. They sat down in this order:Navya,Nandini,Abhi,Manik,Mukti,Druv,Cabir,Alya.
Manik: so..you're here. Congratulations.
Abhi:Yeah. To you too.
Nandini hears this and sees manik. She looks away after seeing him. The orientation gets over.
For freshers party two bands were supposed to perform.
And a band was supposed to have only 4 members. They were given one day to practice.
Fab5 were irritated with this. they tried concvincing raghav for allowing 5 of them to perform together but he didn't agree.
The students were unable to form teams of 4 bythemselves. So raghav did that for them. TeamA-Navya,cabir,Alya,Druv.
Cabir:Gosh not again this madhubala. Damm!
Alya and druv were hapy being together.
TeamB-Abhi,Manik,Mukti (Manik was praying that nandini's name should be called out) and Nandini
Manik gave a huge smile.
Nandini goes up to manik and says "Ohkay listen,We're again stuck together and this time can we please practice in peace. I mean no fights. Please when there is music there shouldn't be any negative vibes around. So. Umm"
Manik:So lets have a fresh start you mean miss . murthy?
Nandini:Yes. So. Once again. Hi I am nandini.
Manik:Hi. Manik. They shake hands and smile.
They all proceed to the music room to practise.
Mukti had drunk a lot last night. He hadn't even slept properly so she visibly seemed ill. For the past few days she had even stoped going to rehab and she barely ate anything the day before. Her hangover had not gone.
Manik:Mukti kya hua? You seem a little frizzy
Mukti:Manik vo i have a terrible headache and weekness feel ho raha hai. Kal bas breakfast kiya tha.so..
Abhi:Are you mad? You're so careless with yourself. How can you mukti?
Nandini and manik noticed abhi's concern for mukti.
Secene change. TeamA's Music room: 4 of them entered the room. Navya:Hum charo firse sath mein. Wah.
Alya just gave an irritated look. Cabir and druv gave a "oh stupid girl" smile.
They were all practising. While playing keyboard suddenly the keyboard stand broke a little and keyboard almost fell down. Alya got shocked and stepped behind. Druv came to her instantly and asked her
Druv:Tum thiek ho? Did you get hurt?
Alya:No..vo..ya i am fine.
Navya:Thankgod yeh tumhare leg pe nahi gira. Phew.
Druv picks up the keyboard and puts it on a new stand and taps alya's back with a smile.
They all resume to practice.

Abhi:Sit here,Ill get you something to eat from the canteen.
Manik:Hey wait,ill also join you. I think lemonade would reduce her hangover.
They both left. Nandini came here mukti and was about to speak.
Mukti:No. Just don't say anything. Please i am not a kid. Sab itna mat socho. Its my life. All my problems are only mine. Dekha na tumne, manik and abhi ko. Itni si baat pe itni tension. Agar fab5 yahan so they would have panicked even more. They all love me so much. (She almost had tears by now) (Nandini realised that mukti was frustrated and was speaking all this to let it out so she kept her hand on mukti's shoulder and sat next to her)
I spoil their mood. Always. They..they all are just my life. I can't seem them worried for me. I cant. She broke down. Nandini:Mukti relax. You are just reacting a little too much. Essa kuch nahi.
Mukti: No I am not. You dont know anything. You just don't know ANYTHING.
Mukti just hugged Nandini while crying.
Just then Nandini looked at the door and saw Manik and Abhi standing there. Abhi was just looking at Mukti. He came forward and sat next to here. She understood that he wanted to talk to her. Then she again looked at the door,Manik was missing. She then decided to go out and look for him.

Edited by Ishaaaaaa - 10 years ago
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Part7:
Manik had tears listening to all mukti said. He could feel her pain. He couldn't let anyone notice those tears so he left from here. He went to backstairs of the music wing. He sat their and covered his face with his palm. He felt a hand on his shoulder. "Manik"
The voice was soothing. He knew who it was.
Manik:I am fine. You all please be with mukti.
Nandini:Abhi hai wahan pe.
Manik nooded in a ohkay and looked the other side so that nandini could not see his tears. But nandini did see them.
Nandini-Manik its ohkay to fall weak. We alll dont need to strong always. We all fall. And its completely alright.
He looked at nandini with a intense look. They have an eyelock.
Manik:Listen, dont you dare think that Manik Malhotra is weak. Ohkay?
Nandini: fine. Its good to share your emotions, it will only help you feel better. But its ohkay, i can understand. We just because friends a few mins back. Its ohkay, ill look around for fab5, you can talk to them. She stood up. Manik held her hand and pulled her back.
Manik: mukti yaar. She..she just doesn't understand. She thinks that she is a burden on us, But no. She is not. She is like a family to us. We care for her. Why doesn't she understand. She always tries to hide her pain with a smile. But i can see it. I can see it she is not happy. And she doesn't share anything with anyone. She..she just doesn't understand.
Nandini: Manik, you all should make her feel that naa. You all should tell her that she's not at all a burden.
Manik: you think we haven't tried that?
Nandini: Give her some time then. That's all i can say.
Manik: yeah.
Nandini: umm, i think i should go back to the music room now. You can join when you feel better. Take your time, no problem. Ill handle. (She smiled and left)
when she came back to the music room, mukti looked much more calm. She was sleeping on the chair next to abhi.
She looked and abhi who gave her a big smile. She knew abhi had handled her well.
They could barely practice that day in college. Next day at 1pm all bands were supposed to perform and two would be selected to perform at fresher's party. On the otherside, The other band's jamming was going amazingly well. They were fully prepared.
Cabir:Guys its 3:30 now i think we should call it off for the day.
Alya: ya. I think we've practiced enough.
Cabir: By the way..(he said looking at navya) navya..right?
Navya: yes.
Cabir: tumhe dekh ke lagga nahi tha ki tum itna acha guitar baja paogi
Navya: haha navya rocks!!
Cabir: (laughed a little at this and left blabbering) god..this girl.
Next day fab5 meet at the canteen in the morning.
Druv: buddy how is your practice going?
Manik looked at mukti who looked down signalling that she didn't want them to know about yesterday.
Manik:umm..nothing great. I mean, we haven't practiced much.
With this abhi and nandini also entered the canteen. Nandini looked and manik. They both gave a soft smile.
They sat at the opposite table and were talking.
Mukti stood up and said "Guys, please excuse us, bahaut practice is lef5 so we need go." All nodded. She dragged manik with her and sat next to abhi and nandini. She held nandin's hand and with a huge smile started speaking "Nandini, thankyou so much for yesterday..i hadn't been good to you but you still had patience with me."
Nandini: Mukti you can always come and talk to me. And trust me, your friends love you a lot. Don't take so much stress.
Abhi: by the way..sarre thankyous only for nandini. Nothing for me?
Mukti looked at him. She stood up and went up to him and gave him a tight hug and wispered "Thankyou!"
Abhi smiled back and said to all "So guys now what? We haven't really practiced anything."
Manik: Its ohkay..we have two hours. We'll try to do as much as we can. Let goo. And they all leave.

All the bands perform.
Cabir's band get sleceted. And unfortunately Manik's band does not.
Raghav informs all the students that freshers party is day after and wishes them all the best and leaves.
Cabir's band goes to practice.
Manik,Abhi,Mukti and Nandini decided to go to the canteen.
On their way, Manik was lost in his own thoughts. Nandini noticed and asked him in signals "what?" He indicated her to check her phone. She checked her phone. **text convo**
(( manik:i need to talk
Nandini:about what
Manik: mukti
Nandini: ok sure
Manik: meet me at the same place as yesterday in 15 mins
Nandini: ya ok )) with this manik made an excuse and left.
After 15 mins, nandini meets manik.
Nandini: yes tell me?
Manik: umm..ohkay..i..i..i think mukti likes abhimanyu
Nandini: whatt?!?!
Manik: ya havent you seen them talking nandini: manik, even we both are talking right now. Does it mean we like each other?
Manik was couldn't answer. They again had a eyelock.
Manik: no ya stupid. I mean, Haven't you seen how she automatically becomes so calm when he is around. She always smiles when he is around. Today, ajj subeh bahaut time baad i actually saw her real smile. Mukti needs abhi. He can make her life better. Trust me, i know her, she isn't friendly with anyone except fab5.
Nandini thought for a while and said "but what about abhi? Does he like her too?"
Manik: this is exactly why i called you here. You need to find out this
Nandini: (omg expression) meee? But mai kaise? No no, i cant do it!!
Manik smiled at her innocence.
Manik: just talk to him once. Please. Please do it for mukti na. Please.
Nandini agreed and left.
Meanwhile manik calls mukti and asks her to come to the parking as he is going to drop her home now. She needs rest.
Nandini reaches canteen and finds abhi there.
Nandini: so where's mukti?
Abhi: vo manik called her so she left
(Nandini understood why manik did that)
Nandini: abhi, terrace pe challe, i wanted to talk to you.
They both go and sit on the terrace.
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Part8:

Abhi and Nandini were sitting on the terrace.
Abhi:Yes nandu. So tell me?
Nandini was a little tensed and was trying to frame the right words in her head.
Abhi: sab thiek hai na?
Nandini: umm yaa. Vo i wanted to ask if youuu.. (she paused again to gather courage)
Abhi (smirked): if I like mukti or not. Haina?
Nandini widened her eyes and looked at him.
Abhi: Hmm. Umm. Yes i do. We have been in the same rehab centre for the past few months. She is a gem of a person,Nandini. I mean, she has a pure heart. I love it when she smiles. I love to make her smile. Infact, she is the one that makes me smile too.
Nandini hugged abhi and said "Ohmygod abhi, mukti,she likes you too. And you also like her. You guys should be together."
Abhi:Woah, haha, you already seem excited.
Nandini:Ofcourse I am.
They both sat for a while and had a chit chat after which abhi dropped her home.
When she reached home and immediately called manik. Manik was sitting in room with fab5. He saw nandini's call and disconnected it as everyone was there. Nandini then texted her *Hey. Need to talk. Pls call*
Manik couldn't talk as he was with his friends. He reached home pretty late, it was 1 am. He thought to himself "umm..should icall? Naah, she must be sleeping. Ill talk to her tomorrow"
Next day in college Nandini was looking for Manik everywhere. Just then she bumped into mukti. Mukti:Hey. What'sup
Nandini (looking around for manik):heyy..mukti..um have you seen manik?
Mukti:he comes a bit late actually
Nandini:ohhhkay, I'll catch you later bye (and she left abruptly)
Mukti with a puzzled look was moving forward towards the library. She again bumped into manik.
Mukti:ouuch. Dude ajj sab mujhse kyu takra rahe hai
Manik: (he was also looking for nandini) what?..aaam,anyways nandini ko dekha?
Mukti:han she just went that side...and she was.. (before she could complete manik had already started moving in that direction)
Mukti in her mind "what is happening with them dude?"

Nandini had reached an empty class and was siting there. Manik entered from behind.
Manik: nandini listen i know you must be mad at me vo kal i was with fab5 so i couldnt talk and raat ko i came late so i thought you would have slept so thats why i didnt call back..and (he was speaking nonstop..nandini was not angry at him but listening to him she thought to play a trick on him and pretended to be angry).
Nandini: oh please! I dont need your explanations. Ohkay? I am going now,bye. She turned and was about to leave but manik held her hand.
Manik: no. Please. Ohkay, ek baar please listen to me once na.
She turned back. Manik slowly pulled his ears and made a innocent sad pout and said "I am sooo sorry"
This made Nandini laugh. She couldnt pretend anymore and laughed.
Nandini:ohgod manik. You're too cute. Chill i am not mad at you.
He was about to get angry but when he saw her laughing like a baby he felt happiness around him. He felt calm. he laughed with her too.
Nandini: acha suno, leave all that i wanted to tell you that abhi loves mukti. I spoke to him yesterday!
Manik: knew it. Hah!
Nandini: so whats the plan now?
Manik: accha? So miss murthy now wants to be a cupid for them.
Nandini:Ofcourse;)
Manik: ok i have a plan. You just get abhimanyu at cafe rock today at 4pm. Cool?
Nandini: yaa but what then?
Manik:...that I'll tell you later. I got to go now..see yaa.

It was 3:45pm. Nandini's phone beeped. *Manik: ready for the plan?
Nandini: what do you mean by ready. You haven't yet told me about the plan sir
Manik: just get him there and rest ill tell you.
Nandini: we're on our way *
They reached the cafe and settled down. Nandini was constantly looking at her phone.
She suddenly heard a familiar voice "heeeyy. You guys here!

Author's POV **guys please feel free to comment your views and suggestions. I'd love to read them :) **ment your views and suggestions. I'd love to read them :) trust me, it would motivate me! **

Edited by Ishaaaaaa - 10 years ago
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This is going really well... Good job :)
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lovely updates
loved it
very nicely written
cont soon
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Nice update. Something new manan as cupid for mukbhi.
Continue soon
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nice story .i really like it.good job dr

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