MaNan SS : The Incomplete Song (Part 10 - Pg 62 - 13th April)

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Humairaa

@Humzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

awsm chap

loved it

very nicely written

cont soon

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aarohi arora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

It is beyond our expectations... that was something emotional...
Every part was good...
Toh the boy is manik child... waiting for their first meeting...
Thanx for pm...
Lots of love...
Aarohi.

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

awesome start

you have beautifully penned down nandini and manik's thoughts and feelings...

manik collided with his son na?

looking forward to the next chapter

thanks for the pm

continue soon

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Angel

@Endurance

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

This was BEAUTIFUL..

Truly beautiful, so well written , the words u chose were just in sync with the emotions , it showed the hurt , the pain ,the yearning ...

This was a bliss for a reader ..

The Titlt is so apt-The Incomplete Song-Humari Adhoori Kahani

I wanna read more .. update soon ..please

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Manya

@manya_189

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

This was good :) continue soon :D

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Srsly dis was awesome... I just loved the way cabir questioned manik... now waiting to see who dis child is... thnk u 4 the pm and plz update soon

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Roshni S

@Roshni8

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Awesome start dear

It was really touching

You are an amazing writer

Waiting to know about Manik and his son's encounter

Cont soon

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yuvasri

@lovelyyuvi10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

amazing start...loved the way u penned the emotions...

waiting eagerly to kno wat happens next..

plzzz update next part ASAP...

keep writing nd smiling...😉

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Sanskruti

@Sanskruti164

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Amazing update

The way u describe it all was fantastic👏👏

I think that little boy is manan's child may be

Excited for manan's first meeting after 6 yrs

Eagerly waiting for nxt part

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Sanskruti

@Sanskruti164

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Amazing update

The way u describe it all was fantastic👏👏

I think that little boy is manan's child may be

Excited for manan's first meeting after 6 yrs

Eagerly waiting for nxt part

Lots of love,

Samruddhi

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