Manan ff - POLES APART chapter15(pg-17) - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Wow...great update!👏
Looking forward for dhruv's b'day party...
its going to be fun!!
And cabir...he was damn funny...now how will aryaman meet that girl??😆
Update soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Haha great update n cabir...he was to awsome yar seriously n plz pm me wenever u update next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Awesome update and plz try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Great update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
Tnx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
i read all the parts one go
they r too awesome parts
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Amazing update
wow manik's jealousy has
no boundaries
nd cabir part was too good
that photo thing i was literally
rolling nd laughing so funny

plzz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
Outstanding update girl!
Loved it.
Cabir & Nandini planning to trap Aryaman.
Manik comes and sits between both. Aww.. Insecure Manik spotted!!!! 😆
And that photo.. Cabir sent him his photo after editing. Like seriously??? 🤣 🤣 so funny!
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Continue it soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Awsome
N cabir edit his own pic hahaahhaa that so funny
Imagine how it's look
Tnx for pm
Eid mubarak
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Please send buddy request for pm
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"what" manik and me yelled in Union. "achcha don't scold me I know meine mazak mazak mein bahut badi problem create kar di hai... I am sorry na.. Let it go.. And I promise ki iss problem ka solution bhi mein hi nikalunga... Abhi lets go to class, lunch ho gaya hai yaad hai na we have to make aliya and dhruv friends.. So, come on.." cabir said and ran from there. Aaj toh bhag ke ye bach gaya but agar usne problem ka koi solution nahi nikala na to I won't let him go so easily. Iski death mere hi haath hogi. I talked to myself yet in my mind. I started to get up when I saw manik looking at me and smiling like an idiot. Ab isko kya hua why is he behaving like that . "manik kya Hua. What are you looking at and smiling" I shook him"you.. You are too cute.. " he said pulling my cheeks. I am really unable to understand him. Jab bhi mujhe lagata hai that I know him really well tabhi yeh kuch aisi harkat karta hai that I am totally left messed up in my mind. " you know what when ever I think that I know you well you always tell me that no you don't. I just don't get you sometimes and me... What's so funny about me that you are smiling like this.." I asked. "do you have slightest of idea that when you were cursing cabir in your mind your expressions were continuously changing. And I just loved that and nowadays I am also unable to what is happening in my mind toh tumhe kaise pata chalega" he was all smiling while saying this. He got up and went away humming some unknown song. I shook my head and went to my class. "yaar nandu tu kaha rahti hai aajkal. Itna late kyun ho jata hai tujhe.. Ab chal mere saath.. Nahi to tera lunch khatam ho jayega.." mukti dragged me to our seat. "are yeh batao ki cabir kaha hai." I asked. "bhai log aur.. Unke behan log. May I have your attention please... So here I introduce you all to dhruv." he said bringing dhruv with him. "hi! Nandini," dhruv said as soon as he saw me. He came towards for hug but manik came in between and hugged dhruv and said "hi! Dhruv. I am manik. Nice meeting you buddy." "umm hi manik" dhruv said confused "hi! dhruv.." I said from behind "haan hi, kaafi time baad mile rahe hain na" dhruv said breaking the hug with manik. Dhruv walked towards me when cabir called from behind "aree dhruv... Tu is se mile. Yeh Hai aliya." cabir dragged dhruv to aliya. "hi dhruv. I am aliya" aliya said forwarding her hand for handshake. Dhruv took her hand for hand shake "wow aliya your hands are so soft." dhruv said examining aliya's hand she blushed and thanked him. Dhruv smiled looking her blushed. I cleared my throat bringing both of them to reality. Dhruv left aliya's hand and moved towards mukti. He introduced himself. "achcha ye, cabir kaha hai" manik asked. "mein yahan hoon" cabir said with food filled in his mouth. "cabir" I glared and went towards and started eating with him. Manik and mukti too joined us but dhruv and aliya were busy in there own world laughing and talking.
"dhruv tu invite nahi karega kya ab toh yeh bhi tere dost hai hai toh yeh to aayege na" dhruv said placing his one hand on dhruv's shoulder. "umm yaa.. Vo guys mera birthday hai this Saturday toh you all are invited in it." dhruv said looking at us. "dhruv I won't be able to come" aliya said. Oh no aliya can't refuse ye sab uske liye hi toh kiya tha and now she is backing off. I signaled cabir and manik to do something. Cabir said "why aliya come na please.. It will be fun" "I thought we were friends... But koi nai its ok chalo.. Then I am leaving.. Yahan mera koi kaam nahi hai jab ek dost hi dusre dost ke birthday mein... Jane se mana karde toh koi kya kar.. Sakta hai.. Mein toh.. ." dhruv was blackmailing aliya when cabir said in his ears "bas kar over acting ki dukaan.. Is act se sidhe hollywood jaane ka irada hai kya.." cabir said to dhruv in his ear but meine sun liya because I was standing near to them. Iska matlab dhruv hamare plan ke baare mein jaanta hai. Ye cabir ka bachcha na. Manik cleared his throat and said" control nandini control.. Kyun cabir ko itni gali de rahi ho mann hi mann mein .. Aisa nahi hai ki I am.. Not enjoying it.. Bas agar kisi ne dekh liya na toh tum phass jaogi.. You know every one will be after you Ki kise itni gali de rahi ho" "ya ya.. I know" I said and looked away. Manik chuckled. Dhruv started leaving from the place when aliya said from behind "ok.. I'll come" "yippee... I love you seriously " dhruv said. Dhruv realised what he said and then corrected himself "I mean thank you for coming.. I would love to have you at my party". Aliya blushed and smiled. Mukti said "toh dhruv party kab hai? Aur kahan hai??" "party mere ghar mein hi hai. Sham ko 6 pm tomorrow " dhruv said. Mukti said "ok then theek hai. We'll reach there and nandini I would come on snooty toh i'll pick you up. Theek hai" "no no you all go mein nahi aa paoongi.. You all enjoy papa won't give permission. So tum log jaao and have fun" I said. "no tumhe aana hoga" manik said. "manik maine kaha na mein nahi aa paoongi. Tu to understand" I said politely. "no nandini listen to me.." manik was cut in between by aliya "achcha.. I'll talk to uncle mein bol dungi ki mere ghar pe night out hoga and I'll talk to my mother she'll handle if anything goes wrong... Ok" aliya sid hugged me. "aliya but" I protested "no if and but nandini tumhe aana hi hoga. Consider it as my birthday present. Please" dhruv said holding my hand. Manik took my hand from dhruv' s grip. He said "you'll come right...," manik said very lovingly. I can't refuse this boy I thought in my mind and nodded.
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dhruv 's birthday party
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Amazing update manik dont leave any chance to take nandani away from others.. His feelings r slowly taking up on his mind.. Dhruv's party is definately gone a be exciting plzz continue soon

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