Manan ff - POLES APART chapter15(pg-17) - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
Rocking update
nandu is looking damm hot
nd manik is jealous amazing

update soon
waiting for manan convo
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was the most awesome update ever!!!
Possesive Manik!! I was smiling all the way reading your ff
Loved it
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was superb...
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I was in fuming anger. Tears threatened to roll down any time. I went inside the washroom. Suddenly door looked from inside. I saw manik. "manik tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?" I asked. I was damn irritated. "nandini listen to me for just once." manik said holding my hand. I jerked my hand away and said" you have exactly two min speak as fast as you can. Your time starts now" manik started "see this rose yeh bahut dino se mere peeche padi thi. Today she said that if I would let her accompany me to dhruv's party then voh mera peecha karna Chodh degi. So I brought her her" "manik tum kabse saint man ban gaye ki kisi ne bola aur tum man gaye like really manik tumhe lagta hai ki main tumhari is bullwhip pe vishvas karungi. No I won't" I said and started to leave. Manik pulled me back and my back smashed in his chest. He moved all my hairs to one side and started moving his nose on my neck. He seductively said "believe me, and stay away from cabir I don't like him when he is close to you." "why manik why should I belive you and why you don't like me being near to cabir. Tumhe kya farak padta hai agar mein cabir ki girlfriend ban jao. He is nice mera best friend hai toh problem kya hai. Why down you want that to happen ." I asked. "because I can't tolerate you with any one else I just don't know my blood boils. I want you to be only with me" he said kissing my neck and hairs. I moaned "then why are you with that rose. The feelings are mutual manik" I said. Suddenly door knocked "nandini saari raat vahi rehna hai kya. Yaar tere bina bore ho raha hoon jaldi aa " cabir yelled " shut up cabir" I yelled "aa rahi hoon na. You go" manik left me in anger. And went out I cleaned my face and followed him out. Soft Music playing out there I saw manik and rose dancing on the floor. Again he did the same thing he went to that rose. I went to cabir. He said "rose ne literally force kiya" he was defending manik"aur voh chala gaya" I asked "I tha kyun jal rahi hai. Ek dance hi toh kar rahe hai na" cabir said "haan toh theek hai na ek dance hi toh hai. So come on hum dance karte hai chalo" I said "nandini tere irade theek nahi lag rahe hai" cabir said "cabir stand up tum mere liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte ho.. Please" I blackmailed him. "kya karna hai" cabir said standing up. "dance with like you are in love with me and you don't want to leave me" I said "tu marvegi mujhe" cabir "please" I pleaded "cabir said "ok chal" we went in the middle of dance floor. Cabir held me from my back and pulled me. I encircled my hands around his neck. The music
begin
Kahin to kahin to hogi wo duniya jahan tu meri sath hai

(I looked at manik he was feeling sorry but he was also angry at me. He pulled rose more closer to himself.)
Jahan mai jahan tu aur jahan bus teri meri jajbat hai
(manik was continuously looking at me. I drifted my gaze to cabir. He swirled me around and encircled his hands around me from back.)
aur Jahan subha teri palkon ki kirno me lori jahan chandki sone de baho me
(manik pulled rose more closer to himself. He pinned rose to his body. Tears started forming in my eyes.)
Jane na kahan wo duniya hai jane na wo hai bhi ya nahi Jahan meri zindagi mujse itani khafa nahi
(I wiped tears from the corner of my eyes and turned my back to manik. Cabir again swirled me and hugged me. We kept moving on the rhythm.)
Sanse ho gayi hai kiski ahome mein
mai kho gayi hunhu jane kiski baho mein
(l looked up manik was continuously looking at me. Cabir twirled me around and nuzzled his nose in my hairs. He again encircled his hands around me.)
Manjilose rahe dundati chali aur kho gayi hai manjil kanhi raho pe
(controlling my tears was becoming impossible for me. I hid my face in crook of cabir's neck and sobbed silently. He moved his hand on my hairs telling me not to cry)
Kanhi to kanhi to hai nasha teri meri har mulakat me
(suddenly manik came and pushed cabir. He held me from my waist and pulled me closer.)
HOtose hotoko chumti wo rahete har bat pe

(He poked his nose in my neck and started kissing me there.)

Kaheti hai fiza jahan meri jamee aasma Kahan hai tu meri hansi meri khushi meri jahan
(manik moved his hand on my bare back. I felt week in my knees. He swirled me around and kissed my shoulder)
Jane na kahan wo duniya hai jane na wo hai bhi ya nahi Jahan meri zindagi mujse itani khafa nahi
he again swirled me around and pulled my close. Our lips were only few centimeters apart. He lifted me up I opened my arms. He slowly put me I down."why you do this to me?" he said cupping my face. "I told you not to go to rose but still you went there. I wanted to tell you how it feels seeing you with rose ." I said holding his hand close to my face. Sudden applause broke are trance. Mukti came to me and said "wow that was hot like a real hotness" I smiled. "where is aliya?" I asked "umm.. She is busy with dhruv.. Don't you think they look nice but I don't know why she is with dhruv" mukti said. I nodded "mujhe late ho raha hai ghar jana hai" I said waiting for aliya "where is aliya, yaar. Kaha reh gayi ??" I said pacing to and fro. "chal mein drop kar deta hoon... Aliya toh dhruv ke saath busy ho gayi hai. " cabir said. "haa thik hai chal aliya aa jayegi" I said. Cabir aur mein aage badhe hi the ki manik stopped us. "aa.. Cabir rok... tu rose ke ghar ke pass rehta hai na to tu rose ko Chod de aur mein nandini ko Chod dunga.. Thik hai" manik said and before anyone could say anything manik held my hand and dragged me to his bike. Cabir said "all the best aur haan mein Chod dunga rose ko ghar". I blushed.
We reached our house soon. Why house was not a little far. Why?? I got down of the bike. Manik also got down "tumhe nahi lagata ki aliya ka ghar Kuch zyada hi pass hai." manik said. I giggled and nodded. "achcha, the party was nice nahi?" I asked changing the topic "umm ya you... Um.. You were are... looking hot." manik said hesitating. I in order to hide my blushed cheeks I looked away. "thank you. And someone was looking smart" I said "achcha who" manik asked happily "cabir..." I said and manik 's smile disappeared. He came close to me held my hand and started playing with my hand. "you really like him don't you. He makes you laugh, he never irritates you, his antics are cute. Cabir cabir cabir" oh shit. I cupped his face and said "puri baat toh dun liya karo.. Cabir Ke saath mein pure din mere saath tha bit phir mera dhyaan tumhari taraf tha you were looking too good" manik hugged me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dea...
continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsome update dear really gud one
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsm bloosm update wow what a manan convo (jealousy kills) and cabini's dance it was rocking nd sexy too manik was fuming his reaction was worth watching plzz continue soon waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
That dance was Hawwt!!
Loved the update :D !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
make Manan realise soon
Thanks for PM
waiting for nxt update
Read all parts in one go
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read two chapters today itself.
So amazing they were.
Nandu was look breathtakingly beautiful.
And Jealous Manik was so cute.
MaNan part in washroom was too good.
Feelings are mutual!! 😉
So they both have feelings for each other.
And the dance was so hot!!
Loved it..
Continue soon..

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