Manan ff - POLES APART chapter15(pg-17)

Hi everyne . This is my first ff . POLES APART . This ff deals with student manan . They r in class 9. This ff will also show making of fab 5 . So till now there will b no fab 5 . Cabir ,navya n harshad will entre a litle late in d stry. Nandini is a new addmissin here . She befrnds aliya frm a very lng time . They r bsties . Aliya , manik, mukti n cabir r frnds bt nt bst frnds. Mukti hv 3 bst frnd bt they dnt value her mch. Cabir is nt gay . Harshad n aliya r nt bro-sis.the nature of the character r same as in the show except harshad he is bth negative n positive. Nandini's parents r alive . Rishab n dhruv r nt suffrng frm the unknwn disease
INDEX
ch-1: pg1
Ch - 2:pg3

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Originally posted by: Sanskruti16499

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Nice story line...

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Nice story line...

You just need to work on the layout...

Please use full words in your writing ...

Content is good...

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Thank you everyone for your response . I would continue and try to update chapter 1 today

Chapter 1
Aiyaapa i am very happy today . Thank you so much . Aap ki hi vajah se papa ka transfer delhi mein hua hai ab finally main aur aliya sath mein padh sakte hain . Aap to jante hai ki 8 saal pehle papa ki job ki vajah hme manglore jana pada tha par ab no problem ab main aur aliya sath padhenge wow bahut maza ayega thank you i love you so much . Ok bye i am getting late for my first at The space academy ."i said while walking through the corridor. Corridor ke pass lagi bhid ko dekh kar main us direction mein badh gyi. I saw a girl standing there . Her face was not clearly visible. She was all surrounded by boys. I went closer and shouted in excitment " aliya" . She turned and shouted "nandu". She literaly jumped on me and pulled me in a hug . She broke the hug but without leaving me she said "tu yeha kya kar rahi hai. "i chuckled "so suprise kaisa laga .eh?". She again pulled me back in a hug and said"bahut acha oh nandu i missed you so much. So kitne din ke liye hai yaha pe ". "filhal to hamesha ke liye" i said with breaking the hug ." yehi admission liya hai and we are in the same section too ". "seriously wow i am so happy . Par yeh sab kaise hua ?"she said while breaking the hug . "come lets go to class . Nahi to ma'am hme zinda nahi chodegi chal" aliya said and dragged me to the . We'er lucky to reach there on time. The class somewhat empty . Only few students were there. We occupied a vaccant seat . It was the last bench in middle row . We sat there and talked about million stuff . Soon a girl came there and said " hi aliya ! Who is this girl with you . " "oh hi soha .she is nandini. My best friend and nandini she is soha ." . I smiled to soha . She gave me a faint smile and sat behind me . " so soha where's your boyfriend . Haan ?" said aliya turning towards her . " so you have a boyfriend . Who is he ?" i said "yes nandini i have a boyfriend his name is manik malhotra. Aliya he is my bf so you should not be concerned about him . " she snapped at aliya . Hum aage muh kare baith gye "she is such a wiredo "maine aliya se dhire se kaha "yeh , shuruat mein she was very nice bt jab manik iska bf bana hai tab se she has become like this . You knw she is bit possessive about him. " aliya said "bit thats too much" i said "let it be na . Tumhare aane se phele she and mukti was the only one who would accomany me . You know na mein ladkio se dosti karne mein bahut bekar hoon. So " aliya said "baby , its not like that . Just listen to me..."said someone . I looked at the source of voice . He looked at me . His eyes was of golden brown colour. They were so intense . He seemed so much tensed and irritated. Poor him. He was a tall man with a good built . He had broad forehead . His hair was set in spikes and some strands were coming on his forhead . He had pink lips. They were kissable. Oh aiyapa what am i thinking ? He was still looking at me until ..." no i don't want to listen to you . Just go away manik..."soha said amongst her tears. "just once baby plz for once..."he said while holding soha's hand. "inka phir se shuru ho gaya "said A girl. She came and sat infornt of us "hi! Aliya . Oh btw who is she ?" she said pointing towards me . "oh hi! soha and manik ka to yeh roz ka drama hai . Aur yeh nandini hai meri childhood aur best friend . Yeh new admission hai . Aur nandu yeh mukti hai". "hi nandini" mukti greeted me warmly "hi mukti " i said with the same warmth. I liked her. Soon class teacher entered and the class started.
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so guys that was first ch . Hope you like it. Do comment

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