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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik dragged me and took me inside an empty class room. He closed the door. "manik kya kar rahe ho" I asked. He came near to me. I could fell his warmth , his closeness "what are you doing to me??" manik said huskily in my ear. Oh my god this feeling. I just can't express it. "so cabir bf hain tumhara? " manik said putting my hair behind my ear. "yes.. He is my best friend and as he said bf." I said. "par tumko kuch problem hai agar vo mera bf I mean boyfriend ban jaye??" manik caressed my face. He was making me feel dizzy. My breathing increased but I managed to hide it in front of him. Par pata nahi kab tak kar paoongi "haan fark padta hai..." manik said. I felt blessed. I wanted him to say that he loved me. "kyun fark padta hai??" I said. "kyunki.." manik stopped in between. He looked here and there and stormed out of room. I was unable to move an inch I sat down there only trying to control the sudden outburst of feelings. He was so close to me. I could still feel his breath, his hand on my cheeks I caressed it. Oh my god nandini itna juliet jaisa kyun behave kar rahi hoon. You are sounding so obsessed of manik. My brain spoke to me. Because she is this time it was my inner goddess who spoke. I shook my head and came out of the room and went to my class .
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It was lunch h break isiliye cabir bhi vahan tha varna we have different sections.
"nandini tu kahan thi yaar," mukti said. I looked towards manik he was also looking at me. "aa jaldi nahi toh ye mota tera sara lunch khaa jayega" mukti said pointing towards cabir. "are aise kaise meri moti mein apni pyaari si nandini ke liye toh bachaunga hi na" cabir said and fed me with his hand. Iska taste toh jana pehchana hai "ye mera lunch hai??" I said. I was shocked. "kya baat hai nandini ek bite mein hi pehchani liya...good job.. I am proud of you. " cabir said. I laughed. I loved them all they are my best friend."yaar mujhe bhi dona" I said and tried to take a bite from my own lunch which I think is now not mine and I loved the fact. Aliya, mukti and of course cabir they had all surrounded my lunch. My lunch was in the middle of them and it was next to impossible to get it "no nandini ek bite mila na be happy with it.." cabir said. I tried to grab my lunch. Cabir held it and started running in the class. I and mukti ran behind him. "de na yaar mote, mujhe bhi toh khana hai.." mukti said "aa lele moti" cabir shouted "cabir tum mujhe nahi doge.. Mujhe" I tried to blackmail him and as usual failed "nahi" he said clear and loud. He was moving backwards when dashed with one of our teachers savita ma'am. She got angry and scolded him. "sharm nahi aati besharam kahi ke. Kya kar rahe ho.." meine aur mukti ne pehle hi ma'am ko aate dekh liya tha isliye hum bagal vali seat pehle chap baith gye the. We started laughing quietly and cabir gave us a deathly glare. As soon as ma'am left we burst out laughing and clapping. Cabir made a puppy face and said "tum sab salo bahut bade vale harami hoo ma'am ko dekhte hi tum sab chup chap baith gye." he said. " hahaha .. kyun bachche fat gayi na " mukti said. " fat gayi behnchod fat ke haat mein aayi." cabir said. "aur tu nandu tu bhi is moti ki tarha nikla haan." cabir said and started running behind me. I ran but soon my leg slipped I was going to fall when someone got hold off me I opened my eyes which I had closed due to fear of falling. manik was protecting me from falling like always. We looked in each others eyes. His eyes were so beautiful. They were... Simply mesmerizing. I could not remove my gaze from them. "Chod do achal zamana kya kahega. Ho oo hata lo nazar ab kitna dekho ge ek doosre ko.. Ahem ahem ." cabir brought me back from my la la land by his besuri si singing. "cabir you got the last line of the song wrong." aliya said. "no aliya it was perfect hain na nandini.." cabir said. I felt embarrassed and started looking here and there. "vaise manik congrats bro." mukti said. "kisliye.. Mukti" manik asked confused. "are tera nandini ko har bar catch karne ka record aaj bhi break hone se bach gaya isiliye aur kisliye haan" mukti said and manik gave her what the f--ck look. "kaisa record???" cabir asked "are jab bhi nandini girne vali hoti hain na tab manik ek jaabaz bowler ko tarha use catch kar leta hain. Ek dum cricketer ishtyle" aliya said and cabir laughed a hearty laugh "shut up cabir" I said.
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Guys see I have a really busy schedule as I am in 11th so I am unable to give lo g updates but I promise that on Sat and sun the updates would be longest like really long
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb update wow!! Manik is so jealous of cabini bond plzz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hahahaha.. It was funny.. Jealous manik.. Loved it..
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Awesome update I really liked and try to update soon and also pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update dea. ...
Continue soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow Awsome
Short but it's awesome
Plz make manik jealous more
N cabir n nandin make closer than it's gonna be so much fun

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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
Super cool!!
Manik was so close to Nandu.. Wow!
He cared for her... Something is brewing up between both.
Can't wait to see them together..
Ahh! The school time! ❤️
Lunch time..so cute..
Cabir-Nandini-Mukti were so amazing..
Manik saved Nandu from falling.. so sweet of him..
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Continue soon..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that was really so sweet!!!

I am going all awww
so cute friendship
loved the update
continue soon
waiting eagerly
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
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... NEXT DAY
I went to our adda - the old building. Cabir was already sitting there working on his mobile. "So plan is going on well... Haan??" I said sitting beside him on the stairs.
"yaar this Aryaman. He is driving me crazy." cabir said. "kyun what happened...??" I asked. "first of all he asked me a photo.. Somehow I managed.. Chalo ok I can deal this much of tantrums than ab ye mujh se keh raha hai ki milna hai.. Like how could we meet. Mein kya karo ab and above that he has not talked any such things ki hum as a proof vo aliya ko dikha de and now this meet me drama. We have only talked like normal friends.. Not friend but merely acquaintance... Ab mein is duffer ko kise kaho ki hum NAHI mile sakte hai??" cabir explained. "meine pehle hi kaha tha ki this plan won't work but koi meri baat suno tab na." manik said walking towards us. "manik you are late.. Hum sab ko yahan 10 o'clock pahuchana hota hai. " I said "shut up nandini... Lets not fight. I have got some information." manik said. "what info bro" cabir asked "voh... Aliya and Aryaman had an Hugh fight." manik said sitting in between me and cabir. Cabir lifted his one eyebrow and gave a confused look then teased me. "why..??" I said drifting my attention from cabir's teasing to our plan. "ummm.. I think because Aryaman wants aliya to come go out with him and it is not possible for aliya.. Aryaman's some friend karan took his girlfriend jasmit out on a date.. So Aryaman is highly impressed with this date thing and he is pressurizing aliya.." manik said. "so how is this important for us. I mean it not gonna help us in our mission ??" I asked. "um.. Nandini we also need to concentrate on Aryaman's move besides our mission thing. We need to just make sure that aliya won't go with Aryaman " cabir said. "how we'll do that.?" I asked. "let's organise a party... A get together and you all force aliya to come to that party." manik said. "but we don't have any reason to party. There is no such good news and Na hi kisi ka birthday hai. and agar hum aise hi bina kisi reason ke party rakhenge toh usko hum pe doubt hoga." I suggested "yeah dude she is right. Hum bina kisi reason ke party nahi kar sakte plus if you all would keep a party then it is also possible that she can force us to bring Aryaman to it and then hum tum ek kamre band ho aur chabhi kho jaye and then you know na nandu what could happen there... They would play so many games that you refused to play with.. Remember when we met first time... Sports room " cabir said pushing manik behind so that he could come close to me. "yeah I remember that.. How could I forget our first meeting." I said giggling. "what first meeting.." manik said coming between me and cabir. "aa.. Manik leave it. It is a really long story. Focus on party thing." I said pushing cabir behind. Manik made disgusted faces looking us. "I have an idea" cabir said after a little thinking. "what.." I asked. "dhruv's birthday is coming. We can celebrate that and prevent aliya from going with Aryaman. What say??" cabir said "but why aliya would go there are I mean we are not friends with dhruv." manik said. "yeah, manik is right aliya won't come as she is not friends with dhruv." I said. Manik gave me a sarcastic smile and said "kya baat hai... Matlab aaj meri side kaise le li tumne. " "acha you guys don't fight itna ladoge to pyaar ho jayega." cabir said. I looked at manik. I turned my face away as soon as he looked at me. "and rahi baat dhruv and aliya ki dosti ki then it will happen today itself." cabir continued. "par voh kaise hoga" I asked.
"leave that to me. Aaj lunch break mein we'll see to it and nandini remember day 2" cabir said and winked. I started looking here and there "what day two?" manik asked confused. "aah.. Manik.. Tum Na iski baataoin pe dhyan mat diya karo.. He is always ranting like that..." I said trying to cover up. Ayiapaa please save me! "achcha I am leaving.. Bye.." I said and started going "wait... Why are you going this early... Stay for someone time na" manik said holding my hand. "yeah nandini stay na.. Vaise bhi we need to discuss a lot.. About manik." cabir said. Manik looked at both of us and asked "what about me..??" "no nothing about you.. I was saying that.. What you think about it manik.. About Aryaman... Forcing me to meet... Him.. I can't do that..." cabir covered up and I let out a sigh of relief. "you can hire someone and make the gir meet him... He is dumbo.. He would surly fall for this " manik gave solution .. "yeah I could have done that but maine ek ladki ki photo use bhej di hai." cabir said. "you know that girl.. I mean if you knw then we can request her to help us and meet Aryaman." manik said. "yeah I could have done that but jis ladki photo Bheji hain vo real mein exist he nahi karti hai." cabir said sheepishly. "how's that possible ki tum ek ladki photo bhejo aur vo real mein exist hi na karti ho." I said "are you mad, aisa nahi ho sakta"manik said. "actually meine apni hi photo edit ki aur make up and all apply kiya photo pe aur bhej di" cabir explained. "kya??" me and manik yelled in Union.
PRECAP
Dhruv befriends manik, aliya and mukti
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Edited by shhambhavii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Hahahhahahhahahhahah...
I can't stop from laughing
Last part was awesome...

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