Manan ff - POLES APART chapter15(pg-17) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
So lovely update..
Loved the song Awari..its so beautiful,.
So Cabir has joined them in mission ..great!!
Manik insecure about Nandini 😉 chl kya rha hai Manik ke dimag me?? 😆
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Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
awsomeee loved cabini bonding
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
awesome!!
nice story!!
loved it
continue soon
accept my buddy request and send me pm when you update next!!
waiting eagerly!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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We all three were sitting on the staircase of old building. Cabir was cracking some stupid joke and I was laughing like a manic. Suddenly, manik got up and said " mujhe nahi lagta ki hum yahan picnic. Manane aaye hain. Cracking jokes and all. Haan... See agar mission pe discuss karna hai toh jaldi karo varna.. I am leaving jab mission pe zaroorat ho toh bula lena.." he said. "nandu I think he is right... We need to plan something against him."cabin said. "so, what should we do to trap him.."I asked. "I have a plan..." cabin said. "What plan.." Manik asked. "lets open an account on Facebook.. A fake account ek girl ke naam se then there we can flirt with him. He would for sure give importance and then we can show it to aliya what say? " "no that's not gonna work... It don't think so. What if he wouldn't accept the friend request. Then.." manik rejected the idea. "manik be optimistic... Lets give it a try... Why would he not accept the request?" I said. "ok then lets make it now..." cabin said."but how can we make it now.. We don't have laptop or pc." I said "so.. What?" manik and cabir said in Union. "nandu mobile hain na" cabin said smilingly. What mobile aur school mein manik chuckled seeing my reaction. I glared and said "you can't bring mobile in school..there are rules " "rules are meant to break nandu. Aren't they cabir ?" manik said his one hand on cabir 's shoulder. Cabir also nodded and kept his ha d on manik. I smiled seeing them I really want them to bond well but manik pata nahi kyun he is so annoyed with cabir. I said "ok then.. Mein chalti hoon phir baki ka kaam tum log sambhal lena.." I sid said and started walking then only cabir called me "nandini vaise ek baat punchu..???" "haan haan puch na.." I said walking towards him. "voh manik sachchi mein tumhara boyfriend nahi hai.." I looked towards manik and said "no.." manik was also looking at me. "thank god.." cabir exclaimed. "so mein hi tumhara EK loota bf hoon.. Thank god pata hai mein kitna dar gya ye sun ke but chalo fine " "what..??"manik exclaimed "oye tujhe itni kya problem hai. Nandini toh bas teri friend hai na.. So tujhe toh khush hoon chahiye." cabin said "mujhe farak padta hai.." manik said angrily. "kyun manik.." I asked I don't know what happened to me I just asked him. Manik expression changed from anger to confusion and surprise. He left from there. "so, what's cooking.??" cabin said with an expression I know it all. I shrugged my shoulders "tu mujhe nahi bategi... Sach mein mujhe nahi bategi... Mujhe.. Samjh gaya bachchu matlab yahi dosti yahi pyaar beech mein aa gayi baat ki dewar." cabir blackmailed me. "ok fine listen. I don't know.. I like him but he like aliya.. " I said "you seriously think this way. He loves you." cabir said "no no you are highly mistaken.!" I said "ok so do as I say and in 5days he would come running to you that nandini I love you." cabir mimicked manik. I laughed at his antics and I hand on his chest he also wrapped his one hand around my shoulder. Just then manik came and said "chalna nahi hai kya..??" he saw us in that position and dragged me and said "chalo.." cabir shouted from behind "it stars from today.."
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Lovely update dea. ..
Continue soonnn
Tnx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Mindblowing update
but it was vry chotu
plzz nxt tym na update
a long one
becoze its becoming
interesting day by day
manik's jealousy, cabir is
always right

plzz continue soon
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
awesome update!!MaNanBir bond is awesome!!loved it!!continue soonthanks for the pm!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Awsome one yarrr jealous manik haha continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69
Woo amazing I just loved it plz update the next part soon and also pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#70
Getting interesting part by part..
Loved it..❤️
MaNanBir bonding.. 👏
Awesome part..
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Continue soon..

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