Manan ff - POLES APART chapter15(pg-17) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start dea...
continue soonnn
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Amazing start... plz pm me when u update.
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It was wow
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry itne dino tak koi update nai karne ke liye actually mera haath tod gya tha so mobile pe ek haath se type karna mushkil tha. But I am updating an chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER 2
" no way manik" I shouted. We were standing in the middle of the class. " so... , I'll take it as yes. Come aliya." he said while dragging aliya towards his seat. But today not again. today aliya will sit with me. I jumped in front of manik and blocked his way "wait, monster my ' no' means no today aliya will sit with me. Tum roz aliya ke saath baith jaate ho but not today." I snapped. "oh yes I will take her with me my dear nandu". Manik said and again started walking. I again blocked his way. He was damn irritated with me. It was clear on his face. But I was not scared of him. No I was not scared of him but I was a little no... no.. you are not. just be brave nandu. He let out a sigh and said " WHAT IS YOU PROBLEM GOD DAMN IT?... like seriously how.. Like how you manage to irritate me so much." haww how dare he " I ... I.. Use to irritate you. No Mr Manik monster malhotra you are highly mistaken like always. You irritate me. Mujhe toh samajh he nahi ata hai ki tumhe roz roz aliya ke saath kyun baithna hota hai. I mean tum din bhar aliya aliya karte rehte ho kal bhi pura din tum aliya ke saath baaithe the. Soha she is your girlfriend but tumhe dekh ke toh aisa lagta hai ki you don't love soha. aliya is your girlfriend and... " OH SHIT SHIT SHIT. Yeh maine kya kar diya. I glanced towards soha. SHIT she heard what I said and tears were visible in her eyes. No yaar not again like always... I just can't tolerate her crying she ran towards her bench and started crying I looked at manik he was looking at soha. Then suddenly he turned towards me and said "I LOVE SOHA. DO. YOU. GET. THAT. I LOVE HER". And went behind soha I moved back to my seat and saw aliya seating and cupping her face by both her hands. Mukti kept her popcorn beside and moved a little so I could sit with her. " chhod na yaar soha ko toh roz roz rona hi hai agar tumhari vajah se nahi toh kisi aur vajah se". Mukti consoled me. Main Chup chap head-down karke baaith gaye. Soha ne hum sab ko seriously pareshan kar ke rakha tha. Roz choti baath pe rona ladna. Vo manik ko leke kuch zyada hi possessive thi. Poor monster. I really felt bad for him but kabhi kabhi I really felt ki vo soha ko like nahi karta hai. Main jab se yahan hoon maine tab se manik ko aliya ka naam japte dekha hai. Par maine kabhi manik se iss baare mein achche se baat nahi ki. Iss baare mein kya meri toh manik se kabhi normal logo ki tarha baat hi nahi hui. We were always behind each other's neck. I got up looked towards manik n soha. She was still crying. I turned back to see aliya she completing some project of her's . I then decided to talk to mukti. She was also... Doing some project i turned and looked around. The whole class was busy... competing some project Wait koi H. W. mila tha kya. "ka.. Kaun..sa kaam kar rahi ho? " I said while pointing my finger towards mukti's work. I was unable to complete the sentence. " don't tell me.." mukti said with the a grin "kal.. 5th period... Sci. project.. Aaj submit karna tha." "shit shit shit I forgot. How could I. You know what mukti I never forgot completing hw like this. Oh aiyapa please help me. " I prayed looking up. "chill yaar mere pass extra pages hai tum abhi zaldi se bana lo main help kar dungi. Just chill" . "are you kidding me. Minimum 15 pages chahiye. And agle period mein hi submit karna hai. I won't be able to make it" I said. I was distressed. " so... I have an idea.." mukti said with the biggest grin " you are scaring me" I said. "don't its gonna be fun" mukti said.
NEXT MOMMENT
We were in the old building. usually vaha koi hota nahi hai. Khali sunsan si building hai " mukti maine life mein kabhi class bunk nahi ki hai. Agar hum pakde gaye toh" "nahi pakde jaogye".said. Wait. I don't know him aur ye yahan kya kar raha hai." Cabir." yelled mukti. She high five him. They seemed to be long lost friends. " meet her she is nandini murty and nandini he is my one of the best friends Cabir". Mukti introduced us. " hi Cabir" I waved my hand and said " hello nandini" he said. " so tu class bunk karne se itna dharti hai" haan vo maine pehli baar class bunk kar rahi hoon na isiliye. Tumne toh bahut baar ki hongi na? " I justified. " seriously ek baar aur bolna " Cabir said with surprised look." what maine kabhi class bunk nahi ki yeh " I said confused " no no not this vo jo tu ne iske baad kaha ki.. " he said" ki kya..? " I said confused" she is damn innocent and cute. "Cabir said looking towards mukti and pointing towards me. Mukti who was controlling her laughter all the way suddenly burst into fits of laughter. " I know I know " she said controlling her laughter" what? " I said now I was fully confused. " you know what tu ek aisi jagah pe rahti hai jahan logon ka sentence bina gali diye khatam hi nahi hota hai and tu "tum" karke baat karti ho like seriously who do this " Cabir explained" nandini murty do this " I said. Trying to deliver a dialogue. Cabir gave me a like - seriously look. I was so embarrassed. Mukti said" oye mote, yeh look dena band kar aur nandini bhul kar bhi iski baaton ka bura mat manana aur mote tu yeh bata ki akela in sunsan rahoon mein kya kar raha hai.? "." are nahi yaar akela nahi hoon voh anugrah in short AD aur nikita voh old building ki sports room mein hai. " he said pointing towards the sports room." oohh" mukti said. "sports room are you all going to play some game? But I won't be playing I would just sit and watch. Ok " I said "nandu but voh toh aisa game khel rahe jisme sirf voh hi participate kar sakte hai. " Cabir said controlling his laughter "kyun aisa kaun sa game hai?" I said. "aisa game... Jis Se hm sab paida hue hai" mukti said. Shit maine phir bina kuch soche samjhe bol diya. I started staring at the ground Cabir came closer to me and said in my ear " vaise agar tu dekhna chahti hai toh mein videos le aaoonga mere pe aisi videos bahut hai." I started hiting him. " come nandini lets go period khatam ho gya hoga and see hm pakde bhi nahi gaye." mukti said. "vaise today I enjoyed a lot. Bunking was fun". I said " chaho toh thodi der aur ruk lo. Main bhi yahan hoon vaise bhi inka game bahut lamba chalega" Cabir said "no no I am going and I am not that type of girl toh tum mujhse aisi gandi gandi Baatein mat kara karo" I said "yeh baatein gandi kaha hai tum aise games nahi kelogi kya nandu?" I dragged mukti from there and shouted back" I am not listening and bye Cabir " mukti came along with me laughing.

Precape
Manan friendship, annual day
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Edited by shhambhavii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
It was very nice and refreshing!
I liked the concept except for Manik being Soha's boyfriend.
Like seriously ?? They both don't suit each other.
Looking forward for more updates.
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Please pm me once you Update!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: himanshishah15

It was very nice and refreshing!
I liked the concept except for Manik being Soha's boyfriend.
Like seriously ?? They both don't suit each other.
Looking forward for more updates.
______
Please pm me once you Update!!!

I know they don't suit each other but you need to have patience on manan' case because I want them to be best friends before being gf bf. So plz wait for them to come together

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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Lovely update dea. ..
Continue soonnn
Tnx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Finally after so many days u updated
update was too beautiful
but don't say ki manik alya ko like karta hai
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
I jst write awesum
At a point further I would love to see a jealous manik
Or else u write the best ...
Update soon dear ... 😳

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