Manan ff - POLES APART chapter15(pg-17) - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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"kya matlab??" manik. asked. "I mean he... He is not right for aliya" I said "dekha I knew it.. That he is not right for aliya" manik said "obviously, Aryaman tumhe kyun pasand ane laga aakhir tum toh..." I said with a smile but as soon as I realised what I was saying I shut my mouth up. "yeah , I like aliya that 's why I don't... Like that bloody Aryaman" manik said "manik. Are you ok?? " I said keeping my one hand on his shoulder. "yeah, I am absolutely fine. Mein apni he feelings jaan ke khush ho raha tha I never cared to know what aliya felt about me. Toh yeh toh hona hi tha" manik said. "vaise manik, mere hisab se tumhara aur aliya ka ab bhi kuch scene ban sakta." I said. His face lit up "seriously tum aisa sochti ho. Par kaise. Aliya toh Aryaman ko like karti hai..." manik said. "haan but uske liye hume Aryaman ko raaste se hatana hoga" I said "what Aryaman ko raaste se hatana hoga. I am not going to kill any one." manik said "oye dumbo, raaste se hatane ka yeh matlab nhi hota hai ki use jaan se mar denge. Bhagwaan ne shakl ke saath kash akal bhi di hoti.. Idiot" I said hitting his head. "hey listen I am not an idiot or dumbo voh toh main... Ek minute Bhagwaan ne shakl ke saath akal di hoti... You think I look great right.." manik said I didn't wanted him to know the truth. "no.. That doesn't mean that you are smart, oo maine .. aisa kab... kaha... I never meant that"" I said trying not to spill the beans. "I had already told you that you are bad bad lier... Huh jitna jooth bolna hai na bol lo. I know ladkiyaan maarti hai iss chehre pe" manik said "ab din bhar apne chehre ki hi tareef karni hai ya aliyaman pe bhi concentrate karna hai.." I said. "oh hello its not aliyaman it's Aryaman A-R - Y - A - M- A - N" manik said correcting me. I rolled my eyes and said "agar meri spelling correct kar li ho then think about this aliya plus Aryaman equals to aliyaman" "oh god tum girls bhi na" manik said "hum girls bhi kya ??" I said hitting him in his shoulder. He grabbed my hand and said "you all act very weird sometimes... You all" "wait.. Manik agar hum aise hi ladte rahe then we will never be able to complete our mission to separate aliyaman. MISSION ALIYAMAN . DO YOU get that " I said "yeah BUT nandini I like aliya so I want them to break up but tum kyun itni desperate kyun ho In dono ko alag karne ke liye... I mean you don't know me well jo tum mere liye aisa karogi besides aliya tumhari best friend hai and tum us se uska pyaar chinna... Sort of kyun chahti ho. I don't get that" manik said looking towards me. Meine sir neeche kar liya. Manik ko bata do why I want them to breakup. Use baataoin ya nahi ki why I hate.. JUST HATE Aryaman so much "bata do.. Kisi ne kaha tha ki baatein batane se man halka ho jata hai... And vaise bhi hum ek mission pe hain so we need to know everything about each other especially about aliya and aryaman." manik said. "manik and nandini agar aap dono ki baatein khatam ho gayi ho to hum class start kare... Vaise bhi aap dono ko manners toh hai nahi ki jab teacher class mein enter ho tab unhe khade hokar wish karte hai " raghav sir ne kaha tab meine notice kiya sab bachche khade the mein aur manik hi baithe hue the. "so.. rry.. Sorry sir voh.." maine khade hote hue kaha "baath jaye nandini murthy." sir scolded me. Manik ne paper pe likha 'batogi ya nai ' I wrote 'what? manik padhne do aur "nai" kya hota hai voh nahi hota hai na ki nai' 'nandini topic mat change karo aur mein nahi ko nai hi likhta hoon samajh mein aya ki NAI ' "aap dono kya likh rahe hai paper pe " raghav sir asked "voh sir notes" I gave an excuse "yaha dhayan dijiye aap dono" sir said "yes sir " I said "smart move miss murthy" manik said I glared him and he chuckled a bit but then remained quite.
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Will nandini tell manik about Aryaman 's truth???. Why does nandini hate Aryaman so much???
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Looks like a story is about to begin in the form if mission intrestind just loved it update soon sweety.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Quite interesting haan!
MaNan have already started sharing good bond even if it is because of the mission they are working on. But they share a good chemistry.
Their fight over Nai & Nahi 🤣🤣 They are quite funny.
Yeah, why does Nandini hates Aryaman this much? Something wrong?
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Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Nice update
Thanks for PM
waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Wow superb update dea. ..
Continue soonnn
Tnx for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Lovely update
manan r so adorable
it was a chotu update
plzz nxt tym thoda long
vala update krna

thnks for PM
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Superb
Awsome
Keep updating
Wating for the next part
Y nandini hate aryaman
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
loved ur story
shakl ke saath akal bhi diya hota awsomeee dialouge
loved ut continueee soon
nandu hates aryaman but y
interesting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
I would tell everything to manik we are on a mission. And usse bhi right hain us cheap ke baare mein sab jaane ka. I was thinking all this while going towards music room for Annual day practice. I saw manik was walking just in front of me. I called him. "manik you wanted to know why I hate him so much..." "nandini.." manik said. "shh.. Just listen. You remember 2 months earlier when we're on our 3 days 2 night trip to dehradun. You found me crying bitterly under the tree that night..
FLASHBACK
nandini was in jungle trying to find aliya and mukti. "aiyapaa where are they. Raat bhi ho rahi hai and ye dono mil hi nahi rahi hain pata nahi kaha chale gaye. I was saying not to play any stupid game. But that monster he wanted to have some fun stupid idiot monster I hate him so much." nandini was saying to herself then she heard some boys talking she went in that direction and saw Aryaman was standing there with his two best friends. They were all talking and cracking some shitty joke. Nandini thought not to go to them as they didn't seemed nice person to talk. She was going from there when one of Aryaman 's friends saw her. He told Aryaman about presence of nandini. Aryaman went towards nandini and held her hand. He said "nandini wait I want to talk to you" nandini sensed something wrong with him and advice "Aryaman it's is getting late and I need to find aliya and mukti. Lets not talk now. We'll Definitely talk in the morning. Bye " she started going but Aryaman grabbed her from her waist lifted and kept her on a rock which was all surrounded by his bloody friends "Aryaman what are you doing. Are you out of your senses. Let me go" she said and tried to go but Aryaman 's friends surrounded her and didn't let her go. Aryaman came in between the circle and said "nandini tum mujh se itna bhagti kyun ho? Listen to me .. Just listen. I love you. I really love you so much. Maine jab se tumhe dekha hai tab se belive me." Aryaman said cupping her face. "remove your hands Aryaman." nandini said and Jerked away his hand. "nandini" Aryaman said with anger and pulled nandini towards himself and said" you know what nandini how much I wanted to see you on my bed, how much I dreamt of seeing you naked in my room. I really want to do it slow to you but no you are so stubborn that you kept me waiting for a very long time, and now as a punishment I will really f**k you hard. I swear." he said with anger , hatred and lust in his eyes. Nandini 's eyes filled with tears she kept screaming and begging in front of Aryaman. Aryaman tried to force herself on nandini but was pulled back by sudden but strong force. A solid punch blew on Aryaman' s face. He fell down. His friends attacked on nandini' saviour but they also fell away because of his solid moves. Nandini hid herself behind the rock while his saviour was fighting with these morons. He beat them blue black and went towards nandini. He removed his jacket and covered her in order to hide her torn cloths "thank you" nandini managed to say among her tears and hiccups "it's ok but please don't cry. See they have not harmed you. Your safe now kuch nahi hua hai. Please don't cry" he said and gave nandini his handkerchief. She wiped her tears and asked "by the way who are you?? Tum lagte toh hamare hi school ke ho but maine pehle tumhe kabhi dekha nahi" "I am... Dhruv singhania. Actually I am a new admission. Isiliye you might not know me." he introduced himself. "hi I am nandini murthy!" nandini said "yeah mujhe tumhara naam pata hai.. I heard that boy taking your name.. " tears started flowing down nandini' eyes remembering about the incident. "hey I am sorry I didn't meant that you to start crying again. Please stop. Are baap re itne bade bade asu moti jaise hai yeh bilkul see." he said showing nandini her teardrop which fell on dhruv's fingertip. Nandini smiled and stopped crying "ahh.. Chalo kam se kam tumne rona to band kar diya Varna mein toh mar hi jata..." nandini gave him a puzzled look "are aise kya dekh rahi ho... Agar tum itna roogi to yahan flood toh aa hi jayega na aur phir mera kya sabhi ka marne tay hai.. Gaur se dekhiye is ladki ko, yeh vahi ladki hai jo ro ro kar hum sab ko jaan se marne ki koshish kar rahi hai.. Is bholi shake vai ladki ke hai itne bhayanak iraden ki aap soch bhi nahi sakte" dhruv said last few lines mimicking crime reporters. Nandini chuckled "stop it dhruv.. Achcha dhruv I need to go mujhe mera tent yahan se dikh raha hai I can go now aur agar mein tumhare saath jaaoongi then..." nandini said but was cut in between by dhruv "I know then your friends will ask you loads of questions and you'll tell them and again start crying and I don't want you to cry so... Bye but jaaneman bhula nahi hame dhruv... Dhruv singhania naam hai mera" dhruv said went towards his tent nandini sat down there and started sobbing silently. She could not control her any more. She cried her heart out when manik arrived. He started shouting at her "kahan chali gayi thi nandini kab se hum tumhe dhoond rahe the.." nandini tried to stop her tears but they were not just listening to her. After few minutes when manik realized that nandini was neither fighting with him nor reacting. He sat on his knees and lifted nandini' face. It was all covered with tears and kajal was spread around her eyes. Manik got scared and shocked he had not expected nandini to be crying that much because she was lost for few minutes. He soothed her pain and hushed her. He said sorry for asking nandini to play a small hide and seek game. Nandini wiped her face with the handkerchief and asked manik not to tell anyone about her crying they went to their respective tents.

FLASHBACK ENDS
I fell on the ground crying. I cried bitterly I was unable to feel anything around me. The hustle bustle that was there In the corridor suddenly felt to be stopped. No noise could be heard to me I was unable to feel anything around me even myself. The next thing that I felt was strong muscular built holding me protecting me. Saving me from all odds of life. his hand was around me promising to be there always by my side. His touch felt soothing from all the pain that I have passed these 2 month . I held him more tightly. I wanted get over from all the pain. I was becoming more determined to get aliya out of this trouble.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Emotional
My poor nandu n bold 2
Aryaman should teach lessons
Exitced for Misson
But same time afriad 2
Bcz of aliya n manki 2gether
No no Don't z happen

But I just love ur story that awesome

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