MaNan OS - Hot and Cold

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is dedicated to all the wonderful friends I made on the MaNan AT. But, especially, to Rida. I hope it meets your expectations.

Criticism always welcome.

Have fun reading.

MaNan OS - Hot & Cold

They were sitting by the pool, in amicable silence, their hands entwined and their legs playing footsie in the cold water, each lost deep in thought. Manik staring at the stars, thanking them for making his wish come true and Nandini, staring at them and wondering where all her hatred for these bright twinkling celestial bodies disappeared. Manik then looked at his girlfriend, the 5 feet powerhouse Nandini Murthy in awe. She was his. She loved him.

He caressed her long silky tresses with his free hand and slowly turned her face towards his for a sweet kiss. Manik had discovered that Nandini was not as shy of intimacy as he had thought she would be. They had taken their relationship to the next level soon after Nandini had confessed that she loved him. A smile crept on his face. His girl was so giving, so loving, both in and out of bed. What had taken him truly by surprise was how demanding she was when it came to intimacy. "What more could a guy ask for?", he thought as he slowly drew lazy circles on her hand with his thumb. "What are you looking so pleased about?", she asked him. Trust her to notice everything about him. His face broke into a grin. It was time to tease her. He leant in closer and whispered in her ear, "nothing much, just recalling the last time we made love and how you dug your fingers into my back moaning with pleasure as I...". She never let him complete the sentence and gave him such a shove that he suddenly found himself in the water, sputtering. This tiny delicate woman could find such strength when it came to torturing him. "Nandini, you are going to pay for this!", he vowed!

He quickly got out and chased her around the pool, trying to get a hold of her. His long legs caught up with her fast and within no time, she was captive in his arms. Knowing her game was up, she changed tracks and started to squirm and apologise oh so sweet and innocently when he, of course, knew better. "I'm sorry Manik. Promise I won't do it again. Promise!" The imp! Of course she would, they both knew. He was not going to let her go so easily. So, as suddenly as she pushed him in, he fell sideways into the pool with his arms around her. Luckily she was holding on to him really tightly. He had been giving her lessons but she was not yet a confident swimmer and this was not the time he wanted to save her from drowning, although that had its perks. This time, he had something else, something wicked in mind.

She had her arms wrapped around his neck and was murmuring words of rebuke when he tightened his hold around her and pulled her much closer allowing her to feel how much she affected him, regardless of the situation. Her rant ceased immediately and he could feel her smile. The smile of a woman secure about her effect on her man. She blew on his neck and planted a soft open mouthed kiss on the spot where it met his shoulder. He involuntarily shuddered. He loved it when she did that. She picked up on his reaction and growing bolder, she slowly nipped on the same spot and wrapped her legs around his waist. He wanted to be wicked. Ha! His girlfriend had other plans and she let the seductress in her take over. He took a deep breath and started to slowly and purposefully stride towards the edge of the pool. Today, even if it killed him, he was going to teach Nandini Murthy that as much as she affected him, Manik Malhotra could turn tables on her and make her scream in pleasure anywhere he wished it.

The End


Below are links to my other works:

From the Kiss to the Punch: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4316243/from-the-kiss-to-the-punch-a-manan-os

I Hate Her: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4311985/i-hate-her-manan-drabble

MaNan Drabble: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kaisi-yeh-yaariaan/4302120/manan-drabble-updated


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Cat. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Eeks Zee I love the after the deed intimacy and convos so much. A good writer always get this right, weaving in the touches of intimacy in all moments.
I love.

I unres. Stop crying. Ok.😆
Edited by AnomanderRake - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res cos thesis :'((
Wait did u ever dedicate anything to me?😳 *takes out AK 47*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reserved. #kissemoji

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Oh my God Zainab! This was so subtle yet so arousing, so intimate. I absolutely loved it. So many feels. For now you've completely satiated my need for MaNan saaxx. 😆 Oh the innuendo. I loved how realistic it was, as in Nandini being this feisty temptress, not shying away from intimacy. That's how she is, at least what I've understood of her. Until they cross that threshold, she wouldn't of course be free of inhibitions. Still the makers sometimes overdo it, like during the confession. But this was absolute heaven. Succinct and so satisfying. I liked how blissfully happy Manik was. How their relationship is so dreamy yet real. You always make it so crisp and impactful.
Can you write a full fledged fanfictional piece? Please.

Okay I'm sure I could write a better comment if not a longer one but I couldn't resist reading it before I'd intended and thought I should reply while the words were still fresh in my mind.
Edited by Ribelle_IshRa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik then looked at his girlfriend, the 5 feet powerhouse Nandini Murthy in awe. She was his. She loved him. i just loved this line
it was so good
hot and cold reminded me of manbir thou😆😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeh kya tha soulmate? 🤗


I mean I got so many feelsm this is the Bold Nandini I dig and I want in the show as well...and MaNan in water are always a treat to watch and read!

Loved it Zainu
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its was really beautiful
and yes ! i must commend your writing skills for writing intimate things ( just their mentions i mean ) absolutely aesthetically , which is brilliant !
i really hope u write a few more , whenever possible though 😃
i loved this one to the core 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was so beautiful I could cry 😭 😭 😭
This is exactly what I've been dying to see and you penned it down so excellently! Bold and uninhibited Nandini and kameena Manik 😆 Just being with each other and enjoying their togetherness

This was AMAZING Zee 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is so nice zee😃
You should write more often! Love reading your os😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful!! Lovely OS!! 😊

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