From the Kiss to the Punch - A MaNan OS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok Guys, I am back (was I gone in the first place? *SMH*) and this time with an OS.

This is dedicated to my soulmate - Jaggs aka MKB. ILoveYou 😳❤️

Suha - I hope you will like this one 😃

And Ru - Thank you. You know why. *.* (IF really should have a kiss emoji by now)

Adhi, Shriya, Thank you - You know why :)

I hope you like it. As always, comments and criticism is most welcome. Thankyou.


From The Kiss To The Punch


It was the night before the fusion competition organised by SPACE. As was tradition, Nyonika Malhotra, Trustee of SPACE Academy, had thrown a lavish party for the participating students and teachers at the Malhotra Mansion.

Nandini had no desire to attend the party but she had gone out of respect to her Guru, Pandit Trilok Chaurasia. As soon as she arrived, she made her way out to the back where the pool was, avoiding socialising with anyone. She recalled the last time she had been there. Diwali night. The memories of that night were so fresh in her mind. Manik had kissed her that night. For the first time. Without warning, a lone tear escaped her eyes. She brushed it off furiously. She was done crying over Manik. He had given up on them so easily. One mistake, she made one mistake. And he declared it over between them. Had she not found it in her heart to forgive him when he made a mistake? So why could he not forgive her? Clearly, she had been mistaken about his feelings for her. He did not love her as she had thought he did, if he could not forgive her. Still, she missed him. They had not spoken once since that time in the library when she tried to remind him of all the memories they made. He had stayed out of her way. It was so unlike him to not invade her space. She really missed him.

(inside the living room where the party was being held)

Manik stood near the steps facing the main entrance. He had not seen Nandini at the party, although Cabir told him that she had arrived. He briskly but quietly walked out towards the poolside, not wanting to mingle with the guests. He wanted to be on his own. As soon as he stepped out, he saw her lone figure sitting there. Even though, somewhere deep in his mind he had known he would find her, he was so upset that this girl, the one whom he was ready to die for and the one who betrayed his trust was here. She was here and she looked so beautiful, so ethereal. As always. Anger, pain and longing, all three emotions came bubbling up to the surface. He could not believe any person could feel so many emotions at one go. He did. He reacted on the one most dominating. Anger. He walked to where she was sitting and without any form of warning, hauled her up.

"Why are you here?" He asked her.

She seemed lost for a moment. Then she struggled to get out of his grip.

"Leave me alone, you are hurting me. Let me go, Manik", she spit the words out.

"I asked, why are you here? Who invited you? What do you want from me?", the words were torn from him. She did not cower.

"I came because I am invited. I am one of the participants for tomorrow's competition, as you are well aware. And as of now, I want you to let me go. Let. Me. Go", she retorted, equally angry.

How ironic was it that she was turning him on so fast by being the spitfire than she ever did when she displayed affection towards him? His brain was in overdrive, fried actually. She was fighting against him, making all these sexy sounds and her body involuntarily rubbing against his. Lord. This woman was dangerous. She made him see stars. He needed to get a grip on his hormones.

"Why can you not let me go? You have made it clear that you cannot forgive me, so why are you invading my space? When you made a mistake, when you broke my trust, I forgave you Manik. And you could not extend the same courtesy to me."

They had been moving towards the edge of the pool, slowly and without either of them realising. She used her free hand to push, punch and slap his chest. But he would not let her go.

She continued her tirade at him.

"I said I was sorry. I asked you not to let me go. Yet, you did. Is this how much you trusted us? One small mistake, one small misunderstanding and you gave up on us Manik. I was not worth fighting for? We, were not worth fighting for. And you tell me I betrayed you? Well, you know what? You betrayed us. You told me the best was yet to come. And then you pushed me away when I made one mistake."

Her words were worming themselves inside his head and he wanted to retaliate but he could not focus on the conversation alone. Her scent was filling up his senses. Her body fanning the fumes of want inside of him. She was continuing to use her free hand to push him and suddenly both of them were in the water.

They came up for air plastered against each other. Tiny droplets of water stuck to her lashes, her cheeks and her lips. He groaned. And he could not control it anymore. He pulled her close, so close that there was no space for air to pass between them. Fisting his hand in her hair, he swooped down to kiss her. Her hands automatically came around his neck and she kissed back with equal fervour. He smiled at her reaction. Nandini Moorthy. Always guarded, ever so innocent, was kissing him like an experienced lover. She suddenly dropped her arms and stared up at him. She was breathing heavily as was he. A soft blush was creeping up on her cheeks. He saw that her eyes filled up with tears, tears that were threatening to spill over any moment.

"Manik...", she took his name. So much hope filled in that one tiny word.

"No, I cannot forgive you and seducing me this time, will not work".

He saw her reaction. She looked like she had been slapped hard. And he regretted his words, immediately and was about to apologise for what he had said when without any warning, she punched him in the face.

"You only deserve that from me", she said and she waded out of the pool leaving him, rubbing his sore jawline for the third time in the history of knowing her.

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rubys07 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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RESSSESS.

I KNOW WHY.

I'M AWESOME N YOU CANT HAVE ENUF OF ME xD

iKid.

*not.

:* :*

#DamnDemKissEmojis
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Aww this is so cute... I actually want something like this in the show.
definitely a pool kiss and definitely a punch😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was so beautiful but ended with a punch😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So sweet. Loved it on other hand he badly need a punch 😳
Edited by panidarang - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all u are Mine mine and Mine! 🤗

Oh my god Zainu..what was this? And you were nervous about this? Are u serious? This is excellent like I could not have imagined a better OS dedicated to me. You are one amazing writer who can perfectly write about MaNan ⭐️- My star!
You know how I enjoy watching the head v/s heart conflict and u gave me exactly that. Uff Manik on the one hand he is angry, hurt and in pain but on the other hand he cant even stop himself from giving into his desires and want for her. You can see it in the way he is holding her hand tightly and yet is not willing to let go of it. And in the show of course u can see it in his eyes, his face how he wants to be cuddled by his love but cant because as usual his anger is taking the best of him. Baba is being a gadha, a kid throwing tantrums but only in the hope that his Nandini will be there to handle these tantrums. Love or hate he just cant live without her...the yin to his yang...☯️

The meant to be's...because of which he can walk away but he cant stay away 😳

Nandini uff my girl..now I exactly want to see this happening in the show- the strong, independent, dedicated and my tigress Nandini, how she gave it back to him blaming him also for their breakup because he had not done anything to stop her either but then again she cant help missing him..well the heart wants what it wants and u just cant fight it. Touch and physical connect works for both of them and the way u have written it amazing...u have maintained that thin line because of which it has not ended up becoming obscene or uncomfirtable, thank you for not making it "Hawt" .A very big Muaaah to u for that :*****

But the climax of the story was my favourite part- The Punch! I just cant...It gave me flashbacks of the first punch- that solid punch which changed everything between them, which became the reason behind Manik and Nandini becoming MaNan! Only her punch can set Baba right and I want one in the show as well.

Babies be love, u just cant stop fangirling about them and their present scenario reminds me of this line from a show (which was also my favourite until they ruined but never mind) "Nafrat Paas aane na de...Mohabbat dur jane na de...Iss Pyaar ko kya naam doon?"
This is the level of their connection, so interwined and inseparable. Babies will find a way I am sure, they will resolve their conflicts and happy days are waiting for us because they are meant to function like a single unit and I just cant wait for it..."Never let me go..." ❤️ ❤️

And to you my love, my soulmate I cant thank u enough for writing this brilliant piece and dedicating it to me, I love u always and forever, and thank you to this show for giving me my virtual partner and other lovely people- a huge shoutout to my gang on twitter- Ru, Khya, Debo, Loki, Bushy, my sexy Doc, Adhi (though she has been MIA lately), Bolt, Medha and even my Bacchi. You guys are simply awesome..love u all 🤗 🤗
Edited by -MKB- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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U r an amazing writer! This is so them...who cn kiss and punch at the same time! love reading ur stuff! kudos!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How awesome was that?? Loved the turmoil.Manik will be Manik..couldn't control his emotions fir Nandini but dude the kiss was super hot but the climax was even better..he deserved that Punch..loved it Zee☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh its so good *____*

i want this to happen!i so want it to happen(minus the punch)

lololol manik always on for nandu even when he"s getting beaten by her :p oh wait that's how it all begin!
she punched him and got herself a special place i his heart(and body)!

You're a very good writer.please do write more manan fics.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This needs to happen in the show like, right now! Ghadha was soo asking for that punch😆

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