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moonstonespirit

@moonstonespirit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Hey Zee 🤗

This is so amazing!! Loved it.

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ForeverForU

@ForeverForU

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

That was one HOT OS Zee. Especially the last few lines ;)

This is so Manan.their playful teasing, Nandini being the Sherni she is and Manik the kamina is so proud of his girl-killer stuff. Pool scene looks like ur speciality, ahem. Not that I'm complaining. Continue it

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beingsamsad

@beingsamsad

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

BEAUTIFUL !

i so want this in the show !😃
LOVED IT ZEE !😳

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Shreya Pokharel

@-Loq-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

ZEEE

THis is like good...Like sooo good
😳

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yamuna

@-Cskluv-

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

omg zee this is so beautiful😳 specially the last part ☺️

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EXOL

@EXOL

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

awesome zee

i really loved the beginning where both are sitting with their legs inside water...aww i would love to see such scene onscreen...

and yes this is the nandini we want...superb writing.. ⭐️

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RoohPay

@RoohPay

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Awww Zee! this is such a wonderful Feels wala OS! ☺️

This bold nandu, i have always wanted to see it in the show! i hope we get to see the scene you have penned down in future! ☺️

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@Ribelle

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Bump.
I edited my reserved post. :)

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PrincessAshVik

@PrincessAshVik

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

I am here and I liked it😳😆
I love how you have written it. So clean yet can make me blush😳😆

The Cvs should really look at some writing here and offer us something like that instead of what they did over the last 2 weeks.

Anyway, amazing as always. And I kept my word😉😆

❤️

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BoxedIn

@BoxedIn

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Hehehe. I am glad I read this now because MaNan are FINALLY in a place where something like this can totes happen. All the PaNi in the pool is just waiting for something like this again. :P

I had fun reading this, Zee. :)

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