MaNan OS - Hot and Cold - Page 2

Thank you all so much for liking it. 😊 I really wanted to write something on MaNan intimacy but maintaining that mystery and decency. I am really glad that you appreciate that effort. Thanks.

Oh gosh.. Lovd ur naughty style.. Ur words were magic.. Describing evrythin widout sayin..😳

oye zain!pool sax!you made many fans dream come true!

Anyway loved it.you know i love the way you write.

bold nandu!that's manik's another dream come true 😆

whoa man pool mein!rida must be really happy!

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD ZEE WROTE AN OS FOR ME!!!!

ZEEE!!! *plants a soppy kiss on you* PLAANTS MORE.☺️

I just love your writing, so beautiful and classy and *YOU TEAASEE* the whole OS left me smiling so wide, thinking of manik and nandini, lol, IMAGINE THAT. UFF HOW BEAUTIFUL WAS THIS? AND YOU USED POOL!!! I CAN'T EVEN, POOL OF ALL PLACES. IT GETS TO ME OKAY! I loved the start, your clean writing and the way you describe just everything. Manik's awe at his little bundle, and I LOOVEED THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED NANDINI and his love for her was shining through. Uff the love and I loveed how Nandini wasn't shy of intimacy but so responsive and even a little coy and teasing him in return and driving him nuts, bold and innocent all at the same time, this girl uff!!

and their little banter uff, had me smiling, imagining their tease wala smiles. AND LMAAAO HE TEASED HER! and she pushed him in the pool, aww and the whole chase reminded me of the holi chase where he'd chased her and then caught her and they both slid in the pool. EEE


OMFG WHAT WAS THAT?😲 THAT HOTTT HOTTT EEE and the subtle change, and you did their sexual tension so awesomely, their hands tightening ufff☺️
AND SHE KISSES HIS NECK. OMG I LOVE NECK KISSES SOOO MUCH I JUST, SOO EROTIC!!! And she nipped and he shuddered, UFF UFF THIS LOOKS SO HOT IN MY HEAD AHEM.

He took a deep breath and started to slowly and purposefully stride towards the edge of the pool. Today, even if it killed him, he was going to teach Nandini Murthy that as much as she affected him, Manik Malhotra could turn tables on her and make her scream in pleasure anywhere he wished it.

OH MY GOD YOU CANNOT CANNOT DO THIS TO ME! THESE ARE THE HOTTEST LINES OF THE OS AND SUCH A TEASE! ZEE THIS IS NOT FAIR!!! OH MY GOD FINISH THIS FINISH, PART 2 I DEMAND PART 2😒 THESE LINES AREEE SOOO HOT AND SAAAXYYY UFF!! and against the pool, omg these are such trademark Manik lines - all smug, and hot and devious. I NEED MORE YOU'RE SUCH A TEASE.😭

I JUST LOVE THIS! I love when you write, there's something so subtle and beautiful about it and a raw undercurrent, and even soft simple moments like this, you describe them so amazingly I LOUUU. I LOVE YOUU. THIS IS SOO GOOD! HAD ME SMILING LIKE A GOOFBALL and imma gush like a fawaaara. I LOUU YO ZEEE (PLANTS MORE KISSES HERE THERE ON YOU - all platonic)

you've gotta write moreee!!!

AND THIS IS MINEE PEOPLE KAY.

KAY.

EEE

RIDA

I could write and write just because she fangirls like this

I loved this OS, it was amazing and so well written 😳
Looking forward to read more of your work. :)

MaNan pheeels *_* loved it !!

Wow... this is so good..please write again soon...

Omg that was awesome... so beautifully written Can't get enough of it. Can you please write more...