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Chapter 12--


After a peaceful beautiful night the day emerged welcoming the sun..spreading it's warmth and happiness all around and showering love on our love birds who were tangled up to each other cosily..taking in each others presence and breaths...breathing each other's breath and a smile curving their lips...pure bliss..

Nandini woke up to this blissful sight...seeing her cute boyfriend...more a soul mate..she quietly sneaked out of his arms nt waking up him covering him in blanket which had thier smell and warmth..she went for a quick bath blushing all the while remembering her previous bath or a couplish bath she had with her monster who had now turned into a human...most loving human for whom any girl would crave..bt he was just meant for her..after bath she wore his shirt and her pajamas..
She moved to kitchen for baking breakfast for her love...meanwhile manik too had woke up and after not seeing nandini around he moved downstairs to find his jaan in kitchen he smirked looking at her so beautiful yet so sexy...he moved towards sexily...

Nandini had till now nt noticed him..manik poke her back to which she turned towards him
Manik-hey!! I'm Manik Malhotro...and I think uh are sunshine...
Nandini to played along and asked sexily..tracing her finger frm head to check..
Nan-sunshine?
He brought her near to him holding her waist...
Manik-hmm sunshine..uh know as uh are like a sun this morning and shinning like a star..
Nan-bt I'm afraid for uh
Manik-afraid?
Nan-uh know I've a boyfriend...a possessive boyfriend who will turn ur life into a nightmare if comes to uh are flirting here with me..
Manik-oh!! Like tht..may be he loves uh too much..
She encircled her arms around his neck
Nan-hmmm very much
Manik-thn let tell uh I too have a girlfriend who is really cute bt won't hesitate to rip uh if she sees uh like this..
They both chuckled and kissed each other a sweet good morning kiss..
Manik-I wish ma every morning is like tys..
Nan-more thn uh and happily...
He pecked her forehead
Nan-chalo jaao have a bath and come jaldi se breakfast will be ready till thn
He kissed her check and went...
Upstairs...

Manik took out his clothes and was all ready to step in bathroom...jst when his phn rang
Cabir-manik khaa hai tu..*sounding sad/fake*
Manik-teri bhabhi ke ghr kyu?
Cabir-mtb teko ptaa hai
Manik-kya ptaa hai bol jaldi
Cabir-dhruv aur alya are on a date
Manik-woh date pe gyee hai toh tu kyun roo rha hai
Cabir-mukti rehab gai hai
Manik-haan toh achii baat hai na usme
Cabir-mei navya ko leke uske check up ke liye jaa rha hun
Manik-toh?
Cabir-toh tune madhubala ke liye koi upaas rkhaa tha kya mtb hum sab busy hai uski family bhi nhi hai aur
Manik-aur...madam ki clg toh hai na
Cabir-nhi na aaj clg ki chutti hai
Manik-WHAT aur tu abhi bol rha hai mtb I love uh so much
Cabir-I know mek gay hun pr mei apni bhabhi ko dhooka nhi de skta
Manik-seriously cabir chl koi nhi and tysm!! Bye
Cabir-enjoy
After having a quick manik malhotra being a excited malhotra to spend a day with his girl moved down..nandini welcomed him with a sweet smile and him sat on dinning tabel..telling him the menu paratha curd juice food salad then she prepared a plate for him and all he was doing was adoring her...breaking his trance
Nan-manik eat na..tume aur kuch chaiye kya..haan let me bring one more plate frm kitchen...
Whn she abt to leave manik pulled her towards him and made her sat on her lap..and where think uh going...let's have our breakfast uh sharing and all..
And had another cute session of breakfast feeding each other teasing each other loving each other...cuddling each other..

After breakfast..nandini got up frm his lap and waz about to leave saying...manik get ready for clg we have to leave...bt as usual manik stood up and pulled her closer to him...
Nan-wht now? We are getting late for clg na!
Manik-bhudhu girlfriend it's holiday today
Nan-ooo waooi let's go to cabir house thn
Manik-he has went to hospital with navya
Nan-hmm..mukti?
Manik-rehab..tracing her nape
Nan-alya??
Manik-dhruv and alya are on a date...kissing her earlobe...
Nan-hum?
Manik-straightening himself..uh know it's perfect day jst way I want it uh me together..uh will make breakfast for me..We will share it together and ab a day like I want...
Nandini came closer to him and started unbuttoning his shirt...
Nan-the way uh want it..
Manik-ah..the..way..mtlb..
Nan-hmm...
Burst out laughing
Manik gve wht know look?
Nan-Mr.i want the way..I think in ur excitement uh forget how to button ur shirt..
Manik-achaa tu ho na toh..
Nandini buttoned his shirt and lightly kissed his heart..
Nan-done!!
Manik-encircling his arms around her waist...chlo let me do some exercise now
They headed towards terrace where...
Nan-hmm I've to water the plants..
And she took the water pipe and started watering plants...manik came frm behind back hugged her keeping his chin on her shoulder...holding her hand over water pipe and another one around her waist...
Manik-and thn in my perfect day we will water plants like this..everyday
Nan-hmm tht would be actually soo cute...
After awhile manik started nuzzling her nape..thn arranged pipe in a upward direction..squeezing the pipe mouth...making a chotu si rain for them..thn he held her waist tightly and twirled her around...nandini faced him..and to his surprise kissed him as lightly as possible...under their rain...after breaking the kiss both were blushing...
Nan-go carry ur exercise..
Manik took off his shirt and after some stretching started push ups...nandini came frm behind and sat on his back..hugging him..
Nan-now this too will be a part of our perfect day..
Manik-ur wish is my command...
After exercise session they moved to her bedroom both were quite wet
Manik-I think we should change..
Nan-hmm uh go in bathroom I'll change here
Manik-ek sath...
Nan-manik!! Pushed him inside...
After changing fastly nandu moved downstairs while manik was still in..nandini after a while started shouting frm downstairs...manik!! Manik...!!...hearing it he too rushed down...
Manik-kya huaa nandini..what happened?
Nan-see it's my favourite movie...I love it
Manik-uh bhudhu uh scared me..
Nan-sorry na..now come and let's watch it..
Manik-seriously!!!
Nan-plz na uh remember our day it is..*cute pout*
And manik agreed...they both were sitting on sofa seeing the movie...where she was watching movie and he was seeing her..she giving all cute looks all awws expression...
Manik-uh really tys movie soo much?
Nan-movie toh bhaahna hai look at the actor he so cute na!!
Manik-*jealousy strikes* yeh aur cute kuch bhi mtlb
Nan-kuch bhi mtb kya kuch bhi he is shooo cute aww look at him na
Manik-kya look at him naak dekho uski pakodee jessi
Nan-huh!! See his smile shoo sweet...
Manik-huh!!
Nan-uh know I toh wanted to marry him!!
Manik-marry seriously iss ghadde se
Nan-awww manik malhotra is jealous...
Manik-huh jealous iss loser se kuch bhi
Nan-noo noo uh are jealous..poking him on his waist...
Manik-I'm not!!!
And she started ticking him ranting uh are jealous uh are jealous to which manik pinned her on sofa and kissed her senseless.. bitting her lower lip..suckin it..breaking the kiss
Manik-I'm nt as uh belong to me humesha se
Nandini kissed him sweetly
Nan-humesha...



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just the perfect couple
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Chapter 13


Romance was on full swing on carpet the passionate kiss was followed by love bites...jsr thn ding...dong...the bell rang..bt the couple was too lost in their smooch...and again ding..dong...nandini broke the kiss breathing heavily..
Nan-I think someone's there on door...get up frm me..
Manik-ahhh yeh kon hai abb..
They both got up straightening themselves...manik went and opened the door...
Manik-who is it?...it was cabir and navya...
Cabir-SURPRISE...saalle tuje puri raat km padi thi kya..koi itna tym lgata hai kya..ab let us in...
Manik-huh!! Seriously tum log kya kr rhe ho idhr?
Navya-woh kya hai na nandini ke official boyfriend woh tumhari official girlfriend honne se phele humari official best friend hai...
Manik-aur tum bhul rhi ho mei tumhara official rakshash hunn...*evil glare*
Navya ran inside and stood by nandini...
Navya-Manik Malhotra tumhare pass agr gaddi bangla paisse hai toh humare pass nandu hai..
Nandini-navya sorry pr mei bhi manik ki hi hun..smirking at manik
Manik took her in a back hug...
Manik-aur kuch bolna hai..
Navya-hawww nandu aessa na..
Cabir-uh forgot navya nandini used to be a good girl..
Manik-and now she is my girl..pecking her cheek..
Cabir-toh uh know manik malhotra ka asr hai yeh madhubala samjaa kroo..
Navya-*faking tears*thik hai jee lenge hum..iss gumm ko bhi pee lenge hum...
Mananbir together...*madhubala*
Nan-achaa abb woh chodo how was ur checkup...
Navya-first class
*all settled on couch...cabir navya on respective one sitter's...While nandini sat on big one with manik on her lap*
Cabir-nandu muje toh darr lag rha hai...
Manik-*playing with nandinis hands which were placed on his heart*darr the great cabir dawan ko darr really kyun bhalla??
Cabir-abb romeo soch agr yeh madhubala ka baby uspe gyaa toh mere ghr pe daily drama hogga
Navya started hitting him with pillows.
Nan-*chuckled*aree cabir babies are soo cute..
Cabir-*rescuing himself frm navya*nandini tumhari soch aur manik ke iradde dekh ke toh confirm hai navya ko baby hi hogga aur tumharre BABIES...
Nandini blushed and looked down landing her graze on manik and thus making her more blush..
Manik-haan fir bachee tuje cabir chachu bolenge actually uh know ceebiirr chaaccchu uh know like babyish language...
Cabir-haan aur kuch...
Manik-fir woh tere shoulder pe khelenge like wht they call it ghodda ghodda fir tu unhe bhoot saari stories sunayega...jst imagine uh will have so much of fun dude..
Cabir-salle teri love story mei meri hi bajni hai mtlb
Nandini-mtlb?
Cabir-mtlb bhabhi phele aapki love story mei..mei driver banna jutta bana..love guru banna..aur aap ke sakshat boyfriend manik Malhotra ne muje baby sitter or shld we call it muje nanny banne ne ki futher planning kr rkhi hai :/
Nan-jo bhi ho mere boyfriend ko kuch mt bolo..*cupping his checks*
Navya-ooohooo itna pyaar*-*
Nan-pyaar se bhi zada..
Manik made a cute pout..and nandini jst bent down bringing her cheek close to him..letting him kiss her cheek with his cute pout..
Cabir-navya aankhe band krlo warna tumhara bachaa madhubala banne na banne manik Malhotra bann gya toh mera kya hogga...
Navya-tumhara chodo sochoo mera kya hoga sochoo mere bacha humme hi darayega
Manik-hogya tum donno ka...
*after some more chit chatting and of course leg pulling the door bel again rang*


Manik-ab kon hai..
Nan-wait I'll check..get up..
Manik-no!!
Nan-manik...
Cabir-wait I'll see...
Manik-better*putting nandinis one hand in his hairs and started playing with other*
Cabir opened the door jst to welcome fab3 with some drinks and food...
Mukti-woh tu zinda hai..entering in..
Cabir-mtlb?
Alya-mtlv humme laga abhi tk manik would have killed uh..
Navya-*hugging mukti*woh kyun?
Dhruv-to disturb him with nandini...
Mukti-bt manik malhotra being manik malhotra abhi bhi romance kr rha hai mtlb look at him..
Manik-kya hai abb tuje..
Mukti-kya hai muje..navya yeh kb se aesse nandu ke lap pe soya hai..?
Navya-jab se hum aaye tab se..
Cabir-tab se kya..in fact isne toh nandini ko uth ne bhi nhi diya to open the door..
Mukti-see I told uh..
Manik-toh sleeping in my girlfriend's lap tera kya...
Mukti-manik uth tu..
Manik-woh kyun?
Mukti-uth na...
*manik Getting up*
Manik-kya hai??
Mukti-tysm*jumping on nandinis lap and showing tongue to him*
Cabir-ooo bhai beta tu toh gai..
Mukti-woh kyu?
Alya-because uh urself have entered lions dean..
*manik glaring at mukti angrily*
Manik-mukti uth varna..
Mukti-varna kya varna..wait nandini will decide...nandu mei sooun na idhr..
Nandini-of course mukti *winking at maink*
Manik all can doo was glaring angrily at his best friends and girlfriend while they were bussy at chit chatting...
Alya-I'm hungry now..
Dhruv-yaa we totally forgot we had brought pizzas for all..bt I think abb woh thandde hogye hogge..
Nandini-wait I'll put them in oven..mukti now uh have to get up
mukti-okay...
Nandini left for kitchen...
Manik glared at mukti saying tuje toh aake dekhta hun and ran behind nandini...While rest chuckled at his kiddish behaviour...
*inside kitchen*

Nandini put the pizzas in oven setting up it..and turned jst to be welcomed by manik..hmm his lips on her...she was shocked bt soon responded back..putting her hand on his chest...while manik squeezed her waist pulling her on him..which made her moan..the kiss grew intense nandini was loosing her control on her knees...sensing it manik squeezed her waist more tightly and lifted her..making her sit on kitchen slp..he broke the kiss biting her lower lip..thn he moved down to her neck..giving her red love bite...jst thn the oven bell rang

He pulled back resting his forehead on hers..

Manik-this is for messing with me...



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