manan ff couplish ON HOLD :( - Page 7

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Wonderful update...Nandhu is do cute...loved hiw understanding he was...terric job writing this, please don't apologize...

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Chapter 10-
After dropping nandini at her home and going at his home to freshen he came back to pick her up for clg
*Murthys*
Manik knocks at door chachi opens the door
Manik-hello chachi
Chachi-haaye Manik uh are on time
Manik-mtlb?
Chachi-aree andhr too aao..I mean i knew tum aaoge nandu ko lenne
Manik-pr meine toh usko kuch nhi bola tha
Chachi-aree chachi hun mei sab janti hun aur yeh bhi janti hun ki inhaa aane ke jldi tumne nashta bhi nhi kiya hoga so tumhara nashta ready hai aaj tumhare punjabi spl hai
Manik-waoo chachi punjabi mtb waoo
Chachi-haan janti hun nandu bhi mere pass punjabi sikh rhi hai and vesse hum punjabiyoo ki baat hi alg hotti hai hai na
Manik-sahi khaa but chachi hum donno ko hi south Indian tadka bhaa gya hai *smirking*
Chachi-badmaash chl khaa lo abb
Meanwhile nandini was enjoying tys scenario frm stairs she too joined them then
After breakfast+leg pulling they bid bye to chachi and went for clg
*in car*
Manik-babu something is missing uh know
Nan-I too feel it manik something is missing *blushing*
Manik-achaa toh kya missing hai??
Nandini-tys she peaked on his lips bt he being he caught and gave her a breathless kiss turned smooch
Both were flushed now and breathing heavily the windows were turned watery with their heavy breaths
Manik-now I can be in ma senses at least for quatre of the day
Nandini blushed and hitted him on shoulder manik let's go now
Manik-hmm wait a second actually tys is how it supposed to be bt uh distracted me saying tys his got a bunch of flowers frm back seat and gave her
Nandini blushingly accepted it
And then they went college
*college canteen*
Fab4 seating and chatting there whn they noticed their very own romeo-juliet walking in the canteen holding hands blushing at the while forgetting the world behind leaving all awestruck ppl wid some jealous asses behind they reached to them manik holded the chair for nandini and thn settled beside her
Mukti-yaar nandu tys is not fair
Nan-confused wht?
Mukti-aree after yesterday's maniks child like behaviour I thought for such good punishment for him bt see now uh are all lovestruck
Nandini-hehe it's okay Mukti uh can still give me ur suggestions who knows kab kaam aajya
Mukti-soo listen whenever manik asks uh for kiss na jst forward him the kiss wala emoji
Everyone breaks into laughter leaving nandini blushing and manik annoyed
Manik-keeping his chin in nandini shoulder mukti uh hate me mtlb
Mukti-mtlb?
Manik-uh don't if tht happens I won't able to breath and I'll die
Cabir-mtlb uh need to be breathless to breath
Manik-exactly
Nan-manik chup na
Manik-wht chup na giving her kiss on cheek
Cabir-manik baba uh know wht
Manik-wht?
Cabir-college college baat chli hai ptaa chala hai ki manik nandini ke pyaar mei romeo banna hai
Manik-Cabir lyk really
Cabir-*smirking* bad one I know
Alya-guys let's go out na ma place party
Cabir-Alya is it ur 10 day anniversary
Alya-manik plz kill him
Manik-happily
Mukti-yeh khabardaar mere bhai ko haath lagaya toh
Dhruv-okay okay let's go na now
Alya-yaah
Dhruv-after uh ma princess
Mukti-in ka bhi shuru hogya
Cabir-chl bhehn chl hum jeelenge
And they drove to alyas place dhrulya on dhruvs bike mukti cabir on front seats of maniks and manan at back manik was sleeping on her shoulder holding her hand while cabir all the way was ranting how he had become a driver in manik babas love story...they stopped at the saxena mansion gate from windows nandini saw a beautiful playing park
Nandini came out followed by all
Nandini-that's such cute park
Manik looked at the direction and was struck memory struck nt only him bt whole fab5 seeing their reaction nandini asked wht happened
Alya-actually nandini our whole vacation in childhood were spend here in tys park
Dhruv-bt now growing we actually didn't realised whn we left it back
Manik-right buddy
Mukti-uh know our day is used to start here and end here itself
Cabir-I toh used to take ma naps below tht swings and tys mukti would swing above me
Nan-so wht we waiting for let's go inside na
Alya-really mtlb abhi??
Nan-haan I waana go their plz
Manik-okay let's relive our childhood thn guys
Mukti-in fab5 style
Cabir-chalooo
They entered the park and within no tym girls were on swings lyk automatically
Cabir-swing seriously?
Girls in union-Because Girls like to swing
And they started swinging ranting who goes more up
Manik was mesmerising nandini as she was looking simply tooo adorable he went behind her and started pushing her back lightly making her swing higher Dhruv also joined alya and cabir accompanied mukti
Girls were loving it to fullest and wid the support of her love of life nandini won and they step up frm swings tired...just then cabir stood up on muktis swing jumping on it
Mukti-cabir tu pagal hogya hai kya??
Manik-he is always out of his mind
Cabir-aree uh only said na relive ur childhood so tys was ma fantasy to break tys swing bt ye abhi bhi nhi tuth rha
Nan-cabir plz come down now
Cabir-as uh sae bhabhijaan
Thn manruv saw their sea-soo and raced till it grabbing one seat at each side there were two seats on both sides
Mukti-waoo yeah abhi tak same hai
Cabir-actually nandini and alya goo and join them na
And grls too joined their man on their sides and mukti cabir were taking all possible selfies with them
They had a grt tym there ...just thn manik noticed something and said nandini come wid me
Nan-where manik?
Manik-come na
She followed him he brought her near some stairs and asked hef to climb up and he too followed hed it was slide ride
Manik-ready for the ride Ms.Murty
Nan-okay so let's go
Manik-bt remember jst sit here first..he made her sit then put his legs both on her side holded hee back hugging and then
Manik-one two three here we go
They rode on slide as if it's a roller coaster with whole excitement
Fab4 were bussy thinking how can to make romance every where soo adorably
All were tired now and they jst slept down on grass laughing their hearts out...
They were there like tys for sometime whn nandini received chachis call
Chachi-nandu tu khaa hai??
Nan-chachi mei frnds ke sath hun
Chachi-achaa sun tu jaldi se ghr aaja na
Nan-kyun chachi sab thik hai na
Chachi-tu ghr aaja mei batati hun
She hang up the call
Manik-kya huaa everything fyn??
Nan-pata nhi chachi has called me home right now
Manik-chlo let's go thn
Cabir-ahhh manik we will also come agr kuch serious huaa toh
Manik-okay chalo
They reached nandinis place in no tym
Nan-chachi sab thik hai na
Chachi-haan nandu sab thik itni baddi army lekke aagai tu
Manik-woo chachi we thought ki kuch urgent hoga so hum aagye
Chachi-urgent toh hai manik aur achaa huaa tum sab aagye
Manik-kya baat hai chachi??
Chachi-manik woh na hum log mtlb mei murty jee aur rishab bangalore jaa rhe amms ke kisi close student ki shaddi hai toh
Nan-aur mei??
Chachi-beta tume clg jaana hoga na
Nan-pr chachi
Chachi-no par var chl dekh humari packing bhi hogai hai
Nan-packing hogai mtlb??
Chachi-nandu lst tickets available abhi ki hai nxt 2 weeks yaa toh tickets available nhi hai ya kuch strike hai
Nan-pr chachi
Chachi-bazz dekh chacha rishb bhahr taxi bhi lekke aagye hai
Nan-chachi aap bhi na
Chachi-toh nandu ki army take care of her okay??
Fab5-of course we will
Cabir-chachi army kyun humara captain hi khafi hai
Chachi-usse toh khenne ke zarurat hi nhi hai hai na manik
Manik-obviously chachi
Wid tys all bid their byes to chachi chach and rishab
Cabir-hmmm ab kyaa kree I'm too hungry
Dhruv-let's order some pizzas
Cabir-order nhi ek kaam krte hai I'll go and get navya uska bhi khanna nhi hua hoga and on way will get all food stuff whts sae??
Mukti-humm and bring some movie's cds na
Alya-yaa get ur lappy too
Cabir-okay chl I'll be back
Mukti-ruk I'll alsi come tu ek sath itna kaam nhi kr payega uh need ur partner
Cabir-yeah chl let's go
And cabir mukti left
Dhruv-buddy I and alya will get some fresh air and come.
Manik-*smirking* yeh yeh all fresh air is urs
Dhrulya too left
Manik went to nandini who was standing near sofa and back hugged hee
Manik-they will be back soon sweetheart..aur mei hun na inhaa
Nandini turned around and hugged him tightly
Nan-I know manik tum ho aur humesha rhoge mere pasz mere sath
Manik-ab kya kru mei uh remember uh are ma breath
Nan-same way uh are mine
Manik-which reminds me I'm lack of breaths now subhe se bhoot tym hogya see sham hogai
Nan-manik uh na
Manik-mei na coming closer
Nan-uh na more closer
Manik-mei na more and more closer
Nan-can never catch me..and she ran away
Manik ran behind her..after some tym he caught her and by default they were now on sofa manik being above nandini
Manik-see now uh made me run so much ab penalty bhi bhrni padegi tumhe..With tys he sucked her lips harder thn ever still making her asking for more they were fully dependable on kiss sucking each other's lips their tongues were fighting sweetly yet wid whole passion they broke the kiss whn they were out of breath bt still nt left each other manik swiftly step down frm sofa and lay down on floor nandini laid upon him now sucking his neck manik tilted her chin up and kissed her again the passion was more now his hand went under her top and was near her breast now..and slowly he pressed it with giving all pleasure to her and she moaned inside his mouth...right thn they heard doorbell whick made them broke their kiss looking deep into each other's eyes manik peaked her lips softly and said nandini uh driving me out of ma senses..before she can sae something doorbell rang again...hearing it straightening their self they moved towards door and opened it was fab4 wid navya
Cabir-hogya tumhara??
Manik-wht??
Cabir-bhai tu rehne de kb se khdde hai bhahr
Mukti-chod na its okay can't uh see how flushed they are we missed so much action re
Manan were blushing like anything remembering thier small little business
Cabir-ab toh tumhe aur bhi bhuk lgi hogi na
Navya-inka ptta nhi hume bhoot bhuk lgi hai toh chle andr
Dhrulya-yaa chloo
Mukti-wesse tum donno khaa the
Cabir-fresh air right dhruv
Dhrulya tiot blushed
Navya- hai mata ratani yeh pyaar ke mariz
Mukti-mariz wht??
Cabir-nothing ignore
Navya-tum toh chup hi rho
Cabir-okay let's do one thing I'll connect the movie thn switch off the lights mei navya mukti mukti dekhte dekhte will enjoy our pizza's and uh both pyaar ke "mariz" decide movie dekhte dekhte pizza khanna hai ya ek dusre ko
Manik-cabir kbhi toh chup rha kr
With they setup whole room and thn cabir sat on floor wid mukti sleeping on his lap navya beside him at a distance dhrulya cuddled up
On sofa it was manan wid manik and nandini laying on his chest
Manik-wesse cabir konsi movie hai?
Cabir-with so much love around me mtlb upr neeche I choosed a romantic movei
Manik-achaa itna bada dil bol na konsi hai?
Cabir-50 shades of grey..controlling his laughter..mukti too pinched him
Manik-cabir tu pagal hai kya
Nan-kyun kya huaa
Cabir-nothing bhabhi enjoy the movie and manik tu kyun tension le rha I'm sure tum dono movie kam dekhoge aur apni movie zada banaoge upr
Navya-pr grey ke 50 shade kesse ho skte hai wesse hume toh lal clr hi pasand hau
Cabir-meri pyaari bkack and white madhubala muh band rk ke enjoy the movie plz
They were watching it whn suddenly the scenes turned bold affecting navya to close her eyes and nandini to turn red..sensing it manik holded her tightly making her calm down bt it was affecting him too turning him on..nandini started tangling their fingers manik Brought their hands near his lips and kissed it softly thn he made her face him and thn leaning closer to her started nuzzling her neck nandini in response tighten her grip on his hand and let a moan out soflty..and as usual cabir broke their moment saying
Cabir-okay ppl I'm switching on lights toh plz beware we three innocent souls don't won't to caught uh ppl
Listening tys manan straighten themselves
Mukti-it was such a good day yaar
Navya-hume toh neend aarhi hai ab
Alya-even me too
Manik-toh chlo let's leave
Dhruv-tu bhi??
Manik-I've some work
Nandini was sad listening it bt then plastering a fake smile bid them off
Nandini was really sad after manik left her so unexpectedly...she cleaned her house and prepared her self for a bath taking her towel she was about to step in washroom whn she heard her door bell rang she went down and opened the door slowly
She was surprised to see manik wid a bag and some other stuff
He entered and peaked her handling her the box of ice-cream
Nan-yeh kya hai?
Manik-ooo I left uh unexpectedly soo uske liye ice-cream
Nan-bt uh had some work na?
Manik-I went to bring ma bag
Nan-bag??
Manik-ab chacha chachi will return around 2 weeks so I need ma some stuff to stay wid uh na
Nan-stay wid me?
Manik-obviously and plz no arguments chalo ab
Nan-I rest my case Mr . boyfriend


Okay sorry for late update was nt well tysm for waiting and one thing it takes lots of hard work to update even a small chapter toh plz comment at least 2% in comparison to update nt only here bt on all ffs ss' s and for me a long update is nt adding a song or a big disruptions for me it's lots of sceens so hope uh like it till thn keep liking and commenting
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wow lovely update

Ha long update n a nice one.
I loved it manan romance,fab5 reviving their childhood memories n leg pulling.continue soon u wrote it very well

Gr8 update cont soon with manan more romance
And i loved todays update
Update soon

Awww this was so sweet