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Chapter 11
Murty house
Manik-wesse wht were uh doing?
Nan-jst was going to take bath
Manik-bath? Abhi?
Nan-if uh remember we had a exhausted day today?
Manik-hmmm really exhausted *stretching his arms*chalo let's have bath *picking up her in his arms*
Nan-wht uh doing Manik? And let's have mtlb?
Manik-tume sachi samaj nhi aaya ya uh acting hun? Mtlb a couplish bath
Nan-koi kabhi tumse jeeta hai tightening her hold around his neck...
Manik-tum toh jeet jaati hoo bt I think uh too want it *wink*
Nan-manik...*hitting him*
Manik-hmm stop stop aur else we will fall
She stopped hitting him...
Manik-babu look at me...
Nandiini raised her head and manik stole the moment kissing her senseless while opening her bedroom door swiftly...they were kissing passionately till they reached her bathroom..manik made her sat on bathroom slap...breaking the kiss and rested their foreheads together...they remained tht way inhaling each other's breath...manik brought his head down kissing her neck nuzzling it sucking it giving sweet love bites...where as nandini hold his collar tightly moaning and sucking his earlobe...manik again started kissing her widely while taking her top out she too started unbuttoing his shirt replying back equally to his kiss...breaking the kiss nandini started kissing his chest giving love bites...manik was enjoying his wild girlfriend...he carried her under shower..both were exhausted by now...manik made her turn now her back was facing his front..manik bend down kissing her back..sucking each water drop frm her body moving down he reached the hook of her bra...and took her name as for asking her permission to which she replied by making his hold on waist tight..manik again bend down and gave a love bite above her hook and slightly removed it...to which nandini turned down facing him and hugged him tight...now they were skin to skin inhaling each other manik kissed her neck again bringing her hairs at one side..and again carried her out to the slap made her sat there again resting their foreheads together...
Manik-so my jaan how was the couplish bath..
Nan-*bitting her inner checks*...blushed it was too much for her to even reply..bt managed to say
Nan-let's go now
Manik-nah I've to dry uh now..saying it he bend down kissing her frm neck to collar bone...and finally reached her boob..and without waiting started sucking it..kissing it biting it..While palming the other one more lyk squashing it..while all nandini could do was moan in pleasure ..playing with his hair's all the while...after turning hed both boobs red..manik took the towel and wrap it around her to her surprise...
Nan-manik..
Manik-babu I know we can be steady enough for tys..uh are already exhausted and ws have a life for it I want uh enjoy each stage fully..
Nan-hmm I love you
Manik-one step always more thn uh..
He made her wear his shirt and changed himself into tracks and vest..
They both made themselves comfortable on her bed...While manik on bed and nandini on his chest intertwining their finger..admiring the sky filled with star's and taking each other's presence which was more thn enough for them..
MANIK -I wish for an eternity like tys having uh in my arms under the sky..and life's perfect
Nan-more thn perfect...*kissing his hand*
Manik-hmm actually I want something more?
Nan-wht more?
Manik-hmm like a small house which will be home with uh the peace of having uh around will make it heaven...cutting him in between
Nan-and I want a puff it tht home...
Manik-hmm and wht will uh name it?
Nan-hmm smurfy..*-*
Manik-*chuckling* hmm bt I also want our babies cute like uh ^-^
Nan-achaaa aur kuch?*blushing*
Manik-isse jyada kuch manguga toh it will be really selfish
Nan-hehe bt I want
Manik-kya?
Nan-tht my every morning starts frm uh and end with uh jusy beside uh *snuggling in his chest*
Manik-humeshaa
Nan-humeshaa
And they kissed each other under the blanket going all senseless and drifting to sleep after a little cozy make out leaving their upper bodies naked under blanket love bites had replaced their clothes now...and they slept in each others arms never wanting to let it go...


Note-okay I know I'm damn late..was nt well..and I think I'm nt getting nt good response too which discharge me to write...anyways enjoy...
Love-star

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Awesome update dea. ...

Beautiful awesome sensuous update

Continue soon and thanks for pm