manan ff couplish ON HOLD :( - Page 11

awesome update

awesome update dea...

Aww so cute really loved it. Manan moments were awesome

Don't be sad I still read your story and totally amazing it is so keep it up and continue soon will be waiting for more

Heyy... AWSOME update... 👏
I loved it... ❤️ ❤️
Manan scene's were tooo cute... ⭐️
Whn dey 2 were feeding each oder was tooo adorable...
n d oder was hot... bt 18+ kuch nahi tha soo u don need to write...
Waiting fr d nxt part!!
Update soon!!
I really love yut story... ❤️
N don snd a pm fr dis update cauae I already read! :PYeah yeah!! My 150th post on yur ff!! 😃

Haha Cabir marega ek din pka!!
And MaNan were so Cuteee!
Lovely update ❤️

Chapter 15


Dhrulya and mukti left..
Manik opened the passenger seat gate for his jaan..
Cabir-manik itna pyaar tu mere liye gate khol rha hai..pagle rulayega kya...
Manik-tu peetenga na aaj *glaring at him*
Navya-kyun pange le rhe ho tum jalo bhet jaoo peeche chup chap...pulling him inside backseat...
Manik-ahemm ahemm..*indicating passenger saet to nandini*..nandini came towards him...stood by her seat..
Nan-Manik idhr aaoo..
He bend towards her..and she sweetly peaked him on cheeks...
Cabir-inkaa na khatam nhi hogga aaj..chalo jaldi warna mukti ka tumhe patta hai *ranting frm back seat*
Manik blushingly closef her seat door and took the driver seat..


Soon they reached to beach travelling a journey where manik was not ready to leave nandinis hand at any cost so wht if he had to suffer frm all teasing of cabir and navya...
*Beach*
Mukti-finally uh guys reached itni der rasta bhul gye the kya?
Cabir-mukti tu bhul gai hum manik ke sath the aur manik nandini ke sath read between the lines...
Mukti-seriously!!
Dhruv-chodo na chaloo let's enjoy now..

All moved towards beach they took place by seashore...manik was back hugging nandini and sitting..alya was resting on dhruvs shoulder...mukti was on cabirs shoulder...and navya on muktis shoulder...there was completed silence..a silence of peace love and beauty...
Nan-it's soo beautiful...
Manik-uh know I always visit this place bt today ur presence in my arms is making it more beautiful...
Nan-ur presence manik it's ur presence which can turn my any nightmare into this peaceful dream..
Manik-I love uh..
Nandini took his hand and drool IU on his palm and kissed it lightly...manik jst tightened his grip on her..
Alya-hey look candy flouse...let's go na
Mukti-chalo..
Navya-hum bhi aarhe hai..
They moved towards candyfloss vendor...they all took one-one candyfloss...and started munching...nandini saw few kids there..
Nan-uh too want it?
Kid-yes..bt we don't have money..actually we 5 came here to celebrate our victory today..bt we are now running out of money...
Nan-koi nhi here uh go..she asked the vendor for 5 candyfloss..bt he was at short on one..she without any hesitation added her on it and gave the kids
All were amazed by her cuteness...
Navya-ab tum kya khaogi?
Manik- we are sharing our life together toh candyfloss kya chees hai..and the couple shared thier another cute moment with candyfloss...
All again let a aww out thn..
Cabir-chalo let's click some pics na..
Mukti-yeah...
All clicked groupies thn alya dhruv posed together followed by mukti and navya who copying dhruv alya and teasing them...manik also started posing with nandini kissing her cheeks back hugging her..going on knee's as proposing her..nandini was jst blushing thn the kids again came towards them and started making bubblels with soap water on nandini making her more angelic...all were mesmerised seeing her manik was jst staring at her whn a kid came towards nandini..
Kid-hello beautiful...
Nan-hey cutie..
Kid-taking a rose out frm backside and said will uh marry me??*puppy face*
All started laughing nandini was confused...manik was glaring at the kid..
Cabir-abey baches ko bhi ghurega..
Mukti-seriously bachhee se bhi competition *controlling her giggels*
Nan-par aap toh bhoot chotte ho..
Kid-toh mere badde honne tak will uh be my girlfriend...
Manik-*coming in between* oh hello woh phele se meri girlfriend hai
Kid-aapki chii she is like an angel and uh kadoos uncle
Cabir-kadoos uncle lol..
Another little girl enters seen
Girl-hawww how dare uh call him khadoos uncle he soo handsome...
Manik-aww uh are too like a Princess...kissing hef cheek...
Girl-let him marrg ur girlfriend I'll marry uh..
Fab4 and navya were shocked...
Nan-haan thik hai thn I'll marry uh cutie..
Boy-really!!
Nan-really..kissing him in his cheek..
Manik-nandini...
Nan-manik...
And they both burst out laughing...
Manik-achaa what's ur name?
Girl-I'm kavya
Boy-I'm aarav
Nan-okay kavya and aarav aap log apne frnds ke sath akele ho?
Boy-yes!!
Manik-toh ghr nhi jaana..
Kavya-shit!! Aarav jaldi chl warna no chocolates...
And the kids jst rushed out of seen leaving everyone smiling behind...
Nan-kitna cute ladka tha!!
Manik-cute...
Cabir-chal ab jalna band kr...
Mukti-how about a race?
Alya-race??
Mukti-aree till the seashore com on.
Cabir-okay bt bt..navya uh will be the refree..
Nanvya-thik hai..
All took the positions..
Nanvya-chalo 1..2..3..go!!!
All zoomed towards shore where as manik picked nandini in arms and ran..
Nan-manik!!
And to destiny he came first...
Mukti-mtlb race mei bhi romance...
Manik-romance kya romance I had to win and to win I need my lucky charm na..*winking at nandini and she blushed*
Alya-hmm quite lucky hun..
Cabir-chalo chalte hai ab..

And gang headed towards thier car's jsr whn..

Nan-woh wht a beautiful church*looking at the white marbel beautiful church across the road*
Alya-isn't it gorgee?
Nan-indeed it is *-*manik let's go na...
Manik-of course jaan chalo
Cabir-nhi..nhi..ek min tu aur church..jayega
Manik-kyun nhi jaa skta?
Mukti-jaa toh skta hai..pr!
Manik-pr??
Alya-uh never came with us..
Cabir-aree alya it's pyaar humme kis mod pr le aaya yeh dil karre haaye ab koi toh bataya ab kya hogga...
Manik-tu apna radio band kar warna abhi koi *bheek*de ke chala jayenga...chodo isse chlo..
They all went towards church and went inside church...dhurlya lighten the candel followed by manan..and thn mukti cabir and navya...
Manan were standing infornt of jeasus statue holding hands where nandini was silently making her prayers to keep her small family always happy and manik was admiring her whn cabir came infront of them..
Cabir-so Mr.malhota repeat after me..I manik malhotra take miss nandini murthy...
Manik-looking shockingly at him bt repeated his words "I manik malhotra take miss nandini murthy"
Cabir-as my lawfully weded wife in happiness and sorrow...*manik repeated*
Cabir-in health and sick..
Manik-in health and sick
Cabir-rich and misery
Manik-rich and misery
Cabir-forever
Manik-forever...humesha..
Mukti came in front and asked nandini to repeat same..she happily did the same...
Both were having an intense eyelock..
Alya-kiss the bride bhudhu
Manik moved towards her resulting nandini to widen her eyes bt he jst cutely kissed hed nose tip..nandini too tip toed and kissed him near his ears saying...
Nan-I love you
Manik-I love you too..
Thn the gang left for parking...
*parking*
Manik-ek min I'll be back..and he rushed inside the church again..
Cabir-yeh khaa gya..
Nan-ek min I'll be back..going outside the church gate.
Mukti-technically tumhe andar jaana chiye to complete ur incomplete kiss..
Nan-mukti..going outside..

Soon both were back smiling widely...
Cabir-chalo tumlog aagye toh niklte hai..
Alya-hmm dhruv cabir navya mukti chalo I'll drop uh let the newly weded enjoy *winking at manan*
Manan blushed...



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crazygirl-this one for uh I'm so so so sorry..was sending pms to all and waited for the one for uh congratulating uh for ur post 150 bt my bad luck again tht 10 pms thing I hate it so sooo much ahhh damn frustrated sorry babe..bt still congratulations hehe and thank you so much for ur lovable comments :) :*

Wow fab update dea. ..

Superb amazing beautiful update

Manan moments were excellent as expected

Loved the church wedding part of manan

No wonder what they both did one went inside and other outside

Continue soon and thanks for pm

And again such a cute update for the cutest story ! I liked the wedding part the most ! It was very very sweet ! Keep up the good work ! :*