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Arshirox97

@Arshirox97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Your justifications are quite valid! I agree with them.
Now waiting for the nxt update!

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Suprabha

@shaanmaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#212

In my point of view i don't need dis justification becoze i read everyone's ff or os nd don't find any mistake... I just love their writing skills nd appreciate their hard work u r one of them so i want u 2 continue with ur ff its really amazing. But i understand some people need justification ... Love u And update soon

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Originally posted by: shaanmaan
In my point of view i don't need dis justification becoze i read everyone's ff or os nd don't find any mistake... I just love their writing skills nd appreciate their hard work u r one of them so i want u 2 continue with ur ff its really amazing. But i understand some people need justification ... Love u And update soon

Awww thnx honey :) luv u 2 :)

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Angel

@Endurance

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

This part was very nicely penned ... It didn't go OTT ... it was suble and sweet ... but i just want the transition to be little slow ,it will add an extra flavour ..

really liked this part .. totally enjoyed it ..

update soon...

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AAVANI

@vani86

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Posted: 10 years ago

#215

i totally agree with ur points...!!!
u r an awesome writer...the characters r ur own kids...so i don't think u should justify...
this is totally my opinion...!!!

Edited by aavani - 10 years ago

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badkulanamika

@badkulanamika

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

its awesome

finally they start to understand each other

n dance sequence is good

u r very good writer👏

continue soon

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DWJensenackles

@DWJensenackles

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Posted: 10 years ago

#217

Thanks for the justifications!

I really love your story! Do continue soon :)

Loads and loads of love, Pari 😊

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Ayesha Nazrat

@musicialtie

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

u r awesome. awesome parts. superb. .
really in love with ur ff. .

its your imagination... u r the creative head of ths ff. so be jhijak without any explanation write and create what you want to.