Originally posted by: AQss
I love this story more than any story u wrote ab tak ,, so beautiful but there are many loopholes arghhh and i dont like it ,, i knw its an old story but still i want to comment.. i m engineering student but still i knw when someone caught by a bullet and especially in between the ribs and the ribss are fractured then there is no maai ka laal exist who can just woke up and running through the corridors no matter how much he or she in love ,,, coz bullet cause an immense pain plus u can hardly breath and here is our vampire nandani who can fight with doctor and run and hide behind the manik especially when she has a broken rib,, and then the most ridiculous was the romantic night.., the most idiotic act a mother can do for her childrn and moreover children are happy to anticipate.. manik seemed hell foolish and dumb .. wow like seriously how can a couple make a love when one of them had bullet just a day before and has a fracture rib ,,, and then hillarious part has come ,, manik went to london for four days and nandani is behaving all sick and puppy type well that was putting our (readers) nerves still its ok she loves him a lot but how can she possibly wear sarhi and make different kind of dishes when she have a wound of broken rib 6 days ago ,,, Writer seriously i was ignoring all but i just couldnt restrain myself to give my genuine feedback.. i mean its like whenever we want we can hurt nandani by startling her wound and when ever we want we can just make her jumping in joy and running around and fighting and tickled (as anger make ur organs stretch) ignoring the fact that she has wound,,,
the actual patient of bullet causing are never discharged in 2 days they discharge in weeks and they mostly kept on sedatives,, not like nandani who can run in the room just to avoid injections.. and she was hell weak when she woke up and nyonika just couldnt control her i mean really neyonika is a healthy tall perfect women who cant control small injured tiny nandani ,,, and yess too much songs u r adding
well i will rap it up ,, i hope u got my point that what i actually wanna say,, i knw m little blunt but no offense plz..
on the other hand i like ur story becoz it was pure natural at the start ,, like not much bakwaas drama, silly fights and revenge thing,, its normal just like the life we live every day ,, husband wife eventually fall in love despite the way they got together and its natural ,, but its become unnatural now ,, 2nd i just read 22 updates ,, keep it up writer i m following ur other stories as well ,, :)
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